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thiku

@thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Sometimes words cannot explain all our feelings Ami. It was simply fantastic. I cannot comment it right now Since i have to come out of thw dream world of PhAb will respond to u after regaining my world, but this was too good...

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devraniharish

@devraniharish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

hey guys i think we need to send our stories to swastik pictures for making sequel of Phulwa... I think we need to start new mission .. mission phulwa 2

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Ami ...i actually feel really helpless trying to comment on your post ...cause its beyond me to actuallly write what I feel after reading your posts...its super amazing , fantabulous...jst grt really😊

thanks fr giving me the credit fr puhing u to write...bt someone like u needs to write yaar...no matter whaat u r doing nw...physics chemistry whatever...finish your studies and PLS take up writing...join a PH as a writing...u will do a grt job😊

ggood u saved Abhay from feeling unnecessarily jealous...what if he had actually taken Phulwa in his arms and twirled around after knowing Babu was her bro...that would b sooo funny😆😆

and stop it phulwa...loved that part...he was addressing her directly fr the first time...and tht also with soo much authority😳😳

So he actually GAVE her the file...WOW...why couldnt the channel give some time to our show?????? we might have seen so much ...sigh

She could have yelled that out of frustration. He should be handcuffing her, instead he was looking at her calmly waiting for her to take the file and go. She searched his eyes but they made her more restless than ever. He leaned back against the table, his gaze not leaving her face for even a single second.

This is one of the many parts i loved ...actually i had thought of nt quoteing u cause then i will end up quoting the entire thing bt couldnt help myself😊

and Ami can we have one of Abhay phulwas future meeting in the rain??😉...maybe nt rite nw ...bt later ...its really ok if it diesnt suit the situation...jst saying😊

Even if u r busy i hope u will log in some time and read our comments...love u and a big hug😛

Edited by mimi_s - 13 years ago

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Ami

@beebutterfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Anu, mimi, Atthira - You guys don't know how much this means to me. Actually feeling teary. Thank you for the love guys.

@Writer- You are just too kind really! LOL, used to be my dream when was growing up. Gave it up on the way I guess. Don't have any confidence on my writing. Believe me, if you all weren't so close to me, would never had written a single word on paper, this would have remained locked in my head so a big THANK YOU for the support🤗

@Mimi- You read my mind!!! Was thinking of a scene in the rain but right now my mind is too busy with other things. First opportunity i get, will try to incorporate such a scene😉

You guys are the best really,. Every time i think, what i wrote is rubbish, you guys like it even more than the last and make me go on😆 You are spoiling me!

@devraniharish-flattered really at you thinking my story is worth sending to a PH. Thank you!😊

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Ami trust me ...u r such a grt writer that hum jitni hi tareef kare who kam hai fr u...PLS cont writting...dont ever keep it locked in your head😛...its grt to know that at times wedo think alike...😊 waiting fr the rain scene😉

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesome superb update
absolutely loved the jealous and possessive abhay

oh!! he is so relieved to know about babu

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Ami

@beebutterfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Ameres

Sigh, I'm still in PhAb land that you have presented.😍

This ACP Abhay Rai Singh of your SS is the ultimate ACP Abhay; the ACP Abhay that we all love to swoon over. Devious, shrewd, who knows exactly what he wants and how to get it. He can play games to get his way around and goesnt give two hoots about it. Gosh! LOVE it! ☺️
Anu, this is just about the best compliment i could get😃 Oh, you saying the Abhay i imagined is the ultimate abhay is like WOW😆 Thank you. 😳 Have always thought of him like that really. That's y was more than annoyed when the show went off air without giving us a chance to see his character develop as we would have wished it to *sigh*

@Party- wow wow WOW! That was so unexpected but truly loving it.

@Dress- OMG! When you mentioned a western dress I didn't thought that you would be showing Phulwa in this one. Your description was beautiful and I can so imagine it. Amazing! 👏
hehe, I really wanted Phulwa in something different ( by different understand which will give abhay the opportunity to go mad at the sight of her😉) and im glad you find it credible. That's more important, making a story believable.

UFFF! I don't know what to quote as each and every line is so beautiful filled with so many emotions!
I love this jealous Phulwa but a bit confused. Haye his touch can make anyone dizzy. ☺️
Phulwa's jealousy is even more interesting till she does not know it's jealousy😆 So i'll keep her like that for a while😉

Ohh he is jealous too! Haha, I love the line that he can't forget those lips. He really has got it bad. :P
😳 I'm thinking of another kiss but umm havent penned it down yet.😆 Yes, he got it bad. Poor guy cannot take his eyes away from them😉

OMGGG! He loves her! And he knows it too! EEEKKKSS! *jumps like crazy phan-girl*

Wow! You have summed up his feelings so beautifully that I can feel them. Amazing work!
I'm so glad this part went down well. I was scared you might feel im rushing it but i just felt he should know it before Phulwa then...oh will shut up. No use revealing anything right now😆

