Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Well written once again yaar!

But i think you could have draged it more in few more parts by showing how manav declared his love infront of savita,manju and savita connection being exposed,ajit ete etc !

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok Sonu will try some multi character story in future
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Back from Honeymoon
ArMan are just back from Switzerland. Varsha has shown up at their house to see them.

Varsha- hello jijju hi Taai

Manav- are Varsha aai hai

Varsha- wah jijju ab saali aap ki aai ho gayi

Manav- ha ha …………are archana tumhari behen aayi hai

Archana- kaisi hai varshu?

Varsha- tu bata kaisi rahi?

Archana- kya?

Varsha- tirth yatra mein gaye the na aap dono..kitna punya kamaya wohi puch rahi hun

Archana- tu bhi na varshu

Varsha- jijju aap hi bataiye honeymoon trip kaisi rahi?

Manav- kaafi achhi thi…hum logo ne skating ki..boating ki..snow fall mein dance bhi kiya..waise pata hai koi har situation mein ek ek hindi gaana play kar deta tha

Varsha- main janti hun un khadoosh logon ko..ek baar hum teen behenein so rahe the..to kisi ne gana baja diya "so gaya yeh jahan so gaya aasman". Koi badi team hai aur unki chief ek lady hai. Logon ke situations pe gaane baja dete hain.

Manav- pata nahin kaise karte hain ?

Varsha- aap ne kya kiya kaise kiya Switzerland mein yeh to batao

Archana- chup kar Varsha..sharm nahin aati tujhe jiju se yeh sab puchhte

Varsha- bhai wah!! Main kaun se wo andar ki baat puch rahi hun..bas upar upar se batao

Manav- chalo main tumhe batata hun

Archana- jijju saali yeh gandi baatein karo main chali yahan se

Varsha- gandi baatein? Are skating kaise ki yehi puchhne aayi hun. Hamari kismet mein to bas TV pe dekhna hai.

Manav- waise skating to kaafi aasan thi us se

Varsha- matlab woh jyada muskil tha (hasne lagi)

Archana- aap chup karo Manav

Manav- mera matlab tha skating se jyada dikkat mujhe pahad chadhne mein aayi. Tum kya samajh rahi thi waise?

Varsha- ( still laughing)

Archana- Manav aap itne gande hoge mujhe pata nahin tha

Varsha- haan jijju dikhne mein jitney bhole hain utne hain nahin

Archana- bilkul…ab bataun varshu ko swimming pool ki ladkiyon ko dekh ke aap ke mann mein kya vichar aa rahe the?

Manav- haan batao na maine kab mana kiya

Varsha- bata na taai

Archana- tum dono chup karo

Varsha- to taai date kab ki hai? Pehle se bata de hum bhi kuch gift leke aayenge. Tayaari karenge

Archana- kis cheez ki date?

Varsha- yeh lo!! Teri god bharai ki date aur kaun si date?

Manav- ( LOL)

Archana- chup kar. Aisa kuch nahin hai.

Varsha- swiss trip aise hi bekaar gayi..hum ne socha tha wahan se aane ke baad turant good news milegi.

Archana- tu itni besharm kab se ho gayi

Varsha- kyun hum mausi bannke layak nahin hain kya? Is mein sharm ki baat kahan se aayi?

Manav- theek hi to keh rahi hai Varsha

Archana- haan ji aap uski aur tarafdaari karo aur sar pe chadhao

Manav- ek ladki ko sar pe chadhake yeh haal hai ..doosri nahin sambhlegi

Varsha- oye hoye jijju…kaash yeh possible hota ..hum aapki baharwali banne keliye bhi tayar hain

Manav- maine kab mana kiya

Archana- oho…tum dono bahut bigad gaye ho…chup karo

Varsha- taai tu dar mat..tera pati sirf tera hai..

Archana- Varsha ruk tere liye kuch khane ko lati hun

Manav- mujhe aise Varsha ke hawale akele chhod ke jaogi

Archana- oh..kitna pareshan karte ho aap mujhe..Varhsa main tere sath ghar chali jaungi..yeh baithe rahen yahan akele..phir hosh thikane aayenge

Varsha- jijju aap itne mazedar hoge yeh mujhe maloom nahin tha…chalo main chalti hun…aur nahin banna mujhe kabab mein haddi..aur taai kabhi samay mile pyar karne se to aai baba se milne aa jana apne maike..wo chudail manju bhi nahin hai..

Archana- aa jaungi

Varsha- jijju aap bhi aa jana..sadar nimantran raha hamari taraf se. chalo bye

Manav- tum bulao hum na aayen? Bye

( Varsha walks away)

Archana- kya ji bade gande ho aap. Varsha ke saamne itbi gandi baatein kar rahe the

Manav- (gale laga leta hai Archu ko)

Archana- ab natak mat karo pyar ka

Manav- I love you

Archana- wah …chhodo mujhe dal mein tadka lagana hai..baad mein aap ki khabar leti hun

Manav- Varsha ne kaha na pyar karne se samay mile to kuch aur karna..abhi pyar mein tadka lagate hain..phir baad mein dal mein lagati rehna

(Manav Archana ko bahaon mein jakad ke bed pe letane ki koshish karta hai, tabhi Savita ki awaz aati hai)

Savita – ( from back ground) aaj kal ki bahu sham ko 7 baje bhi bed pe let ke maze legi..dal mein tadka kaun lagayega aake. Bahu ki maa?

Archana- main jati hun (room se bahar chali aati hai)

(Manav bed pe let ke Switzerland ki yaad karta hai)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
That was cute! I really really liked it.
Great job on Varsha's dialogues especially, it was as if she was really saying them. I liked the reference to BT songs as well, that was funny. 😆
Wonderful job yet again SD!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Woowwww this is really cute and funny!!!
Varsha gets really nice line here i loved it..I like this Arman both are very naughty and cute:)
thanks once again for making laugh!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
OMG! Varsha,is she so naughty,unbeleivble!
SD as always you rocked again!continue your good work!
you are simply greaaaaaaaat yaar👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Wow SD bhai.. Truly enjoyable and refreshable... Especially humour when Varsha says about BT part.... Nice one as expected from you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Thank you all. These were typical scenes where the hero teases his wife with the help of her sister. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Wow that was such a sweet update. Loved Manav n Varsha talks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
very good jijju saali scenes..poor archu....

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