Archu Kidnapped!!Part 6 added on page 8

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vidya_955

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

👍🏼YAY!!!! They finally reach a gud decision!!! Can't wait for the next part, maybe throw in some romance😳😍😍

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gaurimisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

All I hav to say is:

Wish this cud happen in PR land.

U neednt improve but PR CVs need to.Keep it up.

Loved it.

Edited by gaurimisha - 15 years ago

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: deepa101
👍🏼YAY!!!! They finally reach a gud decision!!! Can't wait for the next part, maybe throw in some romance😳😍😍

n i was thinking i was making the mills m boon version of PR ok dr i wud throw some more romance in 4th part 😆😆

Edited by omshreejaanu - 14 years ago

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SaffyFlower
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Dont tel me Saffy u like everythg wheres ur humour tooth i lov ur jokes so u can poke fun too i wont mind babe!!😉

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SweetFifi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: SaffyFlower
Jaanu -mez dreamin after reading ur update😍Never thot anybody cud make Manav soo passionate😆sharmila tagore in Aradhana😛Yaaay,pls continue

Will ping KoolDi,she will enjoy this immensely😆Gundi gang soo parched to see some apavitrata in this dumb serial😆

i quite agree with saffy here...keep it comin jaanu (plz tell me the meaning of ur name), i loved it..btw i must let you know that i am a (or was in my day) a huge fan of Mills and Boon😆😆

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hi omshree,

extreeeeeeeeeemly sorry for da late response cz i ws out da whole day yesterday and didn't hav to time to visit IF

oooooooh dear u got our archu kidnapped 😆 😆 stuuuuupid jaywant... hell with him hehe... poor poor poor manav.... dis sooooooo awesome yar.. u hav to continue

lots of love
nads

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
hi omshree,

extreeeeeeeeeemly sorry for da late response cz i ws out da whole day yesterday and didn't hav to time to visit IF

oooooooh dear u got our archu kidnapped 😆 😆 stuuuuupid jaywant... hell with him hehe... poor poor poor manav.... dis sooooooo awesome yar.. u hav to continue

lots of love
nads

No problem 4 the late response n thks Nad 4 ur comment will write the 4th part this weekend

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hello Friends i will like 2 dedicate this segment 2: Smitten Saffy (by Jay who else)😉, Furious Fifi (coz she wants 2 say bad words while watching PR these days), Batman n Robin who want 2 quit Pr land coz they are so p....off n all PRians who r completely down this weekend after watching the promo. So lets vent our frustration 2gether.

Part 4:

Manav and Archana stay in each otherz arms near the fire 4 hours coz they havnt enjoyed these moments ever in their life. They fell in lov n got married but there was always havoc around. Manav shifts 2 gaze at Archu who is lying her eyes closed. Looking at her beautiful face he cant help from telling himself: This woman just touches my heart in a wonderful way i hope that she remains with me 4ever n i can face anythg with her around.
He moves closer 2 touch her face when she opens her eyes. Manav says:
U were sleeping?
- No i was enjoying this blissful moment.
- U're hungry? Archu shrugs n says - Not really!
- But i hav something 4 u.
Manav goes 2 his bag n takes out a tiffin which he hands 2 Archu. A pleasantly surprised Archu opens it 2 find her fav dish pohe. She smiles brightly n Manav says: Baba sent it 4 u.
Confused Archu: Baba? He knows...
Manav nods n says: Actually it's Babaz plan that i hav executed.

( So that's it!! We were all thinking how come lallu Manav got such a brilliant idea? Thks 2 old sweet n sly Dam baba. God bless this old chap😛)
Archuz eyes fills with tears at the thought of Dam baba who has always loved n supportd her even when her love doubted her. She will never let this father figure down, never.
Archu takes out some pohe n giv it 2 Manav when the badmaash pretends that his arm is aching n no need 2 tell u that Archu raani starts feeding him - the thing she is best at!!😉
They eat by looking lovingly at each other n smilingly sheepishly. Suddenly Archuz expression changes, she stands up n turns her back n stares outside. A worried Manav goes 2 her n says : Wats wrong Archu?
- Nothg. I just wish we dont hav 2 go from here.
Manav turns her round: We will hav 2 go but not b4 we r married.
A puzzled Archu: Married? Manav: Yes i promised Baba that I'm only coming bak with his bahu.
Archu: How is it possible? Manav: U dont worry. Baba n I hav planned everythg!
Archu in a teasing tone: Oh i c. U hav become very naughty Manav!!
Manav: Talkig of being naughty, dont u think we hav 2 discuss abt 1 important thing?
Archu: Wat? Manav lookg lovingly at her: Our honeymoon?
Archu: Chee!! Manav aapse yeh umid nahi thi!!

Manav's face drops 4 a sec- OMG is archu serious? No tan ka rishta only man ka rishta? It's true that i can gaze at her million dollar face all life but i'm a normal guy. Bappa yeh kya ho raha hain mere sath?.
4tunately Archu was jokg n a relieved Manav says teasingly: So hum Mahabaleshwar chale?
Archu: NO Switzerland
- Why dont we go 2 Mauritius then?
Archu pouts n asks: Kyun aapko Switzerland pasand nahi? Mauritius mein snow nahi.
- Ho but Mauritius mein bahut sunshine hain it will keep our heart n ourselves warm!!😉

They go on talkg some more sweet nonsense, teasing n laughing n go 2 sleep in each others arms .
(Aap jo aye Zindagi mein tune going full swing😃)

The nex morning Archu wakes up 2 find a box n a note at her side. It is a beautiful orange n green saree n the note says: "Get ready Archu i'm coming 2 take my bride!" Manav
15 mins later an excited Manav opens the door 2 c Archu looking like she has never lookd b4. Manav is in awe in front of her coz he stil humbly feels that she is too good n beautiful 4 him. His heart cant stop repeating- god how much i love her!!
(Sathya music playg- i like this tune n thinks it's more apt 4 Arman)
He puts his arms 4ward n Archu reaches out 4 him. They look at each other n Manav kisses her 4head and whispers- lets go Archu. An emotional Archu nods.

The taxi stops at the mandir where Dam baba is watg 4 them. Archu has tears in her eyes. Being the family n traditional rooted girl she was sad 4 gettg married without the blessings of her elders esp her mom who has been a friend 4 her but now she feels more confident 2 take the plunge.
Arman walk up the stairs 2 find Satish waitg in front of Bappa. Manav n Satish hug n Archu stares at them. Satish tells Archu: Manav called me this morning. I am very happy 4 u coz i know Arman can never b happy without each other!.

Arman get married n do the saath pheres again but with new resolutions in front of Bappa n 2 witnesses who hav always supported them n hav genuinely b their well wishes. Wat can they ask more from Bappa?
The mariage ceremony is done n as gift Satish hands them 2 tickets to... Mauritius 2 spend 1 week coz they'll hav 2 b home the nex week 4 Ganesh chaturtee as promised.

To be cont. Watch out 4 Arman romantic encounter in the paradise of the Indian Ocean! Fasten ur seat belt 4 a trip 2 Mauritius nex week!
U like it press the button. Comment, poke fun or suggest. U r all most welcome

Edited by omshreejaanu - 14 years ago