Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Expectedly, another excellent one SD bhai..
Keep them all coming...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Thanks Nishi, Mitts and Ali. Ab Archana roothi hai to Manav mana raha hai. someday the reverse will happen. Life has many aspects, many happenings..kuch honi kuch anhoni and all... So "Zindegi ke safar mein Arman" should never come to an end, until and unless you guys get bored of it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
SD keep these stories coming. I feel home wenevr i read ur SS.
in deed enjoyable. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
agreed with dilwar..SD u rock...waiting for the next part:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Zindegi ke safar mein ARMAN shld never stop...SD, coz we'll never get bored by yr tongue-in-cheek romantic renderings.....show mein jo bhi ho raha hain....yr stories r 100 tyms bettr....it makes ArMan fans happy nd u r doing a gr8 job...keep them coming 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Even Vaishali's teaming up with Varsha now! That was cute, I liked it a lot.
You should definitely keep on continuing, your stories are always great.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
good one SD,par ye ka yaar tumne to vashili ko be shamil kar diya.could'nt you have left her out of it,she is such a sweet girl,😉.
But really a great romantic post yaar.Keep it Dragginnnnnnnnnnnng!!!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Oue hoye Sonu.. it seems you are in love with vaishali. waise I have tried to portray the typical hindustani jijju-saali chhed chhad. It's all fun.
Thank you Mou, Piya, TB and all others who liked it. Hope this series keeps going.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Pyar, Pyar aur Sirf Pyar
(Manav is at his in laws. Archana is helping her sisters in the kitchen. She is yet to recover from her anger for manav's drinking blues. Manav is relaxing in the drawing room. Sulochana-Manohar come back from the marriage party and directly go to the bed room just after saying Hi Hello to Manav. Vaishali comes )

Vaishali- jijju bas 15 min mein khana tayaar!! Taai aap keliye aapki man pasand dish bana rahi hai

Archana- (kitchen mein se) nahin main unkeliye nahin bana rahi

Manav- tum na pakao to hi achha hai. Pata nahin kitni mirch dal dogi badla lene keliye.

(Archana, Varsha come out. Varsha- Vaishali laughing)

Archana- main koi dushman hun aap ki

Manav- biwi ho. Yeh kya kam hai?

Varsha- wah jijju wah…aap un lakhon karaodon patiyon mein se hain jo apni biwi ko dushman se jyada darte hain

Vaishali- Taai itni darawani wife banegi humne kabhi socha nahin tha (LOL)

Archana- mere maze le rahe ho na manav apni saaliyon ke sath.

Manav- tum jab tak naraz rahogi, main aise hi kuch bhi bolta rahunga

Archana- yeh meri narazgi ka asar nahin, kal ki abhi tak utri nahin uska asar hai (feels awkward after saying this as she didn't want to tell Varsha-Vaishu that Manav drank)

Varsha- ab baat samajh mein aayi, yeh jhagda kyun hua

Vaishali- jijju you are mind blowing. Pehli baar aap ne dude wali harkat ki. Waise daru pi ke taai ki pitaai to nahin ki na?

Manav-are main aisa kar sakta hun kya

Archana- bas wohi baki reh gaya tha

Varsha- to fir kya dikkat hai. Thodi pi li to tujhe kya harz hai Taai

Archana- tu apne hubby ko pilana varshu. mujhe nahi achha lagta yeh

Vaishali- satish jijju doodh ke alawa kuch lete nahin. Wo bhi malai mar ke (LOL)

Varsha- chup kar..beech mein Satish ka naam mat le..aur taai manav jijju tujhe achhe nahin lagte to chhod de unhe. Unhe hazar ladkiyan mil jayengi (LOL)

Vaishali- kam se kam main to tayaar hun

Archana- tum dono chup karo

Varsha- oye hoye….dil ke tukde ho gaye hamari taai ke

Manav- ab man bhi jao Archana bola to aur aisi galati nahin hogi mujh se

Archana- aap ka koi bharosha nahin. Kal koi aur dosti ki kasam de dega to fir pi loge

Vaishali- are wah taai..tu itni jhagdaalu hai hamen aaj pata chala..wo khadush manju ko manane uski kamini aai rasika ke ghar chali gayi thi..aur aaj Jijju tujhe manane aaye hain tu man nahin rahi… !!!

