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Posted: 14 years ago

#1111

nice part nikita. long and interesting.

when is the next part??😆

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Swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1112

Loved this part Nikki ❤️ Specially the second one...... 😊
Loved how Archu was worried for Manav........ 🤗
I hate Manju from the ventricles of my heart 🤢🤬 and love Manav the same way ❤️ . Ur ff brings back the golden days of pr...... 😃..........

Hope Manav to be happy soon....... 😃
I want Tarun back in pr He was such a sweet friend........😊
Well hope u post the next part soon 😆

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1113

@Tiya::: Thanks! I think the next part will be in a new thread, cos this thread is nearing 150 pages.

@Swatrocks:::: Glad to know you liked it Sweety!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1114

Dude-et this was a great double update!!!!!!!

I liked how the story of krishna and even ramayan was used in the end to describe savita and the deshmukhs- nicely done. i hope manav doesnt take the bait, but even if he does since this is PR reloded- i know it will make sense and wont have series of irrating shravani scenes like in the real pr. I was just thinking in an practical average joe case- if savitas true motives were clean and sincere for manav ( no greed) , a shravani-manav marraige would make sense and wouldnt be so bad, But since that is not the case and the "air is not cleared b/ them- or most of them, it changes the situation tremendously.

anyways.. great job. I look forward to reading the next parts.

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dhahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1115

Hi Nikita,

its a wonderful post i must say 👍🏼 !!! congrates!!! 👏 a long one... but no complaints at all 😆 ... but i m getting greedy that all your posts are longer with subparts 1,2 & 3 😛 as nowadays u r updating it very rarely...

i know u might be busy with ur studies or work, but still human mind s very greedy & it will never say enough.. that too when it can have a very good feast like this 😳 ... it will ask for more & more that too often 😉 ...

U r making me feel sad everytime i read ur FF that y PR couldnt be like this 😔 & make me wonder how it would have been if at all the plot goes on like this and what & how & all we would have enjoyed on watching this 😍 ... but we are in the side of disappointment...

atleast v get to read ur PR reloaded & v can imagine our Manav & Archana over here 😳 ...

usually my frnz used to tell me i'm very gud at guessing the track of any serial.. may be due to the experience of watching so many serials all these years...

but here nothing comes to my mind 😲 when i'm trying to guess how ur further plot would be... may be my mind is also become accustomed to the CV's track thanks to ekta's all old serials 🤢 ...

i'm utterly clueless on thinking about the further track 😕 ... but still i can imagine how they will reunite in all filmy style 😆 ... like Archana coming running all along the way from her home to Manav's & fall in his hands and crying out aloud how much she loves him whoever he is or whatever he is and how she cannot even think of her life without him & they will together face all the obstacles of the life together 😍 ... haai haai i cant wait for that day...

i would really love to see the expressions at that time on Savita Tai, Manjusha & Shravani 's faces but i mostly await for Manav's reactions.... how much shell shocked he would be that his eternal love comes herself to him even though she thinks himself to be guilty still she went back to him & surrendered herself to him 😍 ... ( but i m sure u will make it more difficult for her to accept bcoz i doubt by then Manav might have given in to his Aai's constant cribbing and she might have come to know about this & stops herself from expressing all her feelings for Manav thinking he decided to move on in his life.. but still she will make up her mind & finally might come back to him may be on the day of his Sakarpura r mariage day itself.. who knows 😕 )

Edited by dhahi - 14 years ago

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: curry-sistah
Dude-et this was a great double update!!!!!!!
I liked how the story of krishna and even ramayan was used in the end to describe savita and the deshmukhs- nicely done. i hope manav doesnt take the bait, but even if he does since this is PR reloded- i know it will make sense and wont have series of irrating shravani scenes like in the real pr. I was just thinking in an practical average joe case- if savitas true motives were clean and sincere for manav ( no greed) , a shravani-manav marraige would make sense and wouldnt be so bad, But since that is not the case and the "air is not cleared b/ them- or most of them, it changes the situation tremendously.

anyways.. great job. I look forward to reading the next parts.

Thanks!😊 I agree with what you said about Manav-Shravani match being a good one. My thoughts exactly. I hope I can update the next part quickly.😊

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1117

@dhahi: Thanks Dhahi! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Was nice to know your predictions. Now I hope you like when I present it... :-)

@Diya: Thankyou!

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--Hope--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1118

liked this part very much Nikki. Pace has improved.

liked the part where Manav ignores her and sends the bag with Vandita. good he seems to be reprioritizing his life.

Did not like the part where Varsha was so easily flummoxxed but considering that she is disoriented due to teh events in her life of late the part made sense.😃

Hope

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1119

Originally posted by: --Hope--
liked this part very much Nikki. Pace has improved.😃 Thanks! Now I hope I keep up the pace and not get into ultra descriptive mode again.

liked the part where Manav ignores her and sends the bag with Vandita.😆 good he seems to be reprioritizing his life. 😆

Did not like the part where Varsha was so easily flummoxxed but considering that she is disoriented due to teh events in her life of late the part made sense.😃 Hehe! Chalo I got a leeway... 😆

Hope

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Claire0206

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1120

Happy Birthday Nikki,

Came looking out for your FF, thinking you might surprise us with a birthday treat . Anyways good job Nikki and keep it up. God bless you for entertaining us.

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