Archu Kidnapped!!Part 6 added on page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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funny
plz be the part f PR cv's
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRnerd

i think cv's need to hire you to be on their team...this forum rocks more than the darn show



Thks babe i'll try the romance part this time i mean Arman in Mahabaleshwar!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part2
Archu is in the car realising wat is happeng 2 her n gets angry. Wat does Manav think he's doing? Has he gone mad? He's been behavg so peculiarly these days. She tries 2 catch his attentn by askg him questions but Manav just stares in front of him. Archu starts panicking, not that she is afraid of Manav, she can never b afraid or in danger with this man, she feels more secured when he is around n she can travel 4 life with him but somethg is definitely wrong coz Manav will never act this way.
She murmurs his name softly n when he turns up, seeing his determined look, she knows that her life is going 2 gear up a u turn n she's afraid that she wont b able 2 do somethg abt it coz this man just affects her in the most strangest n wonderful way. There is nothing 2 say now, no need 2 create a scene in the car, spicing up the driver's imagination coz he is havg a blast time😆 They sit silently till they reach a barn in a remote place, They step down n Manav takes his bag n pays the driver. The car moves away but Archu does not budge from there compelling Manav 2 drag her in the barn n he locks the door.
Archu glares at him n asks him wat the hell is going on. We all know that Archu's tongue can really wag at time n poor Manav gets blasted.
Wat r u up to? R u out of ur mind? Ur thopri has again gone nut? Nobody misbehaved with me why r u so charged up? U r the most confused person on Earth - 1 day u avoid me 1 day u kidnap me!! How can u do such a ghattya cheez Manav aapse yeh umiid nahi thi. why r standing like Gautam Buddh? Speak up dammit!!😆
( Now hold on i know i'm exagerratg but it's just 4 fun)
Manav: I love u Archana.
Archu feels like Dharti maata has just slipped from beneath her feet n with her heart racing stammers: But Shrav.....
Manav: Bhaar mein jaye Shravni. I am not thinkg of anybdy else now only u n me. I am here 2 win my love bak n i'll not budge from here til u accept me coz i know u lov me too. They stare at each other n move closer as they remember all those cute n hot moments they ever spent 2gether.
( Yes guys u must b thinking is it not too farfetched, hav i ever miss any hot scene bet them? dont worry but 4 Arman changing shirt n eyelockg r synonymous 2 love making n is the hottest trend in PR land)😆
But just as Manav is about 2 hold her, Archu has flashbak of a pleading n begging Savita ( dhat teri ki!!). She stiffens n says: U seem 2 4get that it's not only abt u n Shrav now.
Manav: Wat do u mean?
Archu: I mean i'm engaged 2 Jaywant n i'm marrying him soon.
Manav stares at Archu motionless.
Avoiding his eyes Archu says: Now plz bring me bak home. My aai must be worried n may get some ashtma attacks thank 2 u n my fiance must b looking 4 me right now.😕
Manav's face is drained of all colour at the mention of Jaywant n glares at her. He replies:
If u r worried abt ur mom then ur time starts now coz i told u we r leaving here only when u r mine. We r going bak as husband n wife only. Now u decide r u ready 2 face the truth?
A panicked Archu stammers: but....
Manav turns away n goes to light a fire.The nite wud b long n full of tension with so much passion threatening 2 overflow.
To b cont..... Wat u think guys. Too Mills n Boon type? Too good or too bakwaas? U tel. Chiao
Edited by omshreejaanu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meetun66

funny

plz be the part f PR cv's

Thks Meet read the 2nd part n do comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow! Manav is actually really determined! Can't wait to read more😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG this was so goos i am telling you if story of pr goes like this it will break all the records of trp just loved what you wrote 👏👏👏👏 from me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivaniaroraji

OMG this was so goos i am telling you if story of pr goes like this it will break all the records of trp just loved what you wrote 👏 from me


Thks sweety i'll continue the story got loads of time these days do comment n encourage me buddies
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jaanu -mez dreamin after reading ur update😍Never thot anybody cud make Manav soo passionate😆sharmila tagore in Aradhana😛Yaaay,pls continue
Will ping KoolDi,she will enjoy this immensely😆Gundi gang soo parched to see some apavitrata in this dumb serial😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaffyFlower

Jaanu -mez dreamin after reading ur update😍Never thot anybody cud make Manav soo passionate😆sharmila tagore in Aradhana😛Yaaay,pls continue

Will ping KoolDi,she will enjoy this immensely😆Gundi gang soo parched to see some apavitrata in this dumb serial😆


My cousins tell me that my Manav is a duffer n that Pr is the most boring lovestory these days family sagas hav more romance so i'm just compensating!!

