Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 89

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This might be my favorite comment! Thanks so much, Neet! Fan or not, your words are validation to my writing. So thank you. Truly.

Please have mercy on my poor heart and do not leave us wanting!! Please please please! *throwing myself on the ground dramatically and wailing*

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Please have mercy on my poor heart and do not leave us wanting!! Please please please! *throwing myself on the ground dramatically and wailing*

Oh man! Itna dramatic ?

Wait till you read the last one. Perhaps you won’t want anymore after that one! 😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Oh man! Itna dramatic ?

Wait till you read the last one. Perhaps you won’t want anymore after that one! 😳

That is highly unlikely.. just saying! On that note, will we get the update soon?

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

That is highly unlikely.. just saying! On that note, will we get the update soon?

Haven’t started working on it yet, though I have some ideas down!

page 86...

u leave me speechless again and again....with your writing skills

m so sorry for being late ....kaan pakad ke sorry...uthak baithak karke sorry....pls forgive me

dev and rishita ka chapter over and m so glad....cat is out of bag and things are sorted...

his nightly visits are so amazing, unique and just their thing....he read the diary and trying to fulfill her dreams is fine....loved her contentment.....the ball, the singing wow....the kiss .....

the situation was electrifying....tension anticipation excitement wow and den he had to spoil everything.....after kissing her thoroughly, ravishing her to their hearts content....he could come up with that 😡....the gal would cry buckets .....felt like giving him 1 properly....

loved the update would be so repetitive but still loved it......your updates can't be read in haste....I hope u will understand

him singing and trying to pacify and manofy her was cute ....him choosing someone else for her was kab akal aayegi

their knowing more about each other was adorable....him pulling away and making himself distant was 🥺 for raavi and us....

is Mrs. S here? they would be caught 😆

she will take matters into her own hands m sure and uski akal thikane lagayegi.....

7 and 8 kya ho sakta hai 😳☺️ jo off limits hai....

Mrs S was incorrigible 😲...niece nahi to nephew 😆

champak ...... made me laugh out loud again🤣 😂

they are seducing each other and halat baki sabki kharab ho rahi hai...

7th was☺️....these 2 can seduce rock and wood.....read karte karte I was ☺️☺️....

they should get a room warna dusron ka haal behaal ho jayega😆

this one performs🤣....kuch zyada he acha🤣☺️ aag boy is always in mood....madam pallu gira gira ke poor shiva ko punish kar rahi hai

sweets eating ko bhi sensuous bana diya...what all she has not tried ......dhara is with raavi👍🏼 shiva u r gone....

she seduced him so perfectly boy.....little minx....

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

page 86...

u leave me speechless again and again....with your writing skills

m so sorry for being late ....kaan pakad ke sorry...uthak baithak karke sorry....pls forgive me

dev and rishita ka chapter over and m so glad....cat is out of bag and things are sorted...

his nightly visits are so amazing, unique and just their thing....he read the diary and trying to fulfill her dreams is fine....loved her contentment.....the ball, the singing wow....the kiss .....

the situation was electrifying....tension anticipation excitement wow and den he had to spoil everything.....after kissing her thoroughly, ravishing her to their hearts content....he could come up with that 😡....the gal would cry buckets .....felt like giving him 1 properly....

loved the update would be so repetitive but still loved it......your updates can't be read in haste....I hope u will understand

Arre itna sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Roops! I was just waiting to hear your thoughts since you've been reading from the start. Did not mean to pressure you. I'm sorry! 😒

I know I cannot demand that people read and comment on my fics, I can only hope they do! 😳

Dev and Rishita are together yes! Shiva sneaking into Raavi's room is a thing. I admit I haven't explored this to the fullest extent yet in this fic!

He did do his best, he was fantastic - he got her to sing, made her believe in herself, and then ruined everything all because of his innate belief that he isn't good enough for her. But that's just cos he's a gadheda and Raavi had to take matters into her own hands to assure him its him she wants- gadheda or not! 😆 He's her gadheda and she won't have him any other way!

I'm glad you enjoyed Mrs. S- she's so entertaining even if I do say so myself 😆 and so is Champak. These two might quite possibly chase ShiVi all their lives (in my fictional universe of course!)

Thanks for reading and your generous reviews on each update, Roops! 🤗

Lizzie, I'm so sorry that I'm late. 😒 This month is kinda hectic since Christmas is coming. And OMG, I was not NOT ready for this.😆 The great seducer Raavi has my heart.😆 Shiva should've never underestimated her. I wish you could've updated everyday though.😔 I really like the way you write. I have said this before but I'm saying it again, your writing really gives a visual feel. I didn't even had to google the dresses you mentioned since you have given the perfect description.❤️

Waiting for the next update🤗

u didn't pressure me dear and u dont say sorry.....I really look forward to reading your stories.....and haq se bolna ki read karo and comment karo....I loved that 😆🤗

tumhe to mujhse uthak baithak karva lena chahiye tha 🤣