The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: ameilia
hey Laurie fabulous update.Hope u update soon so that Arvians will atleast get some reunion when this damn separation track will he shown.Atleast we have people like u to write wondersful chapters on Arvi's relationship and the distance and their long awaited reunion.
Please continue ur amazing work soon😛

Thank you Amelia 😃

Hopefully I can do them justice for you! 😃

Enjoy!

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina
So I came on today and to my delight what do I see? TWO CHAPTERS of The Raging Storm.

I'll make it quick. I loved both the chapters. Loved Karan's possessiveness regarding Laurie and also loved Tej and Sid.

But now we are getting closer and closer to the face to face meeting between our dear ARVI! I'm so excited.

Great job Laurie. My favorite part of the chapter was when Arjun was thinking that India is home because Purvi is there. Loved the part where he was thinking Purvi is his home. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you Nina! 😃

I'm excited too!

Home is where the HEART is right? 😉

Enjoy!

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: aviaanya
Laurie WOW as always what a great update. I have been so busy with summer no chance to be on the forum. But seeing your updates I jumped at the chance to read your updates . And as always dear you don't disappoint. 👏I loved the bonding taking place between Laurie, Purvi and Tej.

Oh and who can't love Karan...the lovely, over protective brother and possessive lover. Awesome!!!

Totally enthralled waiting for the next update.

You know Lauire 50 shades of Grey started out as fan fiction. You never know. 😍Oh your Bollywood Boudoir has definitely inspired me for my next party idea.
Keep it coming !!!

Thank you Aviaanya 😃

Yes, Karan is my favey too ☺️

Although the story is about ARVI, he can't help but make his little mark in there somewhere😉

Thank you for the lovely comments 😃

🤣 OMG!!! Could you imagine ARVI in 50 Shades of Grey??? People will go mad!! 🤣

I went to a party like this recently and the decor was SUPERB!!! Absolutely loved it! Trust me, if you decide to go that route you'll have a hit on your hands! 😃

Enjoy!

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: rati_arvifan
hi Laurie good job awesome story today only i saw your post and i read all chapters today and i am so happy. Its amazing all chapters are really superb... i am eagarly waiting for arvi meeting... update soon...

Thank you Rati 😃

More to come 😃

Enjoy!

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Jhumpai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Congratulations Laurie for the wonderful chapters. Waiting in anticipation for them to meet.

I must say it was magical from the word go. I came across this thread today evening and read all 16 chapters straight through. Amazing!

The subtleties of relationships or the lack thereof are so well captured in the details. The part where Laurie tells Purvi that every time she experiences something new she turns to share that with some invisible person,... That's exactly what I do with the husband (not in anyway invisible!). The greatest thing about this write-up though is that you kept the basic nature and values from the characters from the original PR integral and yet managed to take them on further, to mature and grow...

Loved it!!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jhumpai
Congratulations Laurie for the wonderful chapters. Waiting in anticipation for them to meet.
I must say it was magical from the word go. I came across this thread today evening and read all 16 chapters straight through. Amazing!
The subtleties of relationships or the lack thereof are so well captured in the details. The part where Laurie tells Purvi that every time she experiences something new she turns to share that with some invisible person,... That's exactly what I do with the husband (not in anyway invisible!). The greatest thing about this write-up though is that you kept the basic nature and values from the characters from the original PR integral and yet managed to take them on further, to mature and grow...
Loved it!!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Thank you for your wonderful comments, Jhumpai and welcome to the Raging Storm 😃

I'm glad you like the story so far.

Enjoy! 😃

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jdronamraju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

You are here, Laurie ! Are we getting something today ??? 😉

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Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#588

After the past couple days, I sat down and really took a really hard look at the Raging Storm.

Would it be prudent of me to continue at this time?

'My ARVI' gave me a resounding 'YES'!

I am thankful that they have remained unscathed by this whole process and I hope you like the way they have been preserved.

PVR ARVI may be a twisted, thorny mess at the moment but 'my ARVI' rocks on! 😎

Arjun - "That's right guys, 'We will always have Paris' "

Purvi swats him on the arm " Ah Mr. Lostiloskar, we're in London"

Arjun - "Oh yeah right, London!"

Arjun leans into the monitor, smiles and winks, "I love it when she thinks she's correcting me. Bechari Purvi, doesn't know she playing my game."

Purvi look at the back of his, rolls her eyes and starts laughing.

As you can see, they are in very high spirits and ready to get back in the game! 😃

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jdronamraju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#589

COOL !! Loving it already... You know, we all really need it this weekend, to wash away the nightmares of this week... Glad ur ARVI survived...

Eagerly waiting for it..

- Your loyal FAN 😃