The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PariD

very excited to see arvi meeting. Pls update soon 😳


Thank you PariD 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nalonynnej

Oh, these close encounters just keep teasing me! Hope Arjun doesn't head out on his plane back to India without seeing Purvi. 🥺

Love Sid's accent and his changing "th-" to "v-." 😆 Hopefully he doesn't go around calling Tej "Vej." 🤣


Thank you Amita 😃

I'm trying to be true to character for Sid so if you say his lines out loud as they are written phonetically, you might end up with a sort of English accent 🤣

At least it does for me - which gets me strange looks from my neighbor when I'm in my backyard on the lappy 🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Marie_789

OMG OMG i am eagerly waiting for Arjun and Purvi to meet. 😊


Thank you Marie 😃

OMG OMG me too!!!! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

what a awesome update...its superb...totally loved it...eagerly waiting for the next update and arjun-purvi's meeting...


Thank you Latika 😃

Glad you liked it! 😃

Next couple of days sound good to you? 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: na_61611

It was fantastic...can't wait for arvi to meet.


Thank you for your comments 😃 (What do I call you dear?)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jdronamraju

Laurie,

Another wonderful treat early morning !!
Wicked girl !! Keeping us on the edge so much that we are about to topple off 😃..
rendered speechless, slight nudge, stupor..hmm...reminds me of something...😉
learning a lot of male fashion now, Laurie...brand names and all...
Ash, Abhi... got ur red shirt, and all the descriptions, right.. all we have to do is ask Laurie nicely, and you get it in RS !! right, Laurie ... 😉
All in All, a great windfall this weekend...Enjoyed it tremendously...
Take a bow, Ms. Laurie !!! 👏


Thanks Jyothi 😃

It's all about the anticipation right? If anything we've all gotten somewhat better at that since watching PR 🤣

Glad I could help. So now you can consider yourself even more fashion forward😃

Always love the feedback 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhimg

Dear Laurie, Kachori, Karma...this is too good...i am enjoying this Bollywood style, very reminiscent of India party...starts late 10pm onwards- i would be preparing to go to bed at this hour...

Thank you for keeping us engaged in this beautifully woven piece...⭐️
Am really enjoying it...🥳BTW your man Karan is really growing on me and i am all warmed up to him and his personality...he is so cool, just the perfect well rounded individual, with the right dose of humor to add to his business acumen and gregarious personality- a great manager, leader of his company and yet so down to earth, and sooo much in love with Laurie...😃...Love Karan's protective side for Purvi, and definitely his possessive side for Laurie...
Men's attire- loved that this time- esp. Karan and Arjun's...how do u come up and know all these designer names (perhaps a * footnote annotated note would be lovely here) 😃 as i am obviously oblivious of it...(try saying that 10 times..)
One Mississippi..two Mississippi...LOVED THAT, just heard it two days ago too...so cute...
Like how comfortable Purvi is with both KD and his Laurie...the Bleu de Chanel...same same...aha...can almost smell it too...
Lovely tying in with the TEA AT THE SAVOY 😉 , could actually witness the exchange between Karan and Laurie, now this is THE ARJUN, PURVI's ARJUN...and how very very perceptive of our Arjun 👏 to know there was something more to that exchange...
Both Arjun and Purvi, feeling the magnetism of each other...and both conceding to losing their minds, sighing..🤣...
WHAT A BRILLIANT way to announce Karan Dhanjani, the ceo of KARMA Group...Arjun choking on his drink reminded me of you Laurie (your recent spitting out your tea experience 😉)
Arjun knows that magic touch...his effect on Purvi- 🤗❤️he KNOWS the effect of his touch on Purvi...reminds me of the tumultous days post OVi engagement in reel PR where we got to see that effect a couple of times...😉 BUT that means PURVI is like KARAN...the brother sister angle, here it is very clear...he reacts the same way to Laurie's touch (Karan does), as does Purvi to Arjun's...and that also shows Laurie is off limits...so Arjun kind of knows that Karan and Laurie are together...🤔..
This has been a treat, Sat/Sun/Mon too kind Laurie...very well written chapters...good flow...keep it up...👏👍🏼
U have us hooked so we are at your mercy for yet another and another and another and another...


