Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 90

Oh my my ...seductress raavi🔥😍🔥

Ok so the guess was right Mrs. Siganporia is here..thank god she is not in the guests list..it would've been a big mess.

These two complete each other... how effortlesly they cover up for each other..Raavi took charge of the situation... first premature errectile dysfunction and then her words to Mrs. S... Oh no, he couldn’t..you know..get it up..🤣🤣🤣.... Bold raavi is loooove😍

I suppose this one performs adequately?.. hahahahahah🤣🤣🤣🤣...Mrs. S was in no mood to leave them alone..did she knew everything and was playing along??..all I can think of right now is the dialogue.. ye raaj bhi usi ke saath chala gaya🤣😆

Riya I am in looooove with your song choices🤗..first chaudhvin ka chaand and now goriya re..😍😍

Their dessert paradise was damn hot🔥🔥🔥

God bless dhara for organizing that game..no wonder shiva lost..the way you described her...I can imagine raavi looking like an epitome of sexiness in a pale green saaree🔥🔥

Yaaay we are getting no. 7 on a moving truck🔥🥳🔥

Next chapter is gonna be smoking hot🔥🥳

I must say raavi has a colourful and wonderful bucket list😆..can't wait for no. 8 and 11

P.S. I kinda want to read the next one right now ..like right now ...and at the same time don't want it to come soon as it is gonna be the last one😭..I am soo gonna miss this wonderful piece of writing

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Please have mercy on my poor heart and do not leave us wanting!! Please please please! *throwing myself on the ground dramatically and wailing*

*Me following suit and reaching for Liz's feet like*

Sunn liya? Sbko chahiye main action. Akela nahi hu main. 😎

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Oh man! Itna dramatic ?

Wait till you read the last one. Perhaps you won’t want anymore after that one! 😳

Bht mushkil hai ye tho...ki hum na mange aur 😆

Tho kahan tak pahunchi baat phir ab?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Tho kahan tak pahunchi baat phir ab?

Annnndd my little stalker Ritu is back! Ngl, kinda missed her! 😆

The first part is nearly done but itna descriptive action maine pehle kabhi nahi likha, so going over it again to make sure it's okay!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Annnndd my little stalker Ritu is back! Ngl, kinda missed her! 😆

The first part is nearly done but itna descriptive action maine pehle kabhi nahi likha, so going over it again to make sure it's okay!

Oh someone missed me! ❤️

Wo Raavi waale scene jaisa descriptive??? ☺️

Do parts hain iss chapter ke? Kab tk niptega? ☺️☺️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Oh someone missed me! ❤️

Wo Raavi waale scene jaisa descriptive??? ☺️

Do parts hain iss chapter ke? Kab tk niptega? ☺️☺️

Haan wohi!

Pata nahi kitne parts hain yet 😆

Am soooo busy today so I don’t think I’ll get much writing done but maybe I’ll post a sneak peek for y’all! 😎

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Annnndd my little stalker Ritu is back! Ngl, kinda missed her! 😆

The first part is nearly done but itna descriptive action maine pehle kabhi nahi likha, so going over it again to make sure it's okay!

IT WILL BE SPECTACULAR! Please just post already

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Haan wohi!

Pata nahi kitne parts hain yet 😆

Am soooo busy today so I don’t think I’ll get much writing done but maybe I’ll post a sneak peek for y’all! 😎

Itnaaaaa jyaadaaa pyaaaarrr?

Haayyyyeee 🤗❤️

Update 11: Lay all your love on me

Sneak Peek (posted Dec. 2),

The opening para. Just to whet your appetites and keep the interest going! 😆 I hope it does that! Let me know what you think!

Shiva froze as Raavi moved her lips against his, softly and with a little uncertainty. Her lips explored his tentatively, dipping to catch his upper lip between hers and then repeated the same process with his lower lip. His belly tightened in reflex and his organ stiffened in attention. But he held himself back. This was hers - her move and her game of seduction. He sensed she needed to be in control and he had to give her that. He willed his hands to rest against her hips passively, resisting the impulse to pull her closer to where he was aching for her. Her kisses, even though tentative and innocent, were turning him on to an extent he didn’t think was possible. Even with her sweet ministrations, she was able to bring him to this current state of mindless want. He was using up all of his self-control not taking control of the kiss. The cool silk of her dress was spread across his thighs and he felt the warmth of her bare flesh underneath through the thin fabric of his trousers, where she had hiked up the gown to slide onto his lap with ease. His fingers ached to touch that smooth skin there, but not yet. He would give her her triumph first.