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Delena98

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1131

What a mind blowing part Niki, Amazing. I am so happyyy. Eagerly waiting for the next part, plz plz plz plz update soon.

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julie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1132

Wow, loved the episode, I am a silent reader but couldn't control my self from writing to you. Just waiting for the next part keeping my fingers crossed for Archana and Manav.
Thanks a lot for giving us such a beautiful story.

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umayal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1133

Hai Nikki,
I didn't know that you have posted the next part as it was not in first page of IF, it was in the previous pages I think.

Oh God,Thanks a Lot Dear for this part and Muvaas, 🤗 🤗 🤗 from me.

Whatever I wish to see in character of Manav and archana you have showed it.

I wish Manav was strong in refusing Shravani when he couldn't solve the expectations ahead.
Your Manav did it. 👏

I wish archu shouldn't have given her husband in a platter to another woman. Here, your archu is already mourning about that thought and I am sure she wouldn't.

ok,instead of imaging her with sathish, it is going to be Manav with shravani which is going to Haunt archu.

I liked it. They way you have expressed archu's shock,oh the feeling she felt could be felt thro your writings. could feel for your character they way you wrote it. I think archu need this shake to know herself and to know what she wants.
Yes,she started realizing,its due to her mistake of divorce decision she is going to lose Manav for ever.

I felt sad for her and at the same time also glad that she started realizing.

She has to feel this and the pain how it would be as Manav as gone thro this thought already when he before accept for divorce.

And your Manav, No words 👏 👏 ,the way he handled shravani's issue, Really poor fellow for being blamed to take that decision. Only one time he thinks about himself, and that too its not about himself,only if he is able to do and fufil expectations ,then everyone will be happy ,otherwise it gives Takleaf for everyone. so His decison is to keep everything balanced.

And Tarun's advice ,i dont find fault with him. as you all said, a human nature with a practical approach. He was right. but what i wish is ,archu should reach the level where he says, yes archu deserves you(my friend) Manav. Hoping for it in the upcoming parts.

And i know my archu will deserve your Manav at one time in your FF.

Thank you so much Nikki for this part. As usual it is worth waiting and No words Yaar. You are superb writer 👏 👏 and the way you brought through emotions ,really could feel it.

Feel for both archu and Manav.

Again should I say, I was eagerly waiting for your next part.

Edited by umayal - 14 years ago

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tj_black

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1134

nice and sweet update...loved it😃

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Swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1135

Nikki 🤗
Loved ur part would be an understatement 😃 It was awesome sweety 😊
Felt bad for Shravani Wish cv's had handled her track with such dignity stupid cv's 😡

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Anushka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1136

Really enjoyed this part Nikki!

Very well done😊

I'm very disappointed in Archana 😳

I know she is vert shocked and hurt, so the only things that stood out for her in the conversation was about the possibility of Manav getting married to Shravani. In fact, I can clearly see that she is convinced he would marry her for many reasons. But, not once did she try make sense of the following: "It was only her jealousy with Archana which brought out the devil in her", "what if I'm not able to forget Archana?".

Also, her aai, Sulochona, is so controlling. :/

She's not as bad as Savita maybe - I actually felt for Sharavani.After all, she did think it was love (or perhaps it really was). & like Tarun said, she had waited for a LONG time so she does deserve her fair share of happiness. In all this, Savita is the only one that I feel least empathic towards. She feels untouched by Manav's words, and completely overlooks his feelings. 😒

I hope Shravani finally redeems herself by doing the right things, and I hope Savita goes down for all the wrong things she did. Archana has a long way to go to redeem herself, though. She's taking way too long to realise things. If it was anybody else than Manav, they would have let her rot in hell and moved the heck on in life

Thanks Nikki! This was a wonderful read.

Eagerly waiting for the next part now. ooo, BTW, congrats on reaching the 150^th page ;) This calls for a new thread and celebration!

-Anushka

Edited by Athena. - 14 years ago

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1137

Originally posted by: ByteMe

I think one thing I find lacking in archana is just common sense or that instinct. I mean not everything in life is crystal cleared, and not everything is going be served to you. And she has seen how Manav is with her, and still she keeps on doubting him, basically she has a weak character, would like to see some strength there.

Great job nikki (if I may call you that), I hope one day someone takes this and makes a sensible show out of this.. 😳

Thankyou Byte!!!

I understand what you are trying to say about instinct, but we cannot make practical, big decisions of life only on the basis of instinct na- Manav has a dysfunctional family, an utter abusive Aai, is in a bad financial state and his relationship with Karanjkars is EXTREMELY strained- leave aside Archana, would even a normal girl with no misunderstandings want to go back to him? Then think of how difficult it would be for meek, middle class Archu to follow her instinct knowing that it will lead her to hell. So she used up her instincts by focussing and thinking deeply on Manav's behavior and undertstand him better. Where common sense is concerned, everything points towards Ajit being right and Manav being a cheat- Ajit has the proofs, Manav's own behavior had been suspicious even in the beginning of the story, and Manav's own family members are lying about him- Archana tried to trust him once cos of her instinct but it ended in nothing except getting more hurt- how on earth can she just trust him blankly again? We can say this about common sense cos we see the story from both sides, but Archana knows about Manav only what she observed in few days.

