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@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever
Loved it! It was sooo good! Miss ArVi!

Really? Awh thanks! 😊

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: geetrana45
Girl u always surprise us writing new beautiful and romantic os and ff on Arvi.I love this too the way you see ArVi their love and them together is perfect very heart touching and pls dear continue urs other FF really missing.

Awh haha, I don't think so - but thank you, that's really sweet! and awh, so cute! Haha thanks again :) and I'll try my best :)

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Sheets lovely OS of yours as always..love the bubbly and chirpy purvi here,she's sooo cute😳 and arjun the boss,im in love with him yaar😳😆😆...well as i always says all your work are fantastic just like you...hope to read more from you soon sheets,because i miss you and your updates😳😳😳good job mademoiselle sheets😛

Haha awh merci beaucoup Bharu :) Haha after watching Friday's episode, I needed to change Purvi LOL... and to think that Arjun was ever shy and awkward... 😛 and awh so sweet, thanks! I'm sorry :( I've been really busy with some stuff, but I'll to update over my summer break!

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: peachesnplums
Thanks a lot for writing this cute OS Sheets 🤗

some of my fave bits --

"Have you been engaged?"

"Once. It was horrible."

lol 😆 I can imagine that well!

"I'm not really sure anymore. Sometimes my life just feels so empty and meaningless - I want someone who can take all those feelings away. Someone to just talk to and love. Someone I can adorn and shower with love. Someone I can comfort and opens up easily. Perhaps my polar opposite," Arjun finished with a chuckle.

and she's stumbling right in front of you Arjun!

"It also leaves more money for food," she winked.

Purvi Spawn-Of-The-Devil Deshmukh

Foodie and a devil, I like this one a lot 😉

"I asked God for a girl like you, then you came into my life."

"Really? That's funny. I asked God to give meaning to my life, then you came along."

that's so sweet, adorable, beautiful!

Much love ❤️ for writing this!

Awh, no thanks for reading and leaving a comment 🤗

Hehe I think you can guess who he was engaged to ;)

And awh it took our poor Arjun months to figure out -.-

Hehe, I honestly just kept writing and writing - I didn't know when to end it... can you tell I've been watching too many romance movies? 😛

Ahh thanks again Peach 😳

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: shredy
wow sheetu that was a lovely os loved it a lot..

loved the way you portrayed purvi's character here she ain't afraid to show what she feels which is a nice thing

arjun on the other side is so caring and so cute;

i loved the dialogues the most they were just so cute and the credit for that ofcourse goes to ur writing

nice work sheets🤗

Thanks Shredy <3

Hehe glad people loved Purvi's character :P I actually had more fun writing Arjun's... he's so awkward and shy and adorable!

Thank you again :) <3

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Arjun just wanted someone to talk to. He wanted someone to listen to him. He wanted to share his fears and secrets with somebody.

I love the above line - its what we all wish for, but too many of us are cowards to say it or even to believe that we are deserving of that someone.

Now Peachu quoted all of my fave lines! I loved them all... but she quoted already so I wont - just know that I thought they were superb!

As for this OS - if its fluff - then give me more fluff every single day! I so loved it, I smiled through the entire story! It made me feel light hearted, free, happy! And thats what u want ur readers to feel when reading ur stories - a connection to the story and leaving with a feeling of content/joy/happiness.

For me, you have certainly achieved that Sheetu :). Good job!

No - I take that back - GREAT job!!!!

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome Sheets..!!
Loved this OS..
Old Arjun and Purvi..OMYGOSH I miss them soo much 😭
Story was amazing..They fought,they Became friends,They started to understand each other,Both fell for each other,and Both confessed their love for each other..just amazing..!!
beautiful story..Here Purvi was his best friend. I always wanted arjun to have a bet friend with whom he can share all his feelings,his problems and all..and Purvi was so understanding,so strong..they both are Our real ArVi
and Dialogues were superb..I wish u were a cv..!!
Last part was fab..heehee their short kiss,Arjun's kisses, their promises..soo cute..:))

Thankyou 🤗
I just Love to read ur stories 😊

Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Res :)

this time I wont take 2 months😳 paka promise

______________________________

I only took 15 days this time😃

So So So OMG Sheetal gal you have a talent I love the Purvi you portray who gave up her lunch hour to hang out with Mr. Arjun Khadoosloskar.
😳
I loved Arjun's line about how he wished his dream girl would just stumble into his life...

This made me remember a year ago when ArVi first fell in love how they slowly began to feel for each other especially when Purvi's engagement with Vinay broke...

Loved the ending of them on the car, so sweet how all Arjun wanted was his Purvi to smile.😳

Just a wonderful piece of work, I thoroughly enjoyed it 😛

Edited by -LiveLaughLove- - 12 years ago

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Huma

@Huma-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

gosh sheets this was adorableee osm osm job darling 👍🏼

"I asked God for a girl like you, then you came into my life."

"Really? That's funny. I asked God to give meaning to my life, then you came along."❤️

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ashlaika
Arjun just wanted someone to talk to. He wanted someone to listen to him. He wanted to share his fears and secrets with somebody.

I love the above line - its what we all wish for, but too many of us are cowards to say it or even to believe that we are deserving of that someone.

Now Peachu quoted all of my fave lines! I loved them all... but she quoted already so I wont - just know that I thought they were superb!

As for this OS - if its fluff - then give me more fluff every single day! I so loved it, I smiled through the entire story! It made me feel light hearted, free, happy! And thats what u want ur readers to feel when reading ur stories - a connection to the story and leaving with a feeling of content/joy/happiness.

For me, you have certainly achieved that Sheetu :). Good job!

No - I take that back - GREAT job!!!!

Aw :') Thank you Ash 🤗 and awh well great minds think alike I guess 😛

Haha! Well I love writing these stories... didn't know how people would react to them too because I go all "livin la vida loca" 😆 Awh, I don't know how I did it but I'm glad I did ^_^ Thank you again!

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