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Simran Ramphal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Vinnie79
"Sugni...I love you. You mean the world to me. The only reason I started living again was because of you, I spent the last year just existing. I am not going any where. You don't have to be alone, you won't because I have no intention of leaving you.."😳🤗

" Realizing she was fighting a loosing battle, putting her arms around his neck, they stared at each other for a few seconds before she brought her face closer to his kissing him softly on his lips... holding her closer deepening the kiss"😲

OMG. It was so beautiful Vinnie. I super love those two quotes From the instalment. That was awesome Vinnie. Awww

Luv U Vinnie🤗

O my but again u left us in a predicament. Wanting to know what happens...Hurry Hurry next instalment plz⭐️

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Aarathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Vinnie this part was simply superb
I just loved the way the story progressed sugni and her fears of losing him vikram assuring her he won't leave her and then that punch practice gosh vikram is so funny and cutie
Well last line left me worried hope sugni can bear it

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komal

@komal07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

OMG Just finished all 11 chapters at once
Vinnie suspense writer se romantic writer ban gyi tum to?😳 Bacho ki jaan lo gi kya🤣
You know whenever they had kiss it reminded me serial wala TVS. He tried to kiss her 4 times but never succeeded last scene mein poor guy was about to kiss and THE END🤣
Tumhara TVS to maze mein hai😆 sugni ke sath sath main bhi laal tomato ho gyi hun abhi😆
But seriously you're such an amazing writer. Great going🤗

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Sandy

@Sandy66

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

😊Vinnie, chapter 16, absolutely wonderful, love it. Sugni and Vickram relationship flourished beautifully, and both of them love and accept each other.

Sugni's ready to take to next step, which is fantastic😉. Great love story Vinnie, I'm loving it. Thank you.

Edited by Sandy66 - 12 years ago

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K.swati885

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Vinne...the chptr was simply outstanding!!!! All Romntic moments were beautifully writtn...lovely:) i really liked it.

Edited by K.swati885 - 12 years ago

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: JulieD
Oh wow Vinnie another great installment!👍🏼 You sure know how to create a cliff-hanger!! Now I want to know what's going on with the diner.😆

😳 Thank you so much Julie, keep reading as you will find out soon. !!

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Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: ramkideewani23
OMG. It was so beautiful Vinnie. I super love those two quotes From the instalment. That was awesome Vinnie. Awww
Luv U Vinnie🤗
O my but again u left us in a predicament. Wanting to know what happens...Hurry Hurry next instalment plz⭐️

Awww Simi, Thank you 😊 So much. I am glad that you are enjoying it. As for the qutes I guess I was going with the setting. 1st one well there would be that awkwardness and insecurity , of now what? ( She did move a little fast na..., a bit like the original sugni, who dose before she sits to think! then she wonders did I do the right thing? Thank God for her Vickram is not the type to run.
The second part well, he was now more or less back to his old self, all his baggage not really bothering him any more...so he is more relaxed and playful. I wanted it to be funny but still with that close playful ness... the inspration for that was the bedroom scene where he asked Sugni to sew his button lol.
Stay tuned you will find out soon what will happen with the diner!

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: tulipdaisy
Vinnie this part was simply superb
I just loved the way the story progressed sugni and her fears of losing him vikram assuring her he won't leave her and then that punch practice gosh vikram is so funny and cutie
Well last line left me worried hope sugni can bear it

Thank you Aarthi,😊
I am glad that you are liking the progress. Yes the most important element in this story is the relationship between these two. They have both been through alot and now they will face things together.
In the 1st 1/2 Sugni was the one giving Vickram that emotional strength he so needed to move forward. Now it will be Vickram giving Sugni that strength she will need in the coming days.😊

Edited by Vinnie79 - 12 years ago

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: komal07
OMG Just finished all 11 chapters at once
Vinnie suspense writer se romantic writer ban gyi tum to?😳 Bacho ki jaan lo gi kya🤣
You know whenever they had kiss it reminded me serial wala TVS. He tried to kiss her 4 times but never succeeded last scene mein poor guy was about to kiss and THE END🤣
Tumhara TVS to maze mein hai😆 sugni ke sath sath main bhi laal tomato ho gyi hun abhi😆
But seriously you're such an amazing writer. Great going🤗

KOOOMAL all 11 chapters in 1 go?? well that is the biggest compliment one can get , to be able to hold the readers intrest so long! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Well his was always a love story with a lot ciff hangers hehehe, Yes My Vickram is a lot like the original. Awww I think the man deserves a few innocent kisses naaa for all his trouble😆😆
do stay tuned more to come soon...although Kahni mein todaa, seriousness hongi ab!

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Sandy66
😊Vinnie, chapter 16, absolutely wonderful, love it. Sugni and Vickram relationship flourished beautifully, and both of them love and accept each other.
Sugni's ready to take to next step, which is fantastic😉. Great love story Vinnie, I'm loving it. Thank you.

THank you Sandy. I am happy you think so. I wanted then to have a smooth relationship, it is not always necessary to have a love- hate relationship...sometimes it is nice when people have just a nice friendly respectful relationship, which is what I always admired about the origianl TVS and Sugni combo. So I tried to bring that into this story.
Yes Sugni here loves Vickram, and she is not one to hide in a relationship. She always speaks her mind, and her honesty and strightforwardness is one thing Vickram loves about her.

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