Originally posted by: Athena.
Hi nikitagmc :) (Can I call you Nikita, if that's your name?)-- Yes of course you can call me Nikita. Most people here call me Niki or Doc.😆
I just read all the parts and it has been so wonderfully written that it actually leaves me hurting for the characters. It's like reading a novel; I feel like the characters are around me and I can feel their pain :( Thnkyou so much= I love it when people say this. I can't express how much I can't WAIT for Archu and Manav to reunite again because the more I read the more scared I got about Manav giving in to marry Shravani. HEE HEE HAA HAA... I guess I am a little evil...😈That thought makes me sick :| No offence. I just can't stand this Shravani - how immature can she get?! She doesn't even repent what she has done; the fact that she completely changed herself and the way she has been brought up for another guy just shows how immature she is. It's one thing to adjust, and it's another thing to be obsessive :| I think she just wants to show everyone that she's right -___- Yup! She loves Manav so much that she just wants him and wants to prove to everyone that she's the best girl out there for him.
I don't want Varsha to tell Archu the truth. I know she's being practical by not believing Manav whole-heartedly and asking for evidence and all but this just kills their love. Manav has gone through hell! Then again, this has been really difficult for Archu too. If she finds out from Varsha she's just going to hurt even more. She doesn't deserve that =/ I just want Archu to somehow find it within herself and to look at the way Manav has been with her.. I want her to NOTICE the good in Manav without the need for evidence. I just want her to tell Manav ONCE that she wants to believe him. 😃 Bingo! Precisely the reason why I made Manav lose the crucial evidence which could have saved their marriage-- going back due to proofs makes for an 'evil vs good' story, it gives the happy ending faster. but sort of kills the love story. I also would like Archana to go back to him BEFORE she comes to know the truth. And this is why the reunion is taking time, cos I have to make the whole 'going back' believable-- I want to show that even though Archana thinks he trapped her in a brothel YET she goes back to him cos of his good points, and not for filmi reasons like 'he is my pati parmeshwar' or 'I love him like crazy' and so on, but cos of genuine respect, love and understanding.
On a more positive note, I think this situation is very good for Manav. He's going through a very difficult phase right now but I have a feeling this will break him from his monotonous life and shape his future into a better one. I hope I'm right. I hope Manav learns how to balance everything in his life. I also hope he deals with his aai properly - what she did is just disgusting. So manipulative. So heartless. A villain to her own family. And I hope everybody else learns about Manav's importance and stop being so damn selfish. ARGH. It's them that's taking Manav for granted!!!!!!!!!!! GRR. -__-Bang on! I'm so glad you've visualised the story my way! As I said before also somewhere, Manav is not a perfect character too, however much we may love him. He has his own faults-- he has literally pampered his own family, he takes too much of work and responsibilities on himself, he wasn't aware of Archu's harassment and so on. And he's a simpleton and not very ambitious- ( he became a little ambitious in the course of the story). The sequences and incidences are aimed to bring about changes in both Archana and Manav, like Manav decided to use illegal means to save Varsha as he understood that sometimes you have to compromise to survive in this big, bad world, being good is not the perfect solution all the time, and how he realised that he needed to be more aware and have some basic knowledge (if not educated) so that he could handleat least the loans and papers etc on his own (this was after he messed up his loans and insurance)
Anywaaaaaaaaaaaay..😊 very well-sustained writing with a gripping story👏 - can't wait for the next part to take me into a completely different world! I hope it's a much happier one though! 😛Please don't throw shoes at me if it doesn't turn out that way... 😛
By the way, I'm Anushka =) Hi! Keep commenting!
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