Originally posted by: archverma10
Wow! đMy dear friend!! This is the one time when my not being on the forum over the weekend turned out to be a blessing in disguise!!! The blessing being that by default I got to read all 3 chapters one after the other!!!
I LOVED the friendly competition in the first chapter between "Cranky-loskar" (*grins* awesome by the way...better than khadoos...although I think "Grumpy-loskar" comes a close second too :)) and bade bhai-saab. No matter how happy a brother is for his little sister...when it comes to her husband...no matter how much he likes him...there will always be that little voice that says that was my "special girl" until you came along...so I love the way you illustrated this...even down to the wording. :))
In the second one, Laurie's fabulous, breezy return entry (hehe...you little imp, you!!), đ Purvi's conversation with Archana, her feeling that her family is starting to come together...all of the elements included, girls day out, the spa, etc. was all good. 2 things of which I am curious though (and you may have mentioned this in previous chapters but since I dont remember this part I am going to ask you this)...I am going back to when Arjun broke up with Ovi and DK/Manav's visit to him. I feel that although DK knew that Arjun would be going to London...Manav does not know right?? Or does Manav know that both Arjun and Purvi are in London...even though they each dont know about the other being there? So my question is, did Ovi know that Arjun was headed to London and if Manav knows then does Archana know too? Sorry could remember that specific detail from that chapter...so wanted to clarify as I dont remember this part...đĽą
Also, **frowns** I know Teju does not know about Purvi/Arjun so I guess this whole "Ovi Ovi Jeeju Jeeju" thing will be there...I do wish she would tone it down a little though. For being so close to Purvi...and perceptive about other things...I am disappointed that she has failed to notice what is bothering Purvi...I know it is consistent with the show...but I do wish she would quit making our Poor Purvi feel worse đ
And of course the latest chapter...Manish Malhotra sarees...velvet blouse...Arjun will lose all powers of speech for sure when he sees Purvi!!! Glad you kept her in a saree...I really believe sareers seem to suit her far better than lenghas...and of course Teju and our Laurie are knockouts as well in those outfits and heels (love the description of the hair and jewelry though...found myself imagining what Purvi would really look like with those bangs combed to the side)...
Well done my friend...it seems your muse is back...and you have managed to keep your audience hooked and get away with 3 chapters very well and at a good pace rather than fast-forwarding to that Arjun-Purvi reunion meeting!!!
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