My dear Abhi - Thank you for your wonderful comments!!! 🤗

Oh my Karan - yes, he is quite the guy for me 😉 Yes, I do love his character very much and I think he's integral to ARVI's story.

My sister loves couture fashion so I'm always surrounded by such things - might as well put my little knowledge to some use 😆

Purvi has begun to feel more comfortable with K.D. and Laurie and is in the early stages of feeling like a small family in London - you know home away from home sort of thing - but we know that there's more to it 😉

Of course, tea at the Savoy. That really was an awesome chapter for me to write. Thank you all for being a part of it! ⭐️

Arjun is a very perceptive guy. He deserves the credit. He's a little lovelorn at the moment but excitement's around the corner!

Enjoy!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashlaika

I think Arjun looked the best of the three men... strictly based on the descriptions written. Of course, your Karan comes in a close second.

Laurie, I loved the chapter. Great work!!! Such a wonderful way to start another Monday morning and my week.

I must say, I love how u incorporate the humour into ur story... U had me LOL at WORK here! Also, loved the intensity of feelings between our Arjun and Purvi. They feel it themselves and WE feel it as well.

Sid is a darling - we should get one of him on PR to even out things. lol. Karan would make the perfect brother and apparently a very possessive husband... which every Alpha man should be. lol.

Great job... can't wait for u to spoil us with the next. (Maybe after this weekend, we seem to be greedy). Sorry ! 😊


Thank you Ash! 😃

In my humble opinion, a life without daily laughter is not a life well enjoyed! 😃

Always make the most of happiness - right? 😃

My Alpha Man Karan - sigh 😍

I'll let you in on a little secret - ssshhh - all my side characters are modeled after real people. But don't let them know they are famous on IF they'll come after me with pitchforks 🤣

Thank you for your lovely comments. 😃

Enjoy!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vgiri

Excellent one Laurie, Outdid yourself...Chapter 16 - Laurie's style all the way.. Good job.

Yes.. keeping us on edge..may topple anytime..😃
Armani, Chanel.. all top rated ones.. I can totally picture RD in that style.. but Karan..going to associate with Karan Wahi..Hope u dont mind. 😉
Oh u missed the cars.. Tesla Roadster or Ferrari Cali 30.. 👍🏼
I like this Sid guy, sounds very cool.."And u were saying?" 🤣
Honestly, I love you writing style.. Plz dont take a break again...Can't wait for the next one. is Purvi going to meet Arjun face to face..😃😃😃
P.S Laurie, If you are not taken already, I have all the info needed to create eHarmony or BharatMatrimony profile for u..whatcha say? 😆



Thank you Vilasini 😃

My Karan looks like Hritik Roshan 😍 although Karan Wahi isn't bad either.

I really like Sid too - he's perfect for Tej!

The cars have been in the work for some time but I haven't had a chance those yet 😉

OMG!!! A matrimony profile for me??? 🤣 🤣

Very cool! Would love to hear/see what that looks like - give it a go! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashlaika

Laurie,

Im here again... I came back to tell u, I had absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED ur chapter 11 - the Sweet dreams Chapter. Loved how bold Purvi was and how playful they were together. It was absolutely delicious! Love the aaja mausam song as well - very appropriate for ArVi.

(I didnt have an account at that time to comment, just used to read and enjoy thoroughly... these days I can't seem to STOP commenting. Sigh! SMH 😳 😊)


Thanks again Ash 😃

That chapter has to be one of my faveys too! 😍

My dad just knocked that one out of the park. 'It's all about timing kachori, when it's meant to be things come together in such a beautiful way it will exceed even YOUR wildest dreams." Gotta love my papa. ❤️

Glad you decided to join in the fun and thank you again for taking the time to come back to leave that comment for me.

Very much appreciated! ☺️

Enjoy!

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