The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
Laurie, have to agree with Shyamala here you seem to be a little in love with this handsome hunk yourself!!😍
Karan sounds more appealing than Arjun, our fallen hero. 😆
Who does Karan want to meet in that last but one line? Is he referring to Purvi or someone else? Archana? Is he Soham? Is this a platonic attraction and liking? If he is not Soham, could he be in love with Ovi? Having seen her at some modeling show but she with her high-handedness repulsed him? This is his way of getting to her? The news he was waiting for, could it be Ovi is going to be in London for a show? Sorry, I am running in a different direction.
Karan and Arjun - apt names as Shyamala puts it. Brothers in the epic, brothers in law here? That said, he does sound too good to be true, at least too good for Ovi. Perhaps the tomboyish Tej is his interest?
Well, well, have to wait impatiently to see how your story unfolds! You tease, you tempt and you tantalize.
Another lovely chapter, love the way you write.👍🏼 Dil maange more in dollops, in excess, not just these little morsels!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Laurie.. very good one.
  • I liked Shyamala's Karan & Arjun Mahabharth tie..
  • You cannot make Karan more handsome than Arjun. IMO..Hero should be the only perfect guy.. Dont know whether it is just to make Arjun jealous or what?
  • I dont know whether Karan is also in DK-Manav circle. cause you are saying Karan is waiting for Purvi to like him and he also seems to know all about Purvi and Arjun.
  • I dont know whether the email is the reason for the trip to be preponed or something else?
  • I thought DK was going to accompany Purvi to London but according to Purvi, Tej is going.

At the end the chapter I am left with so many questions.. I love the way you have described Karan, hope Soham doesnt fit that description in PR.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update Laurie 👏...simply superb
You just threw in the surprise factor named Mr. Karan...oh I am so excited of what is going to happen that I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Please Laurie...make it fast 😆
I know it's gonna be ArVi in the end, but I don't mind seeing Arjun getting all colours of seeing Purvi with Karan. And besides after all that happened, Arjun should fight real hard to get Purvi back...don't make it too easy on him 😉...he should not get Purvi's forgiveniss and love on a silver platter anymore...
I just wished this would also happen in PR...that they bring in a new guy for Purvi for the time being and after seeing Arjun standing there like an idiot in the new promo...I was off totally 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏Dear dear Laurie,

Aaahhh...yet again you outdo yourself...and succeed in mightily pleasing us fans...fans of your writing and fans of ARVI!

Shyamala, as I quickly gave only one read...the description of KD reminded me of our dear Udayveer, who I must confess, I still only have a picture formed of him in my mind from ur post describing him...but like u I too saw streaks of Udayveer's royalty etc in our Laurie created handsome dude KD!!
And the other nagging question was about if KD hand picks his employees, then, even then...how does he know such minute details about Arjun and Purvi...granted KD had seen her present at Pune...and then me began wondering whether KD was not only at the presentation...was he at the dance too? But I thought that was only for Arjun's company...hmmm...Like u Shyamala it was nagging me...or does Purvi have a Facebook account which tells the story of her life or was it yet again Ms. Punni Tai at her selfish evil best...for money she fed KD info...real personal info...

👏⭐️Cannot wait to go to London and that too this Friday! Thank you Laurie, for being the opposite of PR in terms of timing...where in PR we fans go day after day and week after week with dry spells without our ARVI, you quench our thirst just enough to keep us coming back for more...and u moved up the date😃 Yahoooweee London here we come, Arjun Baba, tayaar ho jao...

Thank u Laurie...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 6 ' Changes [Karan and Purvi]

Mumbai ' Monday

"Thank you all for coming to this briefing" began Karan Dhanjani, "We already have two delegations in London that have been preparing for our visit and doing the ground work for us. We will be the last team to arrive and we need to be prepared. Let's get to work."

It had only been two short months but Purvi had already loved working for Karma Group of Companies and their way of doing business. They were dually involved in multi-billion dollar deals, community outreach programs and invested their time into developing each project equally. She had been courted by for this job for a few days and honestly, she had only accepted the offer to get away from Arjun but looking around now she was certain she made the right career move. This is where she wanted to be.

She was determined to be efficient and productive at her new tasks and prove herself with this new company. With the success of the Pune contracts, her hard work had paid off and she was tapped to go to London for six months to help her boss and the new team to acquire some new business. She was excited beyond belief when both Manav and Archana agreed for her to go. Tej would accompany her on this trip and she was over the moon to be sharing such an experience with her sister.

'I wonder if Arjun liked London.' The thought crossed her mind so quickly she didn't have time to stop it and it jarred her out of her current daze. She gave herself a quick shake to clear her mind and to refocus. "Is everything ok, Miss Deshmukh?" her boss called across from the conference table.

"Yes sir, everything's fine." Purvi said embarrassed. 'I've got to stop doing that.' she thought. She looked down at her notes and then back at her boss a minute later. This was the first meeting with her new boss Karan Dhanjani and she was pleasantly surprised. 'Wow' Purvi noted as she observed him from behind her laptop, 'As far as good looking bosses go, I have the best luck.'

Standing at six foot three inches, Karan Dhanjani was a solid ten on the va-va-voom scale. Fair in complexion; he had the look of the maharaja's gone by ' born and bred of nobility. His hair was the color of black gold, regal and unruly. He wore it brushed back but she could tell it was longer than most guys were wearing in nowadays and every so often a stray lock would escape the style and almost fall into his eyes.

And what eyes they were! Winged, aristocratic eye brows flawlessly framed the two stunning hazel orbs nestled beneath them. Purvi was sure those captivating, hazel irises surrounded by halos of blue, could see into your soul with just one glance. His face boasted a perfectly proportionate nose and provocative, full lips worthy of many sonnets. His angular face was model worthy and she was sure, it was the face of many a dream.

He was lean and lithe and his body seemed to move to a heavenly composition - each movement graceful and confident. His manners were impeccable and it was glaringly obvious that he was of a different caliber of anyone she had ever met. Purvi had felt an instant connection to Karan. She could not put her finger on what it was exactly but she knew it was something special.

She noted the obvious attraction from all the girls in the office but it seemed to have no effect on him. He was very professional with them in but that didn't seem to deter them from trying to cull his favour. Purvi found out from a few conversations with the other office staff that he was one of the youngest business men to amass such a conglomerate of multinational companies and turn over profits each year. He was acutely ethical in all his dealings and investors hounded him because of his exceptional ability to turn a coin from copper to gold.

He was also a very upstanding man who valued women and their roles in society. "He hand picks all his employees" Purvi was told. "If he comes across someone who he feels is valuable to his organization, he hires them. I've been here seven years and no one has quit or been fired. Some have retired but never left for another reason." Purvi considered these facts as she finished up her part of the project. She wanted to be sure there were no errors on her part so she gave her full attention to her tasks at hand.

'This is going to be interesting' thought Karan. 'You are quite the gem Miss Deshmukh and I want to see how you fare in London' Karan sat back and looked at his team. His super group was an amalgamation of the top officers from different companies and Purvi was the crown jewel in his collection. He looked at her now while she was busy concentrating on her assigned task.

He had caught Purvi's presentation while attending a conference in Pune a few months ago. Back then she was part of the OVT Group of Companies bought by Arjun Kirloskar, his business rival, and he was blown away by her confidence and people skills. He too had felt that instant connection with Purvi and that night he began his observations of her.

Through his many contacts he learned of her entire life to date. From her coming to live with Archana, her childhood days, her friends, her education up to the present with her cousin's treason, her brief relationship with Arjun, the arrival of her sisters, Arjun's engagement to her sister Ovi, the revelation of her family and the ultimate solution of that problem.

He was also aware of Arjun's departure and his broken engagement with Ovi and that's when he decided to step in and rescue Purvi from the hell she was going through. He knew of her inexorable determination so he was prepared to pursue her for months if needed. He was pleasantly surprised when she accepted his offer after a matter of days.

'How could Arjun ever walk away from her?' Karan questioned. She was everything a woman should be. Beautiful, kind, generous, strong willed, well mannered and family oriented. He knew she had a good heart from those who observed her and those who worked closely with her over the past few months.

He saw her trying to put up a brave front for those around her. He noted that her smile never reached her eyes and he saw the pain hidden in their depths. It bothered him tremendously. She was delicate and strong, determined and selfless and when it came to her family fierce and loving. 'How could Arjun be so careless to let a girl like that fall through his grasp?'

An incoming email interrupted Karan's thoughts and as he read it contents, he exhaled slowly. He read and reread those seven absurdly, fantastic words and he almost shouted with excitement. This was it! The information he was waiting for! He closed his eyes to relish the new information and he sent up a silent prayer to the heavens thanking his good fortune.

"Listen up gang." Karan said as he stood up. "There's going to be a slight change of plans. We will be heading to London this Friday instead of next Friday so please make the arrangements with your families. As previously discussed, you will each have two open tickets you can give to your family members so they can visit you during your stay there. If anyone has any questions, please see me after the meeting. Thank you all for your hard work."

The associates all chatted excitedly as they gathered their things and filed out of the office. Karan wanted to make sure there were no surprises ahead.

"Miss Deshmukh, do you have a few minutes?"

"Yes sir"

"I know you have a special situation as you are unmarried and that your sister was accompanying you on this trip. Is that correct?"

