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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank you so much for the comments........🤗Love read each and everyone of them...... Looking forward to reading them.......

Sorry guys for the delay but will write a marathon again to wrap this up....I am planning to wrap it up in 3 more parts ...next part tommorow.....😊

Chapter 17 -A

Reading the letter all Jai could think of is he would see his son's face for the first time… Bani was too emotional to realize there was a pic…an actual pic of her son…..her and Jai's ………..Both were too lost in their own emotions to even comprehend the enormity of what they had just been told….they both looked into each others eyes before they both turned to look at the picture in Bani's hand…………Bani now started crying again……tears flowing eyes filled with love and longing…Jai was not different….but he quickly recovered as he hugged Bani and kissed her forehead….He had to make sure his family was complete soon…….

Meanwhile RB and Balwant hearing all the commotion come into the room to find Jai and Bani huddled together crying looking at some picture…."Jai puttar….whats wrong ?" as Balwant started praying thinking something really bad had happened….."Jai Bani beta kuch bolo…………………………" he said angrily …….."Papa Karan………" Bani told them as she pushed the photo in front of them.."Karan………………" RB too could not hold his tears as he got the first glimpse of his grandson…."Balwant dekh sada pota………" Balwant came running to see the picture……….

Jai and Bani smiled through their tears as they saw the grandparents discuss and enjoy seeing their grandson in the photo…Dadi was already comparing him to Jai and RB was just smiling away thinking he had a beautiful grandson….It was a sight to see……….the entire family bonding over their most priced possession….

Jai meanwhile realized that he needed to act if he was going to get his son in his house soon…….He quickly picked his cellphone and started dialing Jaz's number….She needed to be updated….no she needed to start working on the new leads quickly….Jaz: "Sure Jai thanks a lot……This is great…I'll get on it pronto." "Thanks Jaz, I am trusting you to give me some news really soon........"

Jai had a smile on his face as a he made the next call…There was someone else who needed to know he was a Dad…..now….Someone very close to him………………Someone who always brought a smile to his face…………He quickly dialed her number as he stood in the verandah watching Bani with his parents…Bani had this aura about her which made her look angelic….her face looked happy and yet there was this longing………….Jai heard a voice that brought a huge grin on his face........"Oh hi Jai….whats up sweetheart…." Jai: "Why can't I call you…."

"No its not that you usually call me in the evening never in the middle of the day and have missed listening to your happy voice……………I love a lot u know that na………." "Yah now stop buttering me up……………Love you tooooo………."

17-B

"I have some exciting news to share with you sis"………."Jai u better tell me now……U know I donot like waiting …….and you donot want me to go into labor right here remember …….Pushkar is not at home right now so tell me…"

"Sis I am a dad………." Pia :"Jai I didn't understand…….U mean you and Bani are having a baby ……….I am so happy for you……..Finally we …" Jai :" Di……..no we have a son………."Then Jai proceeded to tell her about Karan and the rest of it…………..Pia was crying so loud now that Jai was scared it would send her into labor…."Di I need to hang up….. Will talk to you soon………………"

The next couple of days were hectic as Jai spent all his time looking for his son with Jaz……Jaz was amazed by his determination……..he had not slept a wink for the past couple of nights and today when she told him about the breakthrough…..He seemed as fresh as ever…….his killer smile could send anyone's heart into doing summersaults….And she was captivated by his smile……

Jai sprinted back home to tell everyone that they had found him…….their joy their life was living in Chicago…………..And he had already called the pilot to fuel in the Learjet…They had a long flight to take…………the flight which would change their destiny……………………

As expected everyone wanted to be on the flight….But Jai knew finding his son was only half the battle….a long road remained to be traveled before they were one with their son…………..Bani too had been wondering actually worrying about who his adoptive parents were and if they had taken good care of their baby……A baby she thought she had lost years back……..She was hoping that meeting Karan would make her accept that her parents had done their best and come to terms with them….She could never forgive them for taking him away…….It was her choice to make……they had taken it away from him……..Who knows what could have been…….but here she was now a few steps away from her destiny……….her life which she had dreamed about was about to become a reality……..or not……….She was lost on the flight……in her own thoughts as Jaz and Jai decided how to proceed…..(Yes Jaz u are going to Chicago to get ready…….) Jai's eyes traveled towards Bani, he could feel her anxiety and fear…along with a sense of peace …..Karan was alive and that's what mattered right now…..Being a realist he thanked God for giving him this opportunity to meet his son………and once he found him he was not letting either of them go out of sight and life ever again………….

Edited by kadvekattimeeti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
haila...after so long...lekin itna chotta update...koi baath nahin...all your mistakes forgiven...cuz haila...jai talked to me **FAINTS**...im like doing the party dance while lying on the floor...the phrase....'ive fallen and cant get up'...comes to mind...😉...haila...ill go to the ends to the world for my jai baby...😳😳😳...ok step back...who is this chick jai is calling and saying i love you too...ok...now i am doing double duty...first job...find JB baby...and second job...find out who is this skank falling all over jai...ooo u just wait...😉...aagar koi aachi nahin hai naa toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga...jaz detective agency has highly skilled martial arts people...😆...loved this update hun...cant wait for next one...👏
JAZ
Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
kadvekattimeeti thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

haila...after so long...lekin itna chotta update...koi baath nahin...all your mistakes forgiven...cuz haila...jai talked to me **FAINTS**...im like doing the party dance while lying on the floor...the phrase....'ive fallen and cant get up'...comes to mind...😉...haila...ill go to the ends to the world for my jai baby...😳😳😳...ok step back...