It is to Archana's credit that she has a soft heart and feels for everybody- she has her plus points as a human being which made her see the good points of Manav's character- made her understand that even though he used the wrong ways to get married to her, his love for her has never been false. Which is why, she softened towards him with each passing day.

Originally posted by: toothbrush13
Every part is exceptional, and this is no exception! 😆

But I just want to comment in general that wow, it has been over a year and a full thread and there is so much left in the story! This is so awesome! I really admire the way that you have kept up with your FF and how the quality of it gets better with each part. I'm really honored that I got to work with you through the banners (and hope to continue to do so!). Congratulations Niki, 66 (substantial) parts and a whole thread is a pretty big deal!

Thankyou TB!!! I too have never thought that the story would go on for so long, but I think the erratic posting is also somewhere responsible for all this. I'm really glad that all of you appreciate it, and you in particular- I remember you commented on my first part, and after all these parts you are still here to encourage me. *hug* And thanks for all the banners- they're lovely!!

@khushi cblover and Sakura: Thank you very much girls for the appreciation!😊

Originally posted by: umayal

I wish Manav was strong in refusing Shravani when he couldn't solve the expectations ahead.
Your Manav did it. 👏

I wish archu shouldn't have given her husband in a platter to another woman. Here, your archu is already mourning about that thought and I am sure she wouldn't.

And Tarun's advice ,i dont find fault with him. as you all said, a human nature with a practical approach. He was right. but what i wish is ,archu should reach the level where he says, yes archu deserves you(my friend) Manav. Hoping for it in the upcoming parts.

I'm glad you liked this part Umi! But I think you will like the next few parts more.😉

Originally posted by: Swatrocks
Nikki 🤗
Loved ur part would be an understatement 😃 It was awesome sweety 😊
Felt bad for Shravani Wish cv's had handled her track with such dignity stupid cv's 😡

Thankyou Sweety!! But Shravani's dignified ending is not yet done, right now toh she has been shouted at by both Manav and his Aai... dignified ending in the next part.😉

Originally posted by: Athena.
I'm very disappointed in Archana 😳
I know she is vert shocked and hurt, so the only things that stood out for her in the conversation was about the possibility of Manav getting married to Shravani. In fact, I can clearly see that she is convinced he would marry her for many reasons. But, not once did she try make sense of the following: "It was only her jealousy with Archana which brought out the devil in her", "what if I'm not able to forget Archana?".

Hi Athena! I agreed with the whole of your post, but would like to elaborate a little on this part. If Manav and Tarun ever speak that Shravani is bad, evil and so on, then the first impulse from Archana's POV would not be that 'Manav and Tarun hate her, this means she LIED!" (Cos the thing that is imprinted in her mind due to proofs, his Aai and withnesses is that Manav is guilty). Rather, she would feel more inclined to think that "Manav hates her, cos she broke his marriage (by telling the truth)." Even in the past, Manav had shouted out at Shravani at her office that it is becos of you that all this is happening, same explanation for that time. So here Tarun's statement that Shravani's jealousy brought out the devil in her, can be interpreted by Archana as "Shravani's jealousy with Archana brought out the devil in her (meaning she ruined Manav's marriage by telling the so called truth to her)."

Else another way to look at it, as you yourself said, is to assume that she was too much in shock (though I myself go with the first one.) In either case, Archu gets a leeway.😆

About "What if I'm not able to forget Archana"- she knows Manav loves her very well already, but Tarun's arguments made sense, and a practical minded Manav was more likely to follow them, she felt.

Although I respect the way you perceive the characters and the story, yet I would just like to say something about 'Archana-being-a-disappointment'- any other woman would have perhaps behaved in the same way (read my answer to ByteMe too).. what sets Archana APART from other woman though is that perhaps no other woman would have done so much soul searching and traced her instincts EVEN AFTER knowing that the man is a cheat and the family has abused her-- any other woman would have continued hating- Archu on the other hand, tried to analyse the reason for Manav's so called bad behavior, which boiled down to understanding his love for her and emotional need for a good life partner. It is her large heartedness that even at the age of 26, she has already started thinking of giving Manav second chance by taking into consideration his good points inspite of the fact that he cheated her. The only thing lacking here is that the girl is meek and weak and has a controlling mother like Sulo who brands all her thought as BS (she discussed once with Sulo that she has been too hard on Manav), else she would have returned to Manav earlier only.

I hope this perspective makes you feel better about Archu! 😆

The disappointment in the story is Damo Baba and I kept him that way cos he has always been a disappointment in the show too!😆

Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago