Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nishr

Ohh no i don't want Manav to drink...thanks for another good post SD waiting for next one.

Nishi why are you getting worried if manav drinks. Its Archana's headache
lagta hai swayamvar ka sadma abhi gaya nahin...any girl who likes Manav taking alcohol??
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hey SD, superb post... maza aa gaya...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Yet anoyher gem SD bhai.. Very nice..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: satyamdas

Nishi why are you getting worried if manav drinks. Its Archana's headache
lagta hai swayamvar ka sadma abhi gaya nahin...any girl who likes Manav taking alcohol??

Well SD i will love it if in pr manav takes alchol and smash that monster Savita😡
anyways fine post once again and that BT wala part adds to the charm of the post!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
gr8 work as always. u no more surprise me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You know SD, I think this is your best one till now, every few minutes I keep returning to this post to read it again.
Waiting for part2
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hey I jus read the all your series.
luved them..
and that after honey moon was really good
loved the interference of the savita with that dialouge 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Roothi Hui Archana

As described earlier, Archana is upset that manav was drunk last night. Manav has gone to his garage. Archana finishes the household chores and tells savita that she wishes to visit her aai baba. Savita allows. After coming from garage, Manav comes to know of it and he decides to go to Archana's house.

Manav reaches the Karanjkar Nivas. Vaishali opens the door.

Vaishali- wow Jijju aaye hain..aaiye na andar

Manav-( andar aata hai)

Vaishali- Archu Taai, Varshu Taai dekho na kaun aaya hai

( Archana khush to ho jati hai ki Manav aaya hai par uske nakhre kya kam hain? woh drawing room mein nahin aati. Btw no body knows that kal raat ko kya hua hai)

Varsha- are wah..hamare jijju aaye hain..are koi mithai banto..koi gane bajao yaar..bade dino baad jijju ke darshan hue

Manav- kaise ho tum log?

Vaishali- kya jijju. Taai ek din keliye kya maike chali aayi aap se judaai bardasht nahin hui

Varsha- tu nahin samjhegi Vaishu. Din bhar to kaam karte rehte hain time nahin milta. Sham ko 8 baje ghar aake agar apni chandramukhi patni ki mohani murat nahin dekhenge to kaise reh payenge jijju. Aur puri raat tadapenge..kyun thik kaha na maine

Manav- tum dono bade shararati ho gaye ho. Aai baba kahan hain?

Vaishali- dono kisi shaadi mein gaye hain..hum ne kaha hamen nahin jana..kyun ki kisi bi shaadi mein jao..kuch na kuch hungama ho jata hai aur aisa lagta hai shaadi nahin Ekta kapoor ka serial hai

Varsha- jijju yeh nahin puchhoge archu taai kahan hai?

Vaishali- puchhna to wohi chah rahe the. Par baat ko ghuma fira rahe hain

Manav- jiske paas tum jaisi do hot saaliyan hain wo biwi ko kyun yaad karega

( Ab Archu bahar aa jati hai)

Archana- haan ji kyun aa gaye

Varsha- dekha vaishu jijju ne hamen hot kya keh diya, taai bahar aa gayi inki khabar lene

Manav- are archana tum bina bataye chali aayi. Koi itna gussa karta hai kya

Vaishali- nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh main kya sun rahi hun Archu taai jijju se ladke aayi hai (LOL)

Varsha- bhai wah! maza aa gaya. Hum ne socha tha aap dono ji ji kar ke zindegi gujar doge. Ab to ladaai bhi shuru ho gayi

Archana- meri chhoti beheno ke saamne jhooth mat bolo. Hum dono mein koi ladaai nahin hui

Manav- to bina bataye chali kyun aayi

Archana- kal raat bhar yehi to bol rahi thi ki aai baba ke paas jaungi

Varsha-kal raat bhar bas baatein hi hui? Kuch aur nahin hua?

Vaishali-(LOL)

Archana- chup kar Varsha! shuru mat ho jaa

Vaishali- kis kis ki jubaan pe lagaam lagayegi Taai..yeh khabar ab jungle mein aag ki tarah fail jayegi

Varsha- haan. head lines Mumbai ke sab se sukhi couple Mumbai ke sab se shy couple mein daraar

Vaishali- raat bhar dono ne bas baaten ki aur kuch bhi nahin kiya

Manav- (hasne laga)

Archana- haan ji aur encourage karo dono ko.

Vaishali- taai Jijju keliye itni possessive kyun hai? Hamare sath thoda has lete hain to tujh se dekha nahin jata ( LOL)

Archana- Vaishu tu bhi varsha ki tarah meri khinchai karne lagi hai. Tum dono ki khabar leti hun main

Varsha- filhaal tu aur jijju ek doosre ki khabar lo hum dono kitchen mein jate hain..jijju aaj raat aap idhar ruk jao..hum aap ko nahin jane denge aaj

( Archu bhi yehi chahti hai Manav aaj yahan ruke)

Manav- thik hai..

Vaishali- wow!! Archu taai ki shakal dekh Varshu Taai --kaise khushi jhalak rahi hai uski aankhon mein

Archna- tum dono jate ho ya nahin

Varhsa- chal Vaishu aur mat sata is hanson ke jode ko'well dono bedroom mein chale jao

Vaishali- par abhi se kuch mat karna..abhi bas 9 hi baje hai

Archana- Chup kar..vaishu..bahut badmaas ho gayi hai

( Varsha, vaishali dono kitchen chale jate hain)

(Archana bedroom chali jati hai. Manav uske pichhe pichhe jata hai)

Manav- kitni naraaz rahogi jaan?

Archana-( khamosh)

Manav- suno na meri baat

Archana- aap ne mujh se kuch kaha

Manav- ( archu ke haath pakad leta hai) bola na maine aur nahin drink karunga

Archana- nahin main kaun hoti hun aapko rokne wali..abhi to bas 9 hi baje hain..kisi dost ko phone karke chale jaiye kahin....jam ke pi lena aur aake fir behosh hoke let jana kamre mein

Manav- nahin mujhe tumhara sath chaiye

Archana- par kyun?

Manav- I love you

Archana- jhooth mat bolo aap. Aap ko mujh se koi pyar vyar nahin hai.

Manav- kaise manau apni jaan ko

Archana- main ja rahi hun ..aap ko aram karna hai to karo idhar..bathroom mein fresh hona hai to fresh ho jao

[jaise hi Archu kamre se bahar jane lagti hai, BT wale gaan bajane lagte hai

"Tum ne kisi ki jaan ko jate hue dekha hai

Woh dekho mujh se rooth kar meri jaan ja rahi hai".

Manav shammi kapoor ji ki tarah acting karke Archana ko rokne ki koshish karta hai. Dono mein khub chhed chaad, roothna manana hota hai. Par Archu still nahin manti)

Manav- I love you

Archana- nahin aap sharaab se pyar karte ho mujh se nahin

Manav- ab main pareshan ho gaya hun tumhe manate manate

Archana- kisne kaha manane ko

Manav- ab bas bhi karo na jaan'kya shahrukh ki tarah ghutne pe aake gid gidane ke baad tum manogi

Archana- offo..aap ko ab bhi mazak ki padi hai'.( Archu bedroom se bahar chali jati hai)

(Manav dukhi hoke wohi baitha rehta hai)

{I could have finished the story here itself. But as this is basically a BT serial, I should try my best to stretch it further. After all this roothne manane mein hi asli maza hai. Let's see what happens next- SD}

Edited by -SD- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Wowwwwww nice post 😆 😆
Good even Vaishali has started to tease Arman and like the way u add BT touch to ur story.
waiting for next post ur story is best than PR alteast here renuion happens atleast after 3 months but in PR reunion does not happen even in 3 months:(
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
😆 Good one SD liked it.. Do continue...

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