Good u've a lot of work to do...go read the next part of Chapter 17-B

who is this chick jai is calling and saying i love you too...ok...now i am doing double duty...first job...find JB baby...and second job...find out who is this skank falling all over jai...ooo u just wait...😉...aagar koi aachi nahin hai naa toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga...jaz detective agency has highly skilled martial arts people...😆...loved this update hun...cant wait for next one...👏
JAZ


Your comment has me grinning...I sure did good by choosing you to be the jassoos...I am sure you will drool over Jai and do your job with equal intensity....Don't faint though Jai kya karega phir......

N

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Posted: 18 years ago
great parts and just hope they will bring karan with them. for time being i was just gonna beat u for creating a new girl in his life, but thanx god she was none other than his sister.

please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kadvekattimeeti


17-B

"I have some exciting news to share with you sis"………."Jai u better tell me now……U know I donot like waiting …….and you donot want me to go into labor right here remember …….Pushkar is not at home right now so tell me…"

"Sis I am a dad………." Pia :"Jai I didn't understand…….U mean you and Bani are having a baby ……….I am so happy for you……..Finally we …" Jai :" Di……..no we have a son………."Then Jai proceeded to tell her about Karan and the rest of it…………..Pia was crying so loud now that Jai was scared it would send her into labor…."Di I need to hang up….. Will talk to you soon………………"

omg...pia is jais sister...haila...first im all 😲 and them im all 🤣 and them im all 👍🏼...and then im all 🥳 and ...all at the same time...i already love u for making jai come to me for his jasoosi work...but haila...now...my love knows no bounds for this...pia as jais sister...classic...pure joy...i am rolling on the floor...my stomach hurts for laughing so hard and i have tears of immense joy in my eyes...😃...thank u soooo much for that....

The next couple of days were hectic as Jai spent all his time looking for his son with Jaz……Jaz was amazed by his determination……..he had not slept a wink for the past couple of nights and today when she told him about the breakthrough…..He seemed as fresh as ever…….his killer smile could send anyone's heart into doing summersaults….And she was captivated by his smile……

u r just too kind...im sure...im am 100% sure that i was drooling...the drool must have been hitting the floor...my eyes had to have popped out of my head and my heart has to be going at like 5000 beats per minute...haila...😳...one smile is all it takes...jaan bhi hazir hai jai ke liyeh...😉...in true navs style...**FAINTS**😃

Jai sprinted back home to tell everyone that they had found him…….their joy their life was living in Chicago…………..And he had already called the pilot to fuel in the Learjet…They had a long flight to take…………the flight which would change their destiny……………………

As expected everyone wanted to be on the flight….But Jai knew finding his son was only half the battle….a long road remained to be traveled before they were one with their son…………..Bani too had been wondering actually worrying about who his adoptive parents were and if they had taken good care of their baby……A baby she thought she had lost years back……..She was hoping that meeting Karan would make her accept that her parents had done their best and come to terms with them….She could never forgive them for taking him away…….It was her choice to make……they had taken it away from him……..Who knows what could have been…….but here she was now a few steps away from her destiny……….her life which she had dreamed about was about to become a reality……..or not……….She was lost on the flight……in her own thoughts as Jaz and Jai decided how to proceed…..(Yes Jaz u are going to Chicago to get ready…….) Jai's eyes traveled towards Bani, he could feel her anxiety and fear…along with a sense of peace …..Karan was alive and that's what mattered right now…..Being a realist he thanked God for giving him this opportunity to meet his son………and once he found him he was not letting either of them go out of sight and life ever again………….

...omg...i am so having a party tonight...haila...me too...i will totally be kabab mein hadi for JB...ok not so much since yeh baache ka mamla hai...lekin uske baad....i cannot gice guarantees...😉...once baby walia is found safe n sound...i will go back to the besharam that i usually am when it come to JW...😳now all future clients will have to pass the JW screening...b4 i take their cases...😃...lol...chicago here i come...watch out...im bring JW too...ahem ahem...a song for this special ocassion...."Hum tum...ek air plane mein baand hai...aur pilot kho jaaye"...lol...i couldnt help it...😉...kya hoga mera...



lovely update hun...just loved it...👏...cant wait for next one...😃...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kadvekattimeeti

Your comment has me grinning...I sure did good by choosing you to be the jassoos...I am sure you will drool over Jai and do your job with equal intensity....Don't faint though Jai kya karega phir......phir jai...haila...mujhe aapne bahoon mein le le ga...😉😉😉...oooo...i can so picture it now...haila...kya kya saapne hai...😍😍😍😍😍...lol...

N

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Posted: 18 years ago
Long time no see. Nicely done...

👏 👏 👏

bt
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi all,
I am away till the 2nd week of May, i might be able to sneak a part or two......but i am not too sure......
Take care
kkm
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey kkm
waiting for the update since a long time
but it is ok..
update when u can..
and please if u do upate
it would be awesome if u update a long one...
but surely we wouldnt mind a short one either..
atleast we will get a update
hehe

❤️nirali

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