APHARAN (part-X and XI page 13) updated - Page 8

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazing update dear

Here we get to see them day dreaming😆

So chacha knws everything abt raavi and he's already protecting her from dev

Originally posted by: Shivifan

Loved every bit of it

PART-VIII

DEV POV:-

We have already started with the journey to search raavi........we have set up some camps to rest and i was in my camp figuring out who the person can be........

"Sir pata lagg gya hai ki kisne kidnap kiya hai........ "

Said my assistant and i looked at him and he continued,

"SHIVA...... shiva naam hai....... Shreenath wada (guys it's a imaginary place) mein kisi kabile mein rehta hai......... Konse kabile mein pata nahi..............Par sara shreenath wada uski baat manta hai.......... Koii bhi aisa insan nahi hai jo uske khilaf jaa sake....... Sab logon ke liye bhagwan hai vo........ Shreenaath wada mein Koii bhi khoon ho usme uska hi haath hota hai yeh sabko pata hai par koii use haath nahi laga sakta vahan ke log uss insaan ko hi maar denge jo uske khilaf ungli tak uthata hai........... "

I said,

"Par vo yaha kio aaya aur usne raavi ko kyon uthaya..... "

He replied,

"Yeh toh nahi pta kio......kio kii uske bare mein information niklvana bhut hi mushkil hai koii bhi yahan tak ki hamare khabri bhi aur shreenaath vada ki police koii bhi uski information leak nahi karti yeh sab bhut mushkil se pata lgga hai mujhe....... "

I got irritated and hit my hand on table,

And than my another team mber comes and says,

"Sir sub inspector Krish ko utha liya hai.......... "

"What..... Kisne......"

"Yeh toh nahi pta sir......abhi mujhe inform kiya hai ki unhe raat ko unke ghar se utha liya aur deewar par likha hai............PEHLE PADAV KI SHURUAAT ..........aur jaise evidences apki wife ke tym par mile the vese hi mile hai..... Shayad sir ko bhi usi ne uthaya ho....... "

I pinched my forehead and nose junction and said,

"Kon hai yeh...... Kyon mere piche pada hai........ "

"John jaldi se nikalne ki tyaaro karo hume paunchna hoga shreenath vada....... Vahan jaakae trace krr lenge use...... "

"Yes sir..... Par shreenaath vada bhut dur hai aur vahan paunchne ke liye junglon mein se jana padega....... Toh thoda tym lag sakta hai...... "

"I don't care mujhe raavi jald se jald vapas chahiye.......now move......"

And they left....... I thought,

"Koii but gehri dushmani lagti hai..... Varna koii kio aise ek ek karke mere kareebi logon ko uthayega...... Sochna padega kon hai yeh...... "

I closed my eyes in frustration that why this time is running and i am not able to stop this..........
I need to do something

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SHIVA'S POV,

I came and sat to eat food......... But my eyes were searching for one girl whi have not arrived yet.......
And chachi was also not there and reshma was serving us food....... When i took my first bite i heard someone giggling........
I was confused and i lokked at the direction of sound and here she was sitting with other ladies on the makeshift kitchen and making chapatis while giggling and talking......... She lolks just like us........... Wait there is something different in her...... Is she us wearing a sareee........ The saree is of purple color....... Just like the ones our tribe women wear......... Her hairs are tied in a long braid which moves down till her knees........... All the ladies were so engrossed in talking together that it seem like she has belonged here since a long time........
I was just looking at her talking and giggling her antics were so cute and naive the way she moves her hands while blabbering....... The way she make her eyes dance while speaking......... I was lost in her

"Bhaiya roti rakhu..... "

I didn't heard and reshma again says,

"Bhaiya roti rakhu..... "

I came out of my land and ate my remaining food and left as rahim chacha was lokking at me with that teasing look which i want to escape........
I went to my house near chacha's and now raavi's too. I stood there and image of her talking and moving her hands and laughing was playing in my eyes and i had a soft smile on my face when hari came and said,

"Bhaiya ali ka phone aaya hai usne krish ko utha liya hai aur 2 din mein vo aa jayega........ Aur rathode aur uske aadmi aa chuke hai....... Jungle ke pehle raste par hai........ Vo logon ko abhi 2 se 3 hafte lag jayege..... Kio kii vo hamara picha karte huye aayenge aur maine kayi jagahon par kuch na kuch nishan chode hai ghum jayenge jungle mein vo....... "

"Hmm...... Aur ali ko kaho ki bhut dhyan se lekar aye usse....... Usko markar jungle ke raste mein fek den taki vo rathode apne dost ko mara huya dekhe tab pta laggega use............. "

"Ji bhai..........acha bhaiya apne mujhe kaha tha ki uss ladki ke bare mein pta karn hai......"