Varsha- us karamjali manju ka naam mat le. Pata nahin dada ne kaun si manhoos ghadi mein us pakhandi aurat se pyar kiya tha jis keliye har koi aaj bhugat raha hai

(Sulochana bahar aa jati hai)

Sulochana- manju is ghar ki bahu hai. Uske khilaf main ek shabd nahin sun sakti. Haan yeh baat alag hai ki gusse mein aake wo kuch bhi keh deti hai, par tum log usse yeh sab nahin keh sakte.

Vaishali- teri baki do betiyon ki zindegi barbaad karne ke baad shayad tujhe Manju ki asliyat maloom padegi

Sulochana- chup karo. Aaj main bolungi tum sunoge…

Varsha- is mein nayi baat kya hai. Aaj tak hum sunte hi aaye hain. Maaf karna aai tu baba ke samne jake bol. Hum at least manju ki tarafdaari nahin sunnewale.

(Manohar aa jata hai aur sulochana ko samjha bujhake andar le jata hai. Andar sulochana manju kitni achhi hai wo describve karti hai Mano ke samne, which is quite irrelevant to our story. Sulochana ke anger ko thanda karne keliye BT wale gaane bhi baja dete hain, jo sirf uske bedroom mein hi sunayi deta hai. " swarg se sundar sapno se pyara hai apna ghar dwaar)

Varsha- chalo khana khate hain

(dinner over. Everybody goes to sleep. ArMan in their bedroom)

Manav- yeh bata do main kya karun jo tum mujhe maaf kar do

Archana- kuch nahi

Manav- deewar mein sar takraun

Archana- main bhi takraungi

Manav- ro lun?

Archana- jhoothe aansoo mujhe achhe nahi lagte

Manav- had karti ho Archana ( baahon mein kaid kar leta hai). Kitna gussa karogi aur? Main ab ek min bhi tumhara gussa bardasht nahin karnewala ( jabardasti kiss kar leta hai)

Archana- chhi..kya kar rahe ho. Nahin chahiye mujhe yeh sab

Manav- tumhe lagta hai main tumhe pyar nahin karta

Archana- haan yeh sab natak hai

Manav- hey bhagwan mujhe bachao

Archana- mujh se

Manav- jo tum samjho (so jata hai muh udhar kar ke)

Archana – ( soch rahi hai, are yeh to mujhe aur bhao nahin de raha so gaya)

( Archu waiting ki kab Manav neend se jage aur usse manaye. 30 mins later jab manav kharrate lene lagta hai, Archu ko aur gussa aa jata hai ki Manav so gaya. Woh jaga deti hai manav ko)

Archana- manav

Manav- ( neend ka natak kar raha hai) main kahan aa gaya aur aap kaun hain?

Archana- hey bhagwaan…

Manav- oh Archana ji..aap ko Sharm nahin aati mere sath ek bed pe au wo bhi mere seene pe leti hui hain

Archana- chup karo manav..bahut narazz hun main aap se

Manav- ( samajh mein aata hai ki Archana aur bhao chahti hai) naraz ho to mere se chipak kyun rahi ho

( Archana separetes herself and starts crying)

Archana- kya manav aap bhi

Manav- (Archu ko gale laga leta hai) sorry jaan..aisi bhi kya naraazgi jo tum mujh se ek pal keliye bhi alag ho jao..do din ki zindegi mein agar hum ek ghanta bhi jhagda karte hain tab suffer hum hi kar rahe hain. Pyar karne keliye bahut kam waqt hai jaan. Aur naraaz mat ho

Archana- aap wada karte ho ki aur kabhi nahin pioge sharaab?

Manav- nahin piunga. Bas piunga to tumhare hontho ki sharaab. Nasha karna hoga to tumhari nashili aankhon mein dub jaunga. Nashe mein neend aayegi to tumhari zulfon ki chhaon mein sar rakh ke so jaunga

Archana- hato ji..filmi baatein kar rahe ho

Manav- filmi baaten is liye kar raha hun ta ki back ground mein gaana baj jaye aur hum gaane ke sath pyar karein aaj ki raat

Archana- chhiiii…gande

( BT wale waste no time in playing the song

"Yeh raat pyasi pyasi

Pyaasi na reh jaye

Tum bahon mein aa jao

Ya waqt theher jaye")

(Archana manav ki aur kareeb ho jati hai aur saare gile shikwe door ho jate hain. Kuch reh jata hai aur hota hai to wo hai pyar, pyar aur sirf pyar)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
That was so cute!
I loved the dialogues, and Sulochana... lol, she does say, "aaj main bolungi tum sunoge," a lot.
Waiting for the next part! (There will be more, right?)

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