Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 92

IF seriously needs an aag reaction. Like right now! That whet our appetites and how! Gosh! I can’t wait.

And darn, Shiva has tremendous self control and while part of me wants him to lose his self-control, there is a part of me that has fallen in love with him more because he is letting her take things at her pace. Her game, her rules. The amount of love and respect he has for her has my whole damn heart!!

I love you Lizzie’s Shiva Pandya. And more than you, I love the one who is bringing you so beautifully to life with her writing!


Your no. 1 fan, ma’am. Today and always!

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie, I'm so sorry that I'm late. 😒 This month is kinda hectic since Christmas is coming. And OMG, I was not NOT ready for this.😆 The great seducer Raavi has my heart.😆 Shiva should've never underestimated her. I wish you could've updated everyday though.😔 I really like the way you write. I have said this before but I'm saying it again, your writing really gives a visual feel. I didn't even had to google the dresses you mentioned since you have given the perfect description.❤️

Waiting for the next update🤗

Heyyy Pooh! 🤗 No worries, der aaye par durust aaye! 😆

I'm so so thankful to you for saying my writing has a visual feel because that's what most writers aspire to! To give their readers that immersive experience, create that imagery of a whole different world through only words. It's hard but I feel like the battle is half won if I achieve even a small percentage of it! So thank you, Pooh!

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

u didn't pressure me dear and u dont say sorry.....I really look forward to reading your stories.....and haq se bolna ki read karo and comment karo....I loved that 😆🤗

tumhe to mujhse uthak baithak karva lena chahiye tha 🤣

Theek hai ab haq se bolti hoon! Sneak Peek padho aur karo comment!

Originally posted by: Coleus

Oh my my ...seductress raavi🔥😍🔥

Ok so the guess was right Mrs. Siganporia is here..thank god she is not in the guests list..it would've been a big mess.

These two complete each other... how effortlesly they cover up for each other..Raavi took charge of the situation... first premature errectile dysfunction and then her words to Mrs. S... Oh no, he couldn’t..you know..get it up..🤣🤣🤣.... Bold raavi is loooove😍

I suppose this one performs adequately?.. hahahahahah🤣🤣🤣🤣...Mrs. S was in no mood to leave them alone..did she knew everything and was playing along??..all I can think of right now is the dialogue.. ye raaj bhi usi ke saath chala gaya🤣😆

Damn Alisha I love you forever for bringing up these exchanges between ShiVi and Mrs. S because, ngl, I was so proud of them! I'm so glad they stood out to you! Like I've said before, writing humour, imo, is the hardest thing to do and I've managed to raise a smile, let along laughs, I feel like I've more than achieved my goal as a writer!

Riya I am in looooove with your song choices🤗..first chaudhvin ka chaand and now goriya re..😍😍

Wow! Thanks! Tbh, Goriya re is from one of my fav movies from those times, and I wanted a song they could dance to that had a coupl'y' romantic duet feel to it and I think this one fit the bill perfectly.

Their dessert paradise was damn hot🔥🔥🔥

God bless dhara for organizing that game..no wonder shiva lost..the way you described her...I can imagine raavi looking like an epitome of sexiness in a pale green saaree🔥🔥

Yaaay we are getting no. 7 on a moving truck🔥🥳🔥

Next chapter is gonna be smoking hot🔥🥳

I must say raavi has a colourful and wonderful bucket list😆..can't wait for no. 8 and 11

Thanks for mentioning the bucket list. It really was a whim, a crazy thought of mine and I just began writing it never intending for it to be part of this fic, so I'm glad people are liking it!

P.S. I kinda want to read the next one right now ..like right now ...and at the same time don't want it to come soon as it is gonna be the last one😭..I am soo gonna miss this wonderful piece of writing

Aww thank you for the enthusiasm, Alisha! Truly- the amount of love and attention I've gotten on here has been remarkable. Y'all a beautiful bunch of people!

Thank you, Alisha! 🤗

Originally posted by: Foxii

Aaaahhhhh ❤️❤️

Ufff This Shivi is gonna be the death of me... so hot

He will let her have her triumph

Holding back for now, huh👏

OMG please tell me, Shiva will lose

control ☺️

Can’t wait, write the part super fast and update sooooon.... Pleaseeeeee❤️

I've written part of the chapter (and in particular this scene- which maybe the most lengthy, descriptive scene of this sort I've ever written) and it's going a certain way. I didn't intend for it to happen in this way, but I found while typing that my fingers have a mind of their own and now I find I quite like the way it's turning out. So I'm gonna keep it and hope y'all like it!

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

IF seriously needs an aag reaction. Like right now! That whet our appetites and how! Gosh! I can’t wait.

And darn, Shiva has tremendous self control and while part of me wants him to lose his self-control, there is a part of me that has fallen in love with him more because he is letting her take things at her pace. Her game, her rules. The amount of love and respect he has for her has my whole damn heart!!

I love you Lizzie’s Shiva Pandya. And more than you, I love the one who is bringing you so beautifully to life with her writing!


Your no. 1 fan, ma’am. Today and always!

Wow! Neet! 😭😭😭😭

I don't even know how to react to this!

A writer only dreams of a comment like this!

You made me cry, gurlll!!

And yes, I know exactly what you mean because I was in two minds too about which Shiva I wanted to go with in this update.

And to know that you love the Shiva I created in my head (with a little help from canon)!! 🥳⭐️😭

I'm so so floored and humbled by this - I cannot even tell you!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Theek hai ab haq se bolti hoon! Sneak Peek padho aur karo comment!

jo hukum😆

oh boy oh... u planning to kill us with this teaser😲

now don't tell me it's not complete and will take time. .....I have planned to read it in some corner of the house or else I would ☺️😳

m ☺️ with the sneak peek 👀....anticipation is killing me

can't wait to read it.....jaldi karna....

and ask shiva ki itna self control late kahan se ho? m in puddle ☺️.....but that makes him worthy and unique...I love him too much

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

jo hukum😆

oh boy oh... u planning to kill us with this teaser😲

now don't tell me it's not complete and will take time. .....I have planned to read it in some corner of the house or else I would ☺️😳

m ☺️ with the sneak peek 👀....anticipation is killing me

can't wait to read it.....jaldi karna....

I am telling you that Sorry Roops!! 🥺

I haven’t had the time lately to work on this, things have been busy and I want to do justice to this last chapter! I don’t wanna leave any loose ends you know! So I’ll have to ask y’all to be a little bit extra patient for this one!

As for Shiva’s self-control, abhi first para hee toh padha hai! Aage aage dekho (padho) hota hai kya! 😆

Shh no spoilers!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I am telling you that Sorry Roops!! 🥺

I haven’t had the time lately to work on this, things have been busy and I want to do justice to this last chapter! I don’t wanna leave any loose ends you know! So I’ll have to ask y’all to be a little bit extra patient for this one!

As for Shiva’s self-control, abhi first para hee toh padha hai! Aage aage dekho (padho) hota hai kya! 😆

Shh no spoilers!

no spoilers 🤣

take your time dear.....no hurry....whenever you get time....we are here only....