"Haan...... "

"Jyada toh nahi lag paya kio kii rathode apni biwi ko jyda bahar aane jane nahi deta aur sunne mein aya hai kii iska baap ikk number ka charsi aur nashedi hai........ Sara din nashe mein dhut bhut mushkil se ladki ne apni padhayi puri kii hai din raat kam kar ke. . . . .... Aur abb kisi din rathode ki nazar padi aur usne shaadi kar li......... Abb bhabhii ka baap rathode ke paise par pal raha hai...... "

"Kya bola tune...... Kiska baap......"

"Bhabhi ka..... "

"Yeh bhabhi kio bol raha hai....... "

"Kya shiva bhaiya...... Bachpan se apke saath raha hoon......... Apko janta hoon........ Pehle din se pata lag gya tha mujhe jab apne use goli nahi mari thi........... Pta hai mujhe....... Apko vo pasand hai....... "

"Tujhe kuch jyada hi nahi pata..... "

"Kya bhaiya......... Par main kisi ko nahi batunga........ Ikk baat bolu jab se vo aayi na bhai apko bure sapne aana bhi band ho gaye hai........kuch toh baat ho gi hi na........baki acha lgta hai apko muskurata huya dekhkar.........."

"Acha chal chal gyaan mat de........Chal jaa yahan se........ "

I shooed him and again a smiled danced on my face...... Is this so evident on my face.......... That everyone is getting aware of........ Soon the day light dims and a little tinge of darkness prevailed and everyone was in there houses and i thought to have a walk and move to the other side of tge village where no one usually goes but only i know how beautiful it looks at night and i went there.........
Slowly i walked across her house but she was no where to be seen......
So i disappointed went to my place and reached at that wooden bridge where i usually come to watch tge serene side but today this sight was enhanced or i would say was completed as i reached i saw her standing on the same olace where i do............ And she was busy staring at tge surroundings. I first thought to move back but god these feet are taking me to her and i slowly geaded towards her and due to creek sound she looked at me and give a little smile and i thought before i lose my control i took some steps past her when she looks at me and says so cutely,

"App kahan jaa rhe hai....... "

"Kuch nahi tum yahan khadi ho toh socha kahin aur chala jata hoon............ "

"App chahe toh ruk sakte hain....... "

I noded as i cannot say no to this girl and stood next to her and she now looked at the scene again and said,

"Bahut khubsurat hai yeh sab...... "

"Haan abhi toh tumne kuch dekha hi nahi bas 10 minute aur fir yahan jugnoo jugnoo honge..........fir dekhna iss jagah ka kamal....... "

She smiles and says excitingly,

"Jugnoo........ "

I nodded and she closed her eyes and took a deep breathe and i cannot stop admiring her.
She spoke with her eyes closed,

" Yahan ki khushboo man ko halka kar deti hai"

And i asked,

"Bhut pasand hai na yeh jagah tumhe.. . . . . . "

She nods.

"Tum bilkul hum mein se hi ikk lagti ho.. . . . .. . Yeh kapade yeh sab aisa lgta hai jaise yahan ki hi ho.. . .. . "

She smiles and i again asked,

"Ikk baat puchun.. . .. . "

I don't know why but with her i can't stop myself she nods and i finally asked,

"Agar tum shaadi shuda nahi hoti toh kya ruk jati yahan.. . .. . . "

She opens her eyes and looks at me softly and says,

"Main toh abhi bhi yahan rukna chahti hoon......... "

And she turns again looking at the view and i don't know why but her that answer that she wants to stay took me to top of world that yes she wants to stay here........ And i don't know when i started smiling and i turned and sat on the bridge where she rested her hands and i was sitting anti parallel to her and she looked at me and said,

"Haste huye ache lagte hain aap...... "

