Archu Kidnapped!!Part 6 added on page 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: gaurimisha

😆...thnx...boring sunday is off to a grt start...after reading this.

yup,true this looks like mills n boon version of PR...well,havnt ever read mills n boon but know wht it is all abt.

Hmmmm....going to mauritius..haha...not to swizerland😆

howz ur leg now...hope triplets r doin fine.

Thks 4 commentg hope the week brings somethg gd in Pr out of the mess it is in!1
Leg is quite ok got 2 go 2 work 2morrow triplets watchg cartoons n r fine. Hav a nice Sunday n hav fun

Originally posted by: Asther

hi omsshree it was nice

finally they got married hope same thing happen in pr.eagerly waiting for next part

Thks Asther will edit nex part nex week but will visit forum everyday of course hav a fun sunday sweety!!😉

Originally posted by: SaffyFlower

Jaaanu meri Jaan😆Mein tujh pey qurbaan😆

for makin Manav sing-mein tera tu meri jaaney saara hindustan😆

Ok-my fav uptil now is this- Archu to Manav -

"Ur thopri has again gone nut? Nobody misbehaved with me why r u so charged up? U r the most confused person on Earth - 1 day u avoid me 1 day u kidnap me!! How can u do such a ghattya cheez Manav aapse yeh umiid nahi thi. why r standing like Gautam Buddh?"🤣

Perfecto -gussa hi karna hai tho thoda bombayya ishtyle mein he sahi😆Gautam Budhh indeed-buddhu with no buddhi wants to buddy-up with his babe now😆

And my 2nd fav(and this competes big time with the above😆) -Manav telling archu-

"Baar mein jaaye shravni"🤗babe

And for dedicating to smitten saffy (hey,u comin up with names for me now😆),GM,TanyaDi and all PRians -am glad the day I replied to ur post in KoolDi's thread the first time😛

Glad to see Damo and satish gettin due credit - am waiting to hear ur gaalis on savita😆hey,lubdub ur hindi yaar -who wants to listen to ArMan Ghazal-ing in URdu anyways😆unla 4 shabdh bol diya,aur usmey I lOve U <ArMan name> rahey,is all the basic hinglish they need to know😆

baaki sab muh bandh aur haath paaun hilaaye, bas hai😆

Liked archu teasin mannu,these 2 need a SOH badly 😆else they r gonna get humored by us all big time like this😆

Ya,am glad they eloped yaar in ur story-arey 'danaa dan daud' key bina kya mohabbat😆baite baite jeeney ka sahaara aint my type of show😆

u goin Topsy gal for ArMan👏- now turvy for the vamps pls,then my whistles will be paisa vasool😆And no villains pls,Jay comin to the barn for honeymoon with u-know-who now,the barn seems to be most happening place,eh😆ArMan can sing PR songs at mauritius😆barn for Aradhana songs😉

Saffy u r in full form yaar!! I was also thinking 2 provide some masala where Savita gets all the washing she deserves but i'm kind of short of vocabulary - i like hindi gaalis so much u c but un4funately i'm kind of limited. I'm just good in romance kya karein !! 😆Let me get inspired by u n others n wil come with it soon but i wont mind writg somethg hot abt Jay comg 2 the barn with u know whom😉 ur wish is my command, order kijye Smitten Saffy Ji😆 Will Pm u if u want it 2 b personal treat😆😆

uuuuuffaaaaaaaaaa finally a romantic scene of arman!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
wow and sooooooo many responses!!!!!! see omshree i told u ppl will love ur story.... and now im sooooooooooooooo happy u continued 😊 😊 😊

plsssss update soooooooon..... me droolin over arman romantic scenes... 😳 😳

Today I read the first part ....evry very interesting ...Will read all of them and let you know ..I am liking it ..I wish they would show Manav this way , but they make him look like an emotionless statue ...

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

uuuuuffaaaaaaaaaa finally a romantic scene of arman!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
wow and sooooooo many responses!!!!!! see omshree i told u ppl will love ur story.... and now im sooooooooooooooo happy u continued 😊 😊 😊

plsssss update soooooooon..... me droolin over arman romantic scenes... 😳 😳

Hi Nad happy u read n like it will post nex week do visit
loads of lov chiao

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Today I read the first part ....evry very interesting ...Will read all of them and let you know ..I am liking it ..I wish they would show Manav this way , but they make him look like an emotionless statue ...

Yeah that is the problem with PR's CV they never listen 2 the audience god knows wat crap they'll show this week!!

Read part 2 as well, even better than part 1..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Read part 2 as well, even better than part 1..👍🏼

Saffy is asking me 2 write some Savita bashing n washing in my next part. Do u think i should? I think it will b good 2 show wat the parents r doing n thinking while our lovebirds r away in Mauritius. Wat u think?