N u r rite this is a gundi forum coz nothg happens in the show we all hav 2 spice it up with the Ahem n all😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 3

There seems 2 b an eternal silence in the barn n then suddenly Manav walks out of the barn n closes the door from outside. Archu's heart leaps n her mind starts racing. She is unable 2 understand n blieve what's happening 2 her. A "khichree" is cooking in her head.
Is this Manav, my bhagwan, the one who only knows eyelockg n doing phew-phew in my eyes?Is it the same shy Manav whom we have 2 fish words from the mouth? No koi hamshakal hai!!
Wat nonsense am i talkg?
Archu is stil trapped in her thoughts when the door bursts open n a wet Manav comes in with some logs. He doesnt look at Archu n goes 2 light the fire. He starts sneezg. Oops! Manav has caught a cold n instinctively Archu says:
-U hav ur tablets?
Manav gazes n replies: no u hav them with u?
Archu doesnt reply but instead has flasbaks of the time when they were happy 2gether n Manav was sneezg.He has told Archu that he didnt need tablets coz he knows that archu will always b with him n that she will give him when he has a cold.

Archu looks at Manav who stares bak. She turns away n goes 2 sit in a corner. The nite is fallg. It is raining cats n dogs. It's cold outside but inside the barn it is loaded with tension. It is the longest nite in Arman's life, both being so restless n too aware of each otherz presence.
Manav is remembering all arman moments n how he fell in lov with the simplest yet the most beautiful girl he has set his eyes on.
Archu too is remembering their ups n downs n wat they faced 2gether- the doubts, humiliation, separation... She shivers at these thought n Manav sees it.
-"Come near the fire". Hearg Manav's voice Archu stiffens n looks up 2 say no but seeing Manav's pleadg eyes, she goes 2 sit there.
They both sit looking at the fire when Manav gently asks:
Can we talk now Archana?
Archu: There is nothg 2 talk about. (This Archu i tell u is a real nuisance at times!!)
Manav asks calmly: U really mean it? U really dont want 2 giv us a 2nd chance? Dont u think that we hav done much 4 others n that we need 2 think of ourselves now?
He knows that he has 2 tread this path very carefully, she is very vulnerable rite now n can reverse bak at anytime. He knows Archu very well- sweet, simple n bholi-bhali but stubborn Archu.

He adds gently: Plz Archana at least listen 2 me!!
Archu: u seem 2 4get that we r committed n a promise is a promise aap se hi sikha hain maine! I hav said yes 2 Jaywant.
She turns away n Manav in a clipped tone replies: Look at me Archana n tel me that u dont lov me n bappa ki kassam i'll leave u 4ever n never comg bak.
Archuz eyes fill with tears at the very thought of it n she looks down. Manav lifts up her face n gazes at her million dollar face. He reaches deep inside himself 2 articulate wat is in her heart. He says:
I was always unfair 2 u n discard ur feelings i had no rite 2 commit 2 shravni when u were still my wife. I want 2 apologise 4 my bhavior. Can u 4give me 4 being such an all time jerk?

Archu is sobbg now n Manav continues: I lov u Archana, i should never hav pushed u away like i did. I want u bak in my life- U R MY LIFE. I can never b happy without u i cant giv Shravni the happiness she dserves n she knows that. I dont want 2 b unfair anymore.
A vulnerable Archu stammers: Sa...sacchu?
Manav takes her hands in his: Dont worry abt Sacchu n blieve me he will be fine without this loveless n unhappy mariage. He cups her hands tightly n says: sacchu wil always hav his grand parents, kaka n kaki around (he smiles at her n she smiles bak uncertainly when he says this). Yes Shrav will take some time 2 understand but she will eventually. N she knows that Manav sirf Archana hi ke liye Hain!!

They stare at each other tears rollg on Archuz cheeks n Manav hold his breath- Plz Bappa dont let her turn me down he prayed.
This time listens coz God always help those who help themselves. Archu drops all her defences n leans on Manav. A moved Manav hug her bak n they hold o each other tightly as if afraid that some1 or destiny may rip them apart.

Archu cries all the tears of her eyes in Manav's arms coz she knows that she will hav 2 bestrong bak home. 2gether they'll have 2 face Jay n Shran. their wrath n even their curse.
Disturbing thoughts start croppg in Archuz mind- oh god wat r we doing. Arman selfish how is it possible? But she discard them this time we will bear all 2gether afterall we r each otherz strength in the face of adversity she says 2 herself.

Pavitra Rishta song going full swing!!

Press like buttonif u like n plz do comment n tel wat 2 improve P
Part 4 in the wkend


Edited by omshreejaanu - 15 years ago

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