And i looked at her soon the place was filled with jugnoos and those natural lights hitting her face when she is looking at me in my eyes were a sight to behold........ And now i wanted to shout out to time and say stop here i want to drink in her presence........
And than a jugnoo sat on hairline and i moved closer to her and she kept on looking at me and she kept her hand on my chest with her eyes not leaving mine and i hold the jugnoo and brought it near us in such a way that the glistening natural light flashed on our faces,making her features visible to me in all the darkness around...........that surreal sight of her hands on my chest and we both looking at each other was something we both wanted to stay in.......... Soon my breathe and hers got in same rhythm that quite environment was making us feel each other......... This mere sight of her close to me was enough for me........ I cannot ask more from my stars...........
And suddenly that jugnoo flew away taking the light with himself and breaking our eyelock we moved a little back and she starts to walk past me i closed my eyes in embarrasment that why i have to go overboard all the time and a bit with frustration that why can't time stop when she is with me........
but then she turns back and says,

"Chale....... "

I look at her and she again gestured with her eyes for me to move and i did we both were quite while returning back to our places a simple smile was not leaving her face and mine too....... The sound of rustling of dry leaves and that air was making it more magical..... Though it was just a walk back home but for me it was seeming like i am going to enter the doorways of heavens with this girl.........
Soon we reach our houses and i moved till her door and she went in without looking at me with her blushing cheeks and soon she left my sight and i moved to my house.

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Rahim chacha and rohini both were standing in there window looking at tge sight in front of them as shiva and raavi entered all blushy and smiling with unknown silence and rohini says,

"Rahim hamara Shiva pyaar mein hain........ Akhir iss bairagi ko bhi isski adhishakti mil gayi....... Jo isska sansaar basayegi............ "

Abd rahim chacha smiled at her wife and says,

"Uss rakshash dev ne toh iss bachi ki chamak hi cheen li thi jab mili thi ikk dum chup chap thi par abb fir se chakne laggi hai...... "

And rohini says,

"Hum sab mein aise ghul mil gayi hai jaise yahin ki hi ho..... Aur main janti hoon hamara shiva ise bhut khush rakhega......... Aur raavi hamare shiva ko khul kar jeene ki wajah degi............. "

Both looked at stars wishing for the kids and wish this happy times to stop here and never leave these kids......

"And at the end all of tgem can only think why the time can't stop......."

Screen freezes on all the three scenes.

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So finally i wrote this update starting woth something and ended up doing something else...... Being very honest i have set almost 2 to 3 drafts for this erasing and writing again and again......
Hope this final one is liked by you all...........
Do comment and vote for this one........

Yours
ODETTE_DELUSION

Beautiful update

Their moment was magical to read

I can't wait shiva to find out abt dev and somewhere I want raavi to tell him abt that monster

Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautiful update

Their moment was magical to read

I can't wait shiva to find out abt dev and somewhere I want raavi to tell him abt that monster

Soon there will be revelation of dev and i hope you will like it as raavi will herself disclose it........

Can't tell more.......

But just can say it will be there in 2 or 3 updates.......

What a great update....

Loving the way story is going forward

Nd aslo wating for shiva to get to know about that creep dev....

❤️❤️ eagerly waiting for the next update❤️❤️

Originally posted by: 2003taani

What a great update....

Loving the way story is going forward

Nd aslo wating for shiva to get to know about that creep dev....

❤️❤️ eagerly waiting for the next update❤️❤️

Ahiva will definitely come to know aBout dev soon.....

The draft for that is ready but will be out in 2 or 3 updates....

Hope you like it💕💕

They are so adorable 😍😭🤧

Bhabhi and all hmmmmmm🤭

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

They are so adorable 😍😭🤧

Bhabhi and all hmmmmmm🤭

New update is out do read it......

PART-IX

SHIVA'S POV:-

Since i was in the town it was time for cutting the woods and sell them to nearby villages to earn living as the forest under our village has best wood.........

So i was moving ahead to do my work. When i saw something which made me smile to no bounds.. . .. .

Here was Rohini chachi and Raavi sitting Together and embroiding a clothe...... They both just like a mother and daughter together......

Raavi was looking so cute as her eyes looking at the clothe and her lips were holding tight a thread which was she using to sew...... Her long braid was touching the floor sitting on footsteps of chachi as chachi was sitting on the cot and raavi finally lifted her eyes in and chirpily showed her design to chachi and chachi pointed at something and raavi pouted making a kiddoo face and lokked at chachi and chachi kept her hand on her head and laughed.............today i could feel a difference in raavi's eyes she had applied kohl........yes she was applying kohl............

Her eyes have a different definition today....... The eyes which always leave me wondering about the stories hidden in them were today calling me to come and just look in them not to find something but to get solace.............

God if i would keep on looking at her my fantasies will take a toll on me..........

So i gotta make a move but than chachi called me,

"Shiva idhar aa beta...... "

"Aaya chachi...... "

I went and sat on the other side near footstep of chachi opposite to raavi and chachi said,

"Lakdi katne jaa raha hai...... "

"Jii...... "

"Yeh dekh tune nazar ka teeka nahi lggya......... Kitni baar kaha hai tujhe roz subah mujhse, lgva liya kar...... "

"Vo main bhul gya tha...... "

"Abhi toh mere paas nahi hai....... Par acha ruk raavi beta tu lgga de iske teeka tune toh lgga rakh hai na kajal............. "

And she looked at raavi and prompted her by her eyes and raavi came near me and put her little finger on the kohl applied and slide it and hesistantly put tge kohl on back of my ear and chachi said,

"Abb theek hai..... "

I kept on looking at raavi her cheeks turning a tinge of pink and she was not meeting my eyes and than walked from there with that blushy cheeks my god i could see her like this look the whole day.......

And suddenly there came ali shouting,

"Shiva bhaiya........ Hum aa gaye...."

I lokked at him and than at chachi as i know i need to talk to her about what is going to happen next...... So

I holded chachi's hand as i know i need to compose her first beacuse if anything will happen in a jiffy she will not able to take it.....

"Chachi......mujhe apse baat karni hai.......

Ali jab tak main na kahu kuch mat karna aur haan chacha ko jaakar bata ki tu aa gya hai........."

and i said,

" Chachi........Hum ikk bhut hi jaroori kadam uthane jaa rahe hai....... Chacha ko pata hai aur vo bhi hamare saath hain.......

App janti hai na main kisi bekasoor ke saath galat nahi karunga..... "

"Janti honnn mera shiva kuch galat nahi karega...... Hamesha hum sab ke liye khada hota hai....... "

"Bass vishwas rakhyega....... Hum shehar kyon gaye the pata hai na apko........bass vohi pehla padav shuru krne lagge hai........"

And a tear fell from her eyes and she said,

"Main janti hoon....... Un sab ko chodna mat.......unko bhi pata lgna chahiye ki dard kya hota hai..... "

And i nodded and cupped her face and than chacha came and said,

"Shiva... . .. . Lae bhole bhadari ka naam aur shuru kar de uss rakshash ke vinaash ko.. . .. . . "

I saw a fiery in his eyes and i know this step is important for one and all in our village and i said,

"Ali use bahar nikal.. . .. . "

"Ji bhai.. . .. "

Ali brought krish out from the jeep from his hairs and three him front of us. I holded him and took a stick and started beating him blue black and soon he was shouting and crying in pain and his each cry was our homage to radha and her family.. . .. . .. .

After beating him and almost kiling him i had to put a last nail in the coffin to make him dead and strtched my arms in air for the last hit and than raavi came in the crowd she looked at me and than at my blood covered hands that stick and krish she looked at me and my hands somwhat weaken but than i made a swift move and hit him on his face deadbkeeping my eyes locked with her and he was dead.

And raavi closed her eyes and her chest heaved and than chacha came to me and said,

"Do log aur fir radha se kiya vada aur uska insaaf pura hoga.. . .. "

I kept on looking at raavi and she opened her closed eyes and looked at me.. . .. . . Her eyes have a look of fear....... The same old tale which she was having on the intial days was visible yet again.... Is it cause of me........ I was scared..... First time i was scared......... She moved back and finally broke the eye contact and went from there.

And than ali took krish and put him in the jeep to threw his body on the way of rathore.........

I went behind her and she has already reached her house locking it and i went back dejected........

I went to chachi and she said,

"Kuch dhoondh raha hai kya...... "

"Chachi apne... Vo.... Raavi... Ko.... Ajj usne mujhe usse marte huye dekha..........aur fir vo....."

I panicked and chachi came to me and hold my hand and said,

"Ikk baar use bata dena ki kyon kar raha hai tu esa.........

Fir vo smjh jayegi. ......

Thoda dar gayi hai yeh dekh kar par jab use pata chalega ki pure gain ne radha ki isse se bhi buri halt dekhi thi tab vo smjh jayegi..........

Par haan thoda pyaar se........"

"Hmm.......... "

And the whole day went by i was trying to talk to her but she was ignoring me.......... I want to tell her the truth but how.........

And after having dinner....

.........i went to raavi as she was doing the dishes............ I stood next to her to talk to her.............

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DEV'S POV:-

I was in a jeep with my team following the hints and tracing the path gollowed by the kidnappers.......when i got the call and the caller id was of my senior colleague but my dear friend Gautam.......

I picked up the call and gautam said,

"Dev tu kahan hai......... "

"Tujhe bataya tha na raavi ko kisi ne utha liya hai bass ussi mission par hoon........ "

"Krish ko bhi kisi ne utha liya hai..... "

"Haan pata chala mujhe....... "

"Tujhe kuch pata hai kon kar sakta hai....... "

"Nahi abhi tak toh nahi pat jo bhi hai bhut gehri dushmani lagti hain uski mere saath....... Ikk ikk karke mere karibiyon ko utha raha hai...... "

"Pata toh lagana padega........"

"Tu raavi ko dhundh main yahan uss insaan ka pata lagata hoon..... Aur krish ko bhi dhundne ki koshish karta hoon....... "

"Haan......ikk aur baat raavi ke baap ko 40 hazar de dena aur kehna ikk hafte tkk mujhe phone na kare........"

"Hmm...... "

And he cutt the call and we need to go now...... But.......

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RAAVI'S POV:-

After applying the kohl behind his ear i don't know why i was blushing so much.. . .. His intense gaze and those chocolate brown eyes always drown me in them...........i left the place blushing...............This is a very small thing but it aroused those feelings of raavi which i have buried in a coffin after my marraige.......... Cause of those hands of my husband made me empty from inside and all these little joys of life has been lost somewhere.............

Soon there was a noice and when i went there all the village people were standing i went there and i was shocked to core to see shiva beating krish blue and black and his hands were colored with blood......

The sight made me go back to shell again as i have seen Dev killing people like this.............. He used to kill people if they go against him........... Is shiva also the same.............. He had kidnapped me though he never mentioned the perfect reason but i thought not see reason for a peaceful venture but now seeing his hands dipped with blood made me think that i am wrong.......... He is just like dev....... Why would i have ever looked into his eyes...... Why ever my heart flutter to see me....... Why.........

I looked into his eyes and he looked into mine and than he still looking on my eyes hit krish gain extracting his life out of him..........

I felt pierced............ My heart which was healing and cleansing cause of him is again drown in filth where i have came from........

Shiva is also like dev my heart clenched and a fear crept in my heart that if he is like dev he will....... Will he too touch me........

But i never felt bad at his touch.......

I kept on avoiding him for the whole day as i don't want to face him.............

I was cleaning dishes after dinner and i could feel his presence he came near me and stood next to me and since i was about to pock a bowl his hand touched mine and i flinched......... I didn't felt disgusted but i had fear that if he also just think of me just that way than.....

And he quickly withdrew his hand and said so softly,

"Tum mujhe nazarandaz kyon kar rahi ho...... "

I didn't replied i don't have any answers...........

He again spoke.....

"Ajj jo kuch bhi huya mere pass wajah hai....... "

I again not replied or reciprocated and kept on doing my work.......

He now with an urgency spoke.....

"Ikk baar..... Baas ikk baar sun lo.... "

I was finished with work and he kept on asking for a chance but i ignored........ My work was done and i tried to move out but soon i was trapped between the wall of kitchen and shiva......

He looked at me with those glassy and moist eyes and said in a very high tone,

"Main kabse kuch bol raha hoon aur tum sun hi nahi rahi ho....... "

I kept quiet and he looked at me now in anger and raised his voice making the sound echo in my ears and he shouted,

"Chup kyon khadi ho........ Main kuch bol raha hoon aur tum meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi ho...... "

I looked at him with glassy eyes and he pinned me with the wall again and said,

"Mujhe tumse baat karni hai aur tum mujhe mana nahi kar sakti..... "

And when" mana nahi kar sakti" Left his mouth tears made there way out as dev also say same and if i protest always shout on top of his voice............ Making me scared and i was scared again...... Same events....... Same words..... And again my body was shivering.......

Shiva looked at me and he curled his fist and punched the wall behind me so loudly and i ran........

I don't know why but if dev would have been here the next thing will be my clothes off and he Brutually molested me.........

And since the events were same i was scared....... I don't want this to happen and his eyes were full of anger......... I just want myself to be wrong............ I just want the urge and anger in his eyes to be just that not more to it........

I just want myself to be wrong......

And i went to my room......

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Hey guys!!!!!!!

Finally i updated this......

I think this update doesn't have any romantic moments but i want shivi to know each other's fears......

And than take steps further......

Do give your honest views on same........

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION