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Tanyaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yes Omi ( can I call you that or do you have another nick name ) ....I would love to read about savita bashing ...This woman is the reason why her son has behaved this way to archana ...

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tanyaz
Yes Omi ( can I call you that or do you have another nick name ) ....I would love to read about savita bashing ...This woman is the reason why her son has behaved this way to archana ...

U call me that no problem coz my name i kind of too long. I'll try 2 write this segment then on Bitchy Savita n Silly Sulo the 2 ping pong balls they r doing my headg these days😡 The week end was completely ruin thks 2 them

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SaffyFlower

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Posted: 15 years ago

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HEy Jaanu ! No preassure yaar -just let go and give savita good,all fantasy pooree kardo😆savita jealous that archu gets a handsom husband and honeymoon to boot😆and the devi-devta come back with baby in hand,unkey teesrey aasman key level mein sab kuch supersonic hota hai na😆😆savita aur phoons ki tho aisee ki taisee ho jaye -savita shud move out into phoons phlat so that mannu's own baby can have its own room😆that room decorated in archu's yellow and green sarees😆savita changing diapers and doin sulo type jaadoo paaunch seva at phoons phlat😆arey,waah am relishin this sooo much,I wish sulo's chinese torture scenes had been more detailed,so that it can be applied to savita with a greater twist😕

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SaffyFlower

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Actually sorry yaar Jaans😳I shud encourage u to write what u r best at,and u r terrific with mauritius mei majaa manav aur archana ki😆so continue -savita sulo sab bhaad mein jaaye,who cares abt these sickos when passion is passing by😉

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi i'm ready with my next segment. Hope u'll like it but i wrote it in a rush. I was at work n was thinking of u Tanya. I must say hats off 2 u 4 ur stand i can understand ur disapointmt these days coz i know that Pr is more than a show 4 u. I'm not that active in the forum n was more a silent reader but ppl like u made me feel interested 2 interact here. U r a gem of a person n u r always here 2 boost our moral so i want 2 do the same. Hoping 2 bring a smile on ur face, here i go:

Part 5:

Arman r literally in heaven in Mauritius. satish booked a nice hotel 4 them and the warm weather, the sandy beaches n the romantic atmosphre did the rest 4 our shy Arman to drop their inhibitions n shyness 2 hav a well dserved honeymoon unaware of wat is happening at the same time in their respective homes.

In the chawl:
Emotional blackmailg is at its peak with Shrav fillg Savitaz ears threateng her 2 leave with Sacchu n never comg bak. She is also fumg abt how Archu the hypocrite has been playg double games n has been eatg the banana at both ends.
Savita in a nagging tone is sayg:
Its been 4 dayz that Arman hav gone n Manav has not even contacted us. I am worried. Mera Manav aisa bhi kar sakta hain, yeh soch soch ke meri jaan jaa rahi hain.

Dam baba is listening n mutters: Vixen never die Savita!!
Savita: Eh bhevre kya bakwaas kar rahe ho. U enjoyg na? All this is happeng thks 2 u, u never leave an opptunity 2 fill my bholu Manav's head with this Archu. I want spare this girl. Aneh do ous manhoos ko if i dont twist her neck my name is Savita nahi!!
Dam baba: Exactly! U shudnt hav been named savita. the name doesnt suit u. Ur name shud hav been GECKO. U know the reptile on the verge of extinction?
savita: Kya matlab?
Baba: Matlab yeh ke just like a gecko u just changes colours evry now n then to suit urself. He continues angrily:
Archana ab manhoos ban gayi!! U shud b ashamed at urself. I can understand when Shrav bashes Archu coz of her selfish lov but u Savita? Arent u the one who 1 year bak was askg Manav 2 put sindoor in Archuz maang? Arent u the same who was going paagal jab archu went away after 3 months stay n was begging n sheddg crocodile tears 4 Manav 2 bring her bak?

Savita is speechless n looks down. Shrav is glaring at baba n is thinkg- OMG if aai changes her mind i wont get Manav bak i must do somethg. She says: Baba u hav no right 2 speak like this 2 aai. I know u love Archana more than me n u hav always been unfair 2 me baba but i kept quiet. But at least think abt Sacchu, dont b unfair...
Dam baba cuts in: Bas Shrav no emotional blakmailg with me. Its not workg on me. I lov my grandson more than anythg but i equally lov my son, my Manav. He has been the pillar of this house since the age of 16 sacrificg himself 4 his parents, brother n sister, 4 u n Sacchin's mistakes 4 this selfish woman (pointg at Savita)

Savita: He Bhevre! Baba:Chup laraaku aurat agar mein bhevre par utar aya na to teri khair nahi!!
In a sad tone: Manav did only 1 thing without ur permission- PYAAR. Aur tumhe yeh hazam nahi hui Savita. U snatched my son's lov n happiness playg with the maternal lov n zimmedaari cards.
Savita glaring: Dekho...
Baba: I'm not listeng 2 ur crap. Aur Savita tum ne jo Arman ke zindagi mein kiya na tumhe toh chulloo bhar paani mein doob marna chahiye!! Mothers do everthg 4 their childrens hapiness but u r doing all 4 ur selfishness n happiness- 1st 4 Sacchin over Manav n now Sacchu over Manav!!
Thks 2 u mera beta hero se zero ban gaya. Looking up he concludes: but thk u Bappa u saved my Manav on time n he ran away from this hell.
Savita is completely shut 4 now.

The sama maajra is going on in Archuz house. All karanjkars r sittg n trying 2 get out of the shock.
Silly Sulo has had several ashtma attacks thinkg that her adarsh beti has eloped. Hen pecked Satish is sittg quietly while hot potato Dharmesh is makg histerical fists. He is blabbering:
i wont spare this Manav. He is playg with Archu, aane do us Manav ko i'll put him in jail.
His pretty wife is lookg at him weirdly with a look which seems 2 b sayg:
wats wrong with this Fatty? His saali has run away not his wife. Why is he gettg hyper? I'm also wonderg is he gettg jealous of Manav?
On 2nd thought: Wat nonsense i'm talkg. Who will like 2 sit on the hot fry pan Manav is occupying? Its true Manav is tall, slim n handsome but my hubby is no less. He is a successful man (not a loser), he is stable n practical (not a ping pong ball) n above all he has a good set of lower jaw n teeth no surgery needed!!

Silly Sulo is talkg her usual crap: Bappa aap mujh se kis janam ka badla le rahe ho? Mein aur meri Archu hav been ur devotees n fast 4 u on sankasti. Aaj meri adarsh beti is gettg badnaam n mere sanskaar is being challenged u r watchg silently.
Manju is listeng n laddo is phuttg in her heart: Good 4 this silly woman n her natakwaali beti!!
Vinod is tryg 2 say somthg but becchara is so shockd- his maa jaisi behen bhaag gayi!
Everready 2 blow Varsha says: aai dont blame ur sanskaar.
Manohar who is sittg ready 2 hav a heart fail adds his fav dialogue: Varshe theek kehrahi hain Sulochana!!

Pressure cooker varsha turning 2 Satish: Kuch karo na Satish. Why dont u go n search 4 them?
seeing Satish not budging from there she says: Dont tell me u agree with wat they hav done?
An enraged Satish: Oh shut up woman. u think i'm some taro leaves on which u pour water n they do not get wet. Get down ur horse i'm fed up with ur nakraas.
He continues: Yes i agree with wat Manav has done. U guys will never let them live in peace. They r grown up dammit not doodh pita bacchas!! They can take care of themselves n assume responsibilities of their acts. If u r so interested in changing nappies why dont u hav a baby?
Nakchari varsha got her dose n shuts up. Dharmu who was riding his horse some minutes later too shuts up.

both families r sittg in their respective drawg room in a heavy silence. It's time may b 4 reflections until Arman come bak.
Dam baba n Satish r secretly enjoyg their victory. They only hope that when Arman come bak they will not let themselves pressurised by emotional atiachaar.

Bye buddies. Do tel me if u like n share ur comments.

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gaurimisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

great one.😃

Liked how Damo shut up Savita.

I so wish to see this in the show.This lady just angers me.

So sweet of u to dedicate it to Tanya.She truly is a gem.😃...PR is Rani.😃

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vidya_955

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

🤣 My stomach hurts from reading that part!!!!! Awesome part!!!! Can't wait until ArMan come back and give everyone the shock of their lives. Luvv Dam Baba and Satish😊!!!

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Tanyaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Awww .. .thank yo uso much Omi ....

That is so sweet of you. I really really appreciate it ..🤗

I loved it ....Salochna getting asthma attack , satish , how clever he is ....

Loved damodar sorting out that old witch savita ...

Great job ...but honestly you guys should be on the writing team intead of the morons there . Omi , did you see hwo they made kachra out of manav's chaarcetr totally today ....

Your manav is 100 times better ....

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tanyaz
Awww .. .thank yo uso much Omi ....
That is so sweet of you. I really really appreciate it ..🤗

I loved it ....Salochna getting asthma attack , satish , how clever he is ....

Loved damodar sorting out that old witch savita ...

Great job ...but honestly you guys should be on the writing team intead of the morons there . Omi , did you see hwo they made kachra out of manav's chaarcetr totally today ....

Your manav is 100 times better ....

this is pure harassment which era r these morons livg i ask myself

Edited by omshreejaanu - 15 years ago