Compromises ? - Shivi SS -(snippet of next chap) (page 9) - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loving the way the story is progressing. ❤️

Loved Krish and Rishita. They're sensible among the Pandyas. And you're right. Dhara is blind and deaf when it comes to her bacha Shiva. It's same with Shiva when Dhara is in the picture.

Well, Shiva has a long way to go.

Glad that Raavi chose to be independent first. 👍🏼

I hope she'll add Rishita in her new venture.


Waiting for the next chapter..

Update soon..

thank you so much

glad you liked it

will try to update tomorrow or day after <3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

I wish Rishita is one of them... She could handle their accounts and give suggestions for the fashion part of the business too....

Really nice work,❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

AMAZING 👏👏👏👏💯💯💯💯💯


WAITING FOR NEXT PART 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER FOUR


Raavi had come to her maasi’s place to take the leftover items to shift and had strictly warned her Mausa pa to not tell anyone about her whereabouts, even Maasi had no clue.


Raavi had decided to build herself in private and flourish in public.


Krish who was missing Raavi badly decides to follow her on her way back home, after about a drive of 20 mins they reached an apartment a little away from the outskirts of Somnath


“bhabhi” said krish startling Raavi


“krish tu yahan kya kar raha hai ?questioned raavi


“mujhe apki bohot yaad aati hai Bhabhi , please wapas aajao , acha teekh hai ghar wapas nahi ana toh mat aao lekin atleast mujhse milne toh aao na aap “ said krish while trying to control his tears


“arreyaise rote nahi hai, main toh idhar hi hoon na” said raavi while caressing krish’s hair


“tu yahan aya kaise ?”


“woh..woh maine apka peecha kiya” said krish while looking down


“im sorry , mujhe pata hai ki woh galat hai par mujhse raha nahi gaya, mujhe mere Bhabhi ke saath rehna hai “ saying which he cried more


“krishu kya hua hai ? aise kyun ro raha hai tu ? kuch hua hai kya ?” enquired a worried raavi


“mujhe bas abhi aapke saath time spend karna hai “murmured krish while hugging her


“teekhe chal upar , tujhe mein apna ghar dikhati hoon”squealed raavi trying to divert his mood


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“bohot ache se sajaya hai Bhabhi” smiled krish


“yeh hai tisha, meri dost “she introduced krish to isha


“hi krish , bohot sunna hai tumhare baare mein maine”said isha while forwarding her hand


“mein toh humesha se Bhabhi ka favorite tha” said krish with pride while shaking her hand


“tu hamesha mera favorite rahega.” Assured raavi while side hugging him


“chal bata , tujhe kya khana hai ?”


“mujhe apki classic chocolate milkshake peeni hai”ordered krish


“krish abhi kirane ka saaman laana hai , toh main bahar se order karun? “ asked raavi


“teekh hai” said krish half heartedly


“teekhe raavi , mujhe todha kaam hai mein bahar jaake aati hoon said isha


“teekhe isha , dhyaan rakh apna” hugged raavi


“aate waqt kuch chahiye toh bol mein leke ajaongi” smiled isha


“bye krish, hope you get to spend some good quality time with your Bhabhi”


“byee waved krish

Krish helped raavi keep the extra stuff and clean around a bit , raavi knew something was up with krish but decided to ask him about it after a while

“krish mujhe bata , kya hua hai ? tu aise achanak kyu roya ?” asked raavi , concern visible in her voice

“kuch nahi Bhabhi , chodo” tried to change the topic


“tu mujhse batein kab se chupane laga krish “she said while placing her hand on his cheek


“Bhabhi wahan mujhe bohot akela akela mehsus hota hai “krish tried to explain


“mein sun rahi hoon” assured raavi


“Bhabhi mein dhara Bhabhi se bohot pyaar kartha hoon aur unki izzat bhi , lekin yeh baath kisi se nahi chupi hai ki woh shiva se zyada pyar karthi hai , woh shiva ko samajhne ki koshish karthi hai par jab bath meri hoti hai tab kahan jata hai unka understanding ability ? just because mein sabse chota hoon sab mujhe compromise karne ko kehte hai . jab aap aayi toh mein apse bohot attach hogya tha , apke saath time bitane mein mujhe Khushi milti thi , lekin jab aap chali gayi toh wapas akela akela mehsus hua , abhi bhi pura ghar bas shiva shiva kar raha hai . main shiva se bohot pyaar kartha hoon, woh bhai hai mera lekin mein bas yeh chahta hoon ki koi mujhe bhi samjhe .“ he poured his heart out

Raavi stood there stunned, not knowing how much her small bean was going through, she decided to let him know that she is always there for him no matter what relation they share .


“tu itna bada kab hogya krish” asked raavi with tears


“aaj se jab bhi tujhe baath karni ho , tum mere paas ajana, mere pass time hi time hai ab se” laughed raavi


“thank you Bhabhi , I feel so much lighter after coming here” said krish


abhi bohot der hogayi hai , tu ghar ja . aur kisi ko batana math ki mein kahan rehