The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Laurie, have to agree with Shyamala here you seem to be a little in love with this handsome hunk yourself!!😍

Karan sounds more appealing than Arjun, our fallen hero. 😆
Who does Karan want to meet in that last but one line? Is he referring to Purvi or someone else? Archana? Is he Soham? Is this a platonic attraction and liking? If he is not Soham, could he be in love with Ovi? Having seen her at some modeling show but she with her high-handedness repulsed him? This is his way of getting to her? The news he was waiting for, could it be Ovi is going to be in London for a show? Sorry, I am running in a different direction.
Karan and Arjun - apt names as Shyamala puts it. Brothers in the epic, brothers in law here? That said, he does sound too good to be true, at least too good for Ovi. Perhaps the tomboyish Tej is his interest?
Well, well, have to wait impatiently to see how your story unfolds! You tease, you tempt and you tantalize.
Another lovely chapter, love the way you write.👍🏼 Dil maange more in dollops, in excess, not just these little morsels!
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Oh Janhvi - I AM in love with him 😉 ❤️ 😍
Karan wanted to meet with Purvi's parents to discuss her stay in London to make sure all the details are worked out.
Brilliant questions and the answers are - seven to all of them 🤣 I'm going for some suspense so I hope I can last for a few chapters atleast 😉
Yes, its all about the balance - yin and yang - so we'll see who decides to tip the scales 😉
Ahem - I'm going to be his love interest 🤣
You know 'we girls are so possessive about out relationships' in my best Ovi impression 🤣
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vgiri

Thanks Laurie.. very good one.

  • I liked Shyamala's Karan & Arjun Mahabharth tie..
  • You cannot make Karan more handsome than Arjun. IMO..Hero should be the only perfect guy.. Dont know whether it is just to make Arjun jealous or what?
  • I dont know whether Karan is also in DK-Manav circle. cause you are saying Karan is waiting for Purvi to like him and he also seems to know all about Purvi and Arjun.
  • I dont know whether the email is the reason for the trip to be preponed or something else?
  • I thought DK was going to accompany Purvi to London but according to Purvi, Tej is going.

At the end the chapter I am left with so many questions.. I love the way you have described Karan, hope Soham doesnt fit that description in PR.

vilasini


Thanks Vilasini 😃

Great questions - all should be answered in the coming parts 😉

Actually there should be more good looking guys to give Arjun a run for his money... ultimately it's up to Purvi right? 😉

Enjoy! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: esha

Superb update Laurie 👏...simply superb

You just threw in the surprise factor named Mr. Karan...oh I am so excited of what is going to happen that I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Please Laurie...make it fast 😆
I know it's gonna be ArVi in the end, but I don't mind seeing Arjun getting all colours of seeing Purvi with Karan. And besides after all that happened, Arjun should fight real hard to get Purvi back...don't make it too easy on him 😉...he should not get Purvi's forgiveniss and love on a silver platter anymore...
I just wished this would also happen in PR...that they bring in a new guy for Purvi for the time being and after seeing Arjun standing there like an idiot in the new promo...I was off totally 😡


Thanks Esha 😃

I like the way you think - You got it! 😉

I really hope he decides to fight for his love. Too much of standing around doing nothing 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhimg

👏Dear dear Laurie,


Aaahhh...yet again you outdo yourself...and succeed in mightily pleasing us fans...fans of your writing and fans of ARVI!

Shyamala, as I quickly gave only one read...the description of KD reminded me of our dear Udayveer, who I must confess, I still only have a picture formed of him in my mind from ur post describing him...but like u I too saw streaks of Udayveer's royalty etc in our Laurie created handsome dude KD!!
And the other nagging question was about if KD hand picks his employees, then, even then...how does he know such minute details about Arjun and Purvi...granted KD had seen her present at Pune...and then me began wondering whether KD was not only at the presentation...was he at the dance too? But I thought that was only for Arjun's company...hmmm...Like u Shyamala it was nagging me...or does Purvi have a Facebook account which tells the story of her life or was it yet again Ms. Punni Tai at her selfish evil best...for money she fed KD info...real personal info...

