The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
Janhvi,

The fact is that by now, Archana, having watched with growing despair as her so-called son piles blunder upon blunder, is convinced that he is a changeling, as no son of hers could be THIS dumb and incompetent. That is why she is washing her hands of him with celerity.

Whether she is also switching to Karan Dhanjani as her real ladla beta (there is no Mama Dhanjani is evidence to react fiercely to any such claims, so the road seems clear) is the 64000 $ question. Let us see.

This said, I do not think Arjun will keep quiet and not defend Purvi. Janhvi, you might have seen what I wrote to you in another thread, where you had said that his staying mum would mean that his marriage with Purvi would not happen for a long time. I has said there:

"NOT 'for a long time". For keeps.

If Arjun does not come to the aid of Purvi at this juncture, grab her hand, tell off the whole of the wretched Deshmukh clan, and drag her out of the chawl with him even if she hangs back to go to the aid of her aai (WHAT is Purvi doing there anyway? I thought Archana had told her to stay away?), we should all wash our hands of him for good. There are no two ways about that.

This said, I think he will deliver, for if the lines written for him are different, his character will be totally finished. I do not think that is going to happen. He is the second lead after all.

Finally, I hope all this drives at least a modicum of sense into Purvi's thick, sanskaari head, and she thinks twice in the future before issuing unconditional guarantees for Punni tayee, and waxing eloquent about how Ovi Ma'am trusts her and how she must not let her down. Ugh! She makes me downright queasy, the dumb female. If this is what sanskaars are all about, I would rather not have any."

Incidentally, several members have wondered about how KD has such detailed and up to date knowledge about both Arjun and Purvi. I had speculated about his having a mole among the Ks and Ds. This cannot be Punni, as someone had suggested, for she would know nothing about Ovi and Arjun having split up. Maybe there are 2 moles!

Also, I doubt if KD is Soham. He seems to be older than Arjun and Purvi; if people have been working for him for over 7 years and more, he must be near 30. Soham must have been about 3-4 years old when he disappeared, and so he must be only around 22. (Not that any of this logic applies to the terminally illogical Balaji products, but still).

Purvi, having worked for the former firm for 2 1/2 years and for OVT for some months, making 3 years in all, must be at least 22, as she must have finished college before beginning to work. Arjun must also have got a college degree and probably an MBA as well, which would make him 23-24 at the least. Ovi and Teju should be 20.

Shyamala

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Arch, didn't expect that kind of reaction from you, tsk, tsk, that too about your own ladla beta! 😆

Me too, hoping Arjun keeps mum so the CV's can bring Laurie's Karan for Purvi. Arjun can eat his heart out.

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Shyamala...haha..What is 64000 $ question. 1Million changed to 64k due to currency rate increase...
Love this.. Not that any of this logic applies to the terminally illogical Balaji products, but still
Ekta/CVs please.. lot of us, ARVI fans are counting on Thursday episode. We want Arjun to do the right thing.
We all know that Thursday episode is still not shot due to RD's SA trip.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Shyamala,

I like your idea of 2 moles...makes sense...but who...Savita on the Deshmukh side -again- like i am expecting her to have had a hand in Soham's disappearance...the evil lady that she is...
Thank you for your humor which i didn't quite catch in the same manner on the other post 😉 - but definitely agreed to your point of knowing your ground- and one thing being one's strong point...all well understood...
Well analyzed on the ages of ARVI, KD and Tej Ovi, very logically deduced...
Can't wait for Thursday...and hoping that what you say about our Arjun is true and pans out that way, else...OMG...not only will Arch disown him, we too will have nothing to do with him...but you give me hope that he is 2nd lead after all...
And if nothing, there is the everlasting fountain of hope that Laurie will come through for us in yet another gripping, moving the story along with its twists and turns...chapter...so at least we will have that to look forward to over the weekend...
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very well written...Having read a lot of M&B's in my teens, Karan reminds me so much of a Mills & Boon Hero...too perfect to be true !! :):)
But, still loved it... keep going !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Laurie,

I hasten to assure you, at the outset, that this is positively the last post from me on your Chapter 6, at least for now. I have been working on something quite different and official, and in between, I keep getting these ideas that I want to put down before I forget them. Sorry!

I am sure you have chosen the name Karan quite deliberately. After all, the two greatest protagonists at the mahayuddh at Kurukshetra were precisely Karan and Arjun, and Karan was the noblest of them all, like Achilles in the Iliad. He was always my favourite in the Mahabharata, the archtype of the doomed, tragic hero. I do not knwo if this Karan fits this archtype, but I love the name.

Secondly, you have given this dreamboat to end all dreamboats so definitely a royal look that for a moment I thought that were importing Udayveer into your story. Not that Uday is SO good looking ( in fact, I do not think there can be such perfection in any real life person, alas!In terms of bosses, Purvi really gets the pick!!), and he is definitely not 6'3".

In fact, having made Karan taller than anyone else I know except Abhishek Bachchan (who is no competition at all in the looks department, poor chap), you must now see to it that Purvi does not get a crick in the neck every time she has to look up at him (she already looks up to him, evidently!).

Poor Arjun is barely 3" taller than she is; I am convinced that the real reason Purvi sticks to flats is that in 4" heels, she would be taller, and that would never do, would it?

That is IT, and bye for now.

Shyamala

Dear Shyamala - Yes, yes very wicked 😉 🤣
I AM in love with Karan 😳 if only I could find him 😉
Actually to me he looks more like Hrithik Roshan in Dhoom 2 with a few enhancements 😉 I didn't know Purvi was that short - maybe I may need to make some alterations? 😆
I've never read Mills and Boons either - my mum kept us too busy. Guess it came around full circle.😆 She'll have a great laugh when I show her this. 🤣
The funny thing about moles - sometimes they don't know they ARE moles 😉
And yes, the name Karan was deliberate - its all about the balance right? ☯️
Hope you liked it 😃
Laurie
P.S. The Iliad is one of my faveys too 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jamkarajj

axiom123, you are really great. You have your way to this wonderful story. Wish the PR team is reading your story so at least it will be guide for their misleading and confusing path. Well Done! and keep up the good work.

Thank you Jamkarajj 😃
I hope so - that would be awesome. There are so many great stories on the forum that they could totally revamp PR and have a hit for years.
If only...
Hope you enjoy the rest 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

great update!!! Oh no this Karan, handsome, considerate, and nice??? I'm half in love with him!!

Thank you 😃
I'm in love with him too - I might just write myself in the story as his love interest 🤣
That would be awesome 😆
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Laurie, that was yet again a brilliant post. I like Karan a lot though I love ARVI too. Yes, it will be great to see Arjun try to win back his girl. I wish the best for Karan. It would be sad if he ended up like Vinay, but I know that in your capable and intelligent hands you will do justice to Karan and not turn him evil for the sake of ARVI being together as the CVs did with Vinay and Ovi. Great update once again. 👏



Thanks Nina 😃
I like Karan alot too 😳 so there's no chance of him being evil... HOTTT but not evil 🤣
I am an ARVI's Angel all the way but our Boy Wonder (Arjun) has fallen from grace so many times that i feel he does need to prove his worth to our Princess Purvi.
Hope you enjoy the rest 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purethought

Laurie, loved the sixth chapter as well👍🏼😳

Neat descriptions
Well thought
Patiently written
Plot is going good..
😳
.. Karan is an intriguing character (your description of him is great and I like that we have some good background information on him before the story moves further on) and Purvi likes him too.😆 -- so looking forward to the next chapter. I kinda like this Karan guy😆 just the right man to turn Arjun green with envy😆

Thanks Trish 😃
Oh yes Karan 😍 he's been on my mind for a while now 😳
Arjun really needs to earn Purvi's love now. just confessing isn't enough.
What's epic about just realizing you love her Arjun? You started out great - it lasted TWO days 😕
More like EPIC FAIL!
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nalonynnej

I guess I am the only one with an immediate aversion to Karan? 😆 He's just to surreal for my taste. I would accept Arjun, with his flaws and all, over Karan any day! 😊

Thanks Nalonynne 😃
I love Arjun too 😆 he just needs some competition 😉
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up

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