The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98

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Jagruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

wow laurie u r such a darling..lovd this update..i thought u must be introducing a jealousy track between arjun purvi and karan but u as always surprised me...dnt kno whats going on ur creative mind..but m vry excited to kno...m really waiting for dat chapter wher arjun and purvi meet...

btw laurie my name is jagruti..u can call mr jago as all my friends address me wid this name...

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MagicalPari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

very excited to see arvi meeting. Pls update soon 😳

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nalonynnej

@nalonynnej

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Oh, these close encounters just keep teasing me! Hope Arjun doesn't head out on his plane back to India without seeing Purvi. 🥺

Love Sid's accent and his changing "th-" to "v-." 😆 Hopefully he doesn't go around calling Tej "Vej." 🤣

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Marie_789

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

OMG OMG i am eagerly waiting for Arjun and Purvi to meet. 😊

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

what a awesome update...its superb...totally loved it...eagerly waiting for the next update and arjun-purvi's meeting...

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na_61611

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

It was fantastic...can't wait for arvi to meet.

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jdronamraju

@jdronamraju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Laurie,

Another wonderful treat early morning !!

Wicked girl !! Keeping us on the edge so much that we are about to topple off 😃..

rendered speechless, slight nudge, stupor..hmm...reminds me of something...😉

learning a lot of male fashion now, Laurie...brand names and all...

Ash, Abhi... got ur red shirt, and all the descriptions, right.. all we have to do is ask Laurie nicely, and you get it in RS !! right, Laurie ... 😉

All in All, a great windfall this weekend...Enjoyed it tremendously...

Take a bow, Ms. Laurie !!! 👏

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abhimg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Dear Laurie, Kachori, Karma...this is too good...i am enjoying this Bollywood style, very reminiscent of India party...starts late 10pm onwards- i would be preparing to go to bed at this hour...

Thank you for keeping us engaged in this beautifully woven piece...😃👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️

Am really enjoying it...🥳BTW your man Karan is really growing on me and i am all warmed up to him and his personality...he is so cool, just the perfect well rounded individual, with the right dose of humor to add to his business acumen and gregarious personality- a great manager, leader of his company and yet so down to earth, and sooo much in love with Laurie...😃...Love Karan's protective side for Purvi, and definitely his possessive side for Laurie...

Men's attire- loved that this time- esp. Karan and Arjun's...how do u come up and know all these designer names (perhaps a * footnote annotated note would be lovely here) 😃 as i am obviously oblivious of it...(try saying that 10 times..)

One Mississippi..two Mississippi...LOVED THAT, just heard it two days ago too...so cute...

Like how comfortable Purvi is with both KD and his Laurie...the Bleu de Chanel...same same...aha...can almost smell it too...

Lovely tying in with the TEA AT THE SAVOY 😉 , could actually witness the exchange between Karan and Laurie, now this is THE ARJUN, PURVI's ARJUN...and how very very perceptive of our Arjun 👏 to know there was something more to that exchange...

Both Arjun and Purvi, feeling the magnetism of each other...and both conceding to losing their minds, sighing..🤣...

WHAT A BRILLIANT way to announce Karan Dhanjani, the ceo of KARMA Group...Arjun choking on his drink reminded me of you Laurie (your recent spitting out your tea experience 😉)

Arjun knows that magic touch...his effect on Purvi- 🤗❤️he KNOWS the effect of his touch on Purvi...reminds me of the tumultous days post OVi engagement in reel PR where we got to see that effect a couple of times...😉 BUT that means PURVI is like KARAN...the brother sister angle, here it is very clear...he reacts the same way to Laurie's touch (Karan does), as does Purvi to Arjun's...and that also shows Laurie is off limits...so Arjun kind of knows that Karan and Laurie are together...🤔..

This has been a treat, Sat/Sun/Mon too kind Laurie...very well written chapters...good flow...keep it up...👏👍🏼

U have us hooked so we are at your mercy for yet another and another and another and another...

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

I think Arjun looked the best of the three men... strictly based on the descriptions written. Of course, your Karan comes in a close second.

Laurie, I loved the chapter. Great work!!! Such a wonderful way to start another Monday morning and my week.

I must say, I love how u incorporate the humour into ur story... U had me LOL at WORK here! Also, loved the intensity of feelings between our Arjun and Purvi. They feel it themselves and WE feel it as well.

Sid is a darling - we should get one of him on PR to even out things. lol. Karan would make the perfect brother and apparently a very possessive husband... which every Alpha man should be. lol.

Great job... can't wait for u to spoil us with the next. (Maybe after this weekend, we seem to be greedy). Sorry ! 😊

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