And he gave her the file? Ah! What love does to one.😆
*sigh* true. Jail is no longer the right place for Phulwa😉

Oh so Phulwa is in for more surprises from Abhay jee? Sachi can't wait to know what he plans to do next as of now he is being really unpredictable. And I'm lovin it! 😉
LOL, unpredictable Abhay is what makes us phangirls go ooo so yup, Phulwajee stay on your guard😉 Hoping i don't disappoint in the next part. Will start writing just after my test. Or maybe...during the test.🤣 Sacchi i get the best inspiration in the most boring settings😆 Guess, dil behlaane ke liye, my imagination works better😉
Thanks for giving me that confidence. 🤗

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thiku

@thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

I know a very late replay. but your post also deserves something worth. I cannot point out it attracted me more and this portion was too good, because all the portions are equally good and worth praising. Sincerely it was too good.

"How can two prisoners escape from the under the nose of ten police officers?" Abhay smiled, looking in the distance. Phulwa.

Remembering abhay's dialog during Arjun kidnapping track,, Uska nam Phulwa hai vo kuch bhi kar sakthi hai, Humarah Phulwa. Sure now also abhay thought it in his mind, Vo Phulwa hai...

Phulwa had come to release that man. He no longer wanted to laugh. The light feeling in him ebbed away.

Here, a real love struck collage boy I could see rather than a matured police officer. 😆

I have all the details of Phulwa's whereabouts ready in the file. I just need to show it to the Commissioner tomorrow so he can arrange for some outside help. I think we'll need back up for this operation. I don't want Phulwa to escape this time."

😆 so that was his idea to bring Phulwa to him.

Phulwa in western dress, oh how much I wanted to see her in that with Abhay, any of commissioner uncle's party day , a jeluos abhay, but alash we dont get any of these... but you made one dream come true... love you ami fr this.

Then his eyes settled on her lips and he felt himself go still. How could he not recognize those lips? He had tasted them after all. Phulwa.

Abhay tho paka a bad boy bangaya!!! phir looking into her lips, did his head's wound heeled?😆

"Hello my lady. Would you care for a dance?"

Like it like it, abhay calling phulwa My lady, yes yes she is call like that as much as u wants, but this time how will you bring these two togather? just waiting fr that moment. No hurry little love tensions are worth reading.

He did not know who she was but still he was holding her in the most disturbing way. Did he feel up to every other woman like that? Was the kiss in the jungle something casual and common for him? How many more woman had he experimented his charm on? She suddenly felt a lump in her throat. She felt strange. She removed his hand from his shoulder, eyes spitting fire.

Oh phulwa so that thought of him touching u as someone else made you burn not his touch, right? so the fire of love is burning her mind too with equal intesity as Abhay's

"Phulwa, stop this!" he exclaimed.

They stared at each other in shock. Phulwa looked at him, eyes wide. If her hair and lips had not given her away, her eyes would have, thought Abhay looking deep into them.

Yes this reveal was necessary there to make her know that, he experimented his charm on her only.

"You had to come free him, didn't you? Could not live without him?" he was sarcastic now.

Phulwa was confused. Why was he acting like that? His grip was becoming painful but he appeared unaware that he was hurting her.

You told that Phulwa since ur inner mind dont want to see him in such a sad situation, it dont wanted him to creat any sort of misunderstanding towards u since it simply loves him...

Abhay let her hands fall. He could not believe his ears. Had she just said brother there? He felt like laughing. He suddenly wanted to lift Phulwa and twirl her around. Then it hit him with the force of a truck. He had been jealous. Jealous even at the thought of this woman in the arms of someone else. He felt the ground being swept from under him. She had made him undergo feelings in the past week which he had never experienced in his whole lifetime. He loved her. At the thought, his heart stopped. Love. Such a strange word for him, he had never felt it before and had never expected to feel it. Yes, he loved this woman. He wanted her and no one else. His face broke into a smile.

Abhay recognized his feelings wow, I loved it though I was not expecting it here so soon but it was too good, that abhay already knows what he needs...

Nobody had the right to touch her but him, he thought possessively. Phulwa belonged to him and no one could stop him from conquering her...

These words of belonging and possessiveness, it too good the feeling of someone belongs to us and we belongs to them, Ami it was too good,
before i sit to write something abt ur post i wanted to write a lot but on reading ur post again fr copy paste i lost my words one more time I thing there is no sense i am waiting fr some more time to comment because now I know each time i go and read ur post it will going to create the same feeling of emptiness in me so eventhough what i wrote now do not satisfy me much i am going to post it. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

I'm thinking of another kiss but umm havent penned it down yet.😆 Yes, he got it bad. Poor guy cannot take his eyes away from them😉 EEKKSSS Ami...I am already soo happy😛😛...why didnt u tell me this??😡...never mind ...jst joking😃😃..kab tera exam khatom hoga aur kab tu likhegi...😉

Edited by mimi_s - 13 years ago