👏⭐️Cannot wait to go to London and that too this Friday! Thank you Laurie, for being the opposite of PR in terms of timing...where in PR we fans go day after day and week after week with dry spells without our ARVI, you quench our thirst just enough to keep us coming back for more...and u moved up the date😃 Yahoooweee London here we come, Arjun Baba, tayaar ho jao...

Thank u Laurie...


Thanks Abhi 😃

Karan is a very sharp and practical guy just like Arjun. He knows how to read people and how to get the information he needs.

When I was dreaming up Karan I was thinking of a younger Hrithik Roshan - with a few enhancements 😉 He's got the look I want for Karan.

London, here we come! ⭐️

Mind the gap! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: archverma10

HAHAHA LAURIE!!!! You goofball!!! **grins** I agree with Shyamala! You, and by now the rest of us reading the story, are in love with this guy too!! Karan DHANJANI??? 6'3, hazel eyes, "winged aristocratic eyebrows" ,fair, lithe body, hand picks employees, youngest businessman to amass this type of wealth and business presence? With a guy like this, who needs poor AK?? I'm hoping that if Arjun keeps his mouth shut while Purvi is getting slapped around because of him, that the CVs read this story and come up with a guy like Karan for Purvi!!!😉



Thanks Archana 😃

Karan is MY dream come true 😆 ❤️ 😍

I'm thinking about writing myself into the story so Karan ends up with me! 🤣

Arjun got her too easily last time - he needs to work for her this time around.

Better hit the gym Arjun!!! 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ramki1

Hi my dear friend laurie, again lovely post⭐️⭐️⭐️...you introduced another good character Karan Dhanjani👏👏...If any other producer(not Ektha this is beyond ektha's mindset) see your posts definately he will start new serial...may be they will call you fr the script writer...


Thanks Ramki 😃

From your mouth to God's ears, my friend 😆

That would be awesome! ⭐️

Hope you enjoy the rest coming up 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jdronamraju

Very well written...Having read a lot of M&B's in my teens, Karan reminds me so much of a Mills & Boon Hero...too perfect to be true !! :):)

But, still loved it... keep going !!!


Thank you Jyothi 😃

I never really read those - I've always been more of a mystery girl.
That's such a wonderful compliment though and I truly appreciate it. Thank you ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Oh Janhvi - I AM in love with him 😉 ❤️ 😍
Karan wanted to meet with Purvi's parents to discuss her stay in London to make sure all the details are worked out.
Brilliant questions and the answers are - seven to all of them 🤣 I'm going for some suspense so I hope I can last for a few chapters atleast 😉
Yes, its all about the balance - yin and yang - so we'll see who decides to tip the scales 😉
Ahem - I'm going to be his love interest 🤣
You know 'we girls are so possessive about out relationships' in my best Ovi impression 🤣
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up 😃

You are in love with Karan? You are his love interest, the answer lies with 7! The seven ladies at the Savoy, one of them is you! You are the mole that has been feeding him with Purvi's story and helping ARVI get together finally! 👏 Cool! I may be barking up the wrong tree entirely but it is fascinating trying to second guess your story about these two!
Have fun writing, please don't keep us waiting too long! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

You are in love with Karan? You are his love interest, the answer lies with 7! The seven ladies at the Savoy, one of them is you! You are the mole that has been feeding him with Purvi's story and helping ARVI get together finally! 👏 Cool! I may be barking up the wrong tree entirely but it is fascinating trying to second guess your story about these two!
Have fun writing, please don't keep us waiting too long! 😉


Me? The mole? 😲

Now why didn't I think of that? That would have been cool! 😉

Love that twisty brain of yours 👏

Oh and by the way - wish granted! ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Axiom123


Me? The mole? 😲

Now why didn't I think of that? That would have been cool! 😉

Love that twisty brain of yours 👏

Oh and by the way - wish granted! ⭐️

Can't wait, this greedy mind of mine keeps asking, "when, when" - see what you have got yourself into!!

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