"Yes sir"

"Can you have your parents come in to meet me tomorrow to work out the details of your stay? I would like to make sure they are ok with the arrangements and to make sure that I address any other concerns they may have. Is that alright?"

"Uh yes sir. Of course, sir. That would absolutely be fine."

"Ok then. I will see you all tomorrow. Good afternoon Miss Purvi."

"Good afternoon sir."

Purvi walked out of Karan's office with a smile on her face. 'What a considerate man!' she mused. ' He thought of my situation and wanted to make sure it was good for my parent's peace of mind. He really is a great boss.'

Karan saw Purvi's smile as she walked out and gave himself a mental pat on the back. 'Solid move, old chap. Now you just have to get her to like you.' After that email, Karan knew his world had changed. He now understood why he had to meet her.

Karan smiled, he had big plans for Purvi' big plans.

Dear Laurie,
How did KD know about Arjun and Ovi's broken engagement if I understood correctly? Another twist...

I also thought you did great justice in bringing out all the important and wonderful facets of Purvi, as we know her...her hiding her pain...smile not reaching her eyes...beautifully put👏.

At least KD calls her Ms. Deshmukh...mujhe humare Arjun ki yaad dila gayi...but Ms. Purvi kehne ka haq to sirf use he hai apne Arjun ko...😉...

The seven letter word in the email...hmmm...wonder wonder...business ya personal hai...hmmm...

KD understood why he had to meet her- meaning Purvi? His world had changed after that email...again has to be linked to his life so impacting business and personal...what is that seven letter word...hmmm...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Laurie, you mischievous girl, I am sure you are in love with this guy yourself!😉 I have never seen a more meticuloulsy worshipful description of the male of the species, but then I am not a Mills and Boon aficionado, so perhaps that explains it.

Arjun has been quite cast in the shade, poor chap, with his less-than-Greek nose and square face, and no hazel orbs either! Not to speak of "a perfectly proportionate nose and provocative, full lips worthy of many sonnets". Oh, Laurie, Laurie! You are downright WICKED!!

Not that I am complaining. I like the characters,especially the men, to be as good looking as possible, and no one can fault your Mr. Karan Dhanjani on this count. If he was in the movies, he would give Bo Derek a run for her money - a perfect 10 ain't it!

Well, it would be nice if Purvi falls for this guy to some extent at least; Arjun should have to fight for his girl a lot more than he got away with the last time.

Thanks for feeding us Chapter 6 just when PR seems headed for a new, hysterical low. It will help me, and I am sure the rest of the gang too, cope with the deluge of extreme unpleasantness that is going to land on us this coming week. You, my dear, are a life saver!

Shyamala

HAHAHA LAURIE!!!! You goofball!!! **grins** I agree with Shyamala! You, and by now the rest of us reading the story, are in love with this guy too!! Karan DHANJANI??? 6'3, hazel eyes, "winged aristocratic eyebrows" ,fair, lithe body, hand picks employees, youngest businessman to amass this type of wealth and business presence? With a guy like this, who needs poor AK?? I'm hoping that if Arjun keeps his mouth shut while Purvi is getting slapped around because of him, that the CVs read this story and come up with a guy like Karan for Purvi!!!😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi my dear friend laurie, again lovely post⭐️⭐️⭐️...you introduced another good character Karan Dhanjani👏👏...If any other producer(not Ektha this is beyond ektha's mindset) see your posts definately he will start new serial...may be they will call you fr the script writer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arch, didn't expect that kind of reaction from you, tsk, tsk, that too about your own ladla beta! 😆
Me too, hoping Arjun keeps mum so the CV's can bring Laurie's Karan for Purvi. Arjun can eat his heart out.
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Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Arch, didn't expect that kind of reaction from you, tsk, tsk, that too about your own ladla beta! 😆

Me too, hoping Arjun keeps mum so the CV's can bring Laurie's Karan for Purvi. Arjun can eat his heart out.



Still no action from Arjun...It would be great if CV's bring Laurie's new hero karan for sweet purvi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Arch, didn't expect that kind of reaction from you, tsk, tsk, that too about your own ladla beta! 😆

Me too, hoping Arjun keeps mum so the CV's can bring Laurie's Karan for Purvi. Arjun can eat his heart out.

u know Jhanvi I do love my beta and hope to God he does his mamma proud and slaps that bimbo back either Verbally or physically. 😉 I can and have tolerated a lot like any good "mother" for my ladlamAls...but keeping mum while watching Purvi get slapped and abused for loving him is simply too much- even for me. Given the circumstances and the truth of their history--simply put--it would be a gross injustice--which of course I cannot condone.

So even I am waiting to see the outcome...will he stand with her or note?? Make no mistake...I still think my ladla is best for Purvi...but if he fails us then Laurie's Karan will do nicely!! And we will stop watching PR and create our own version here instead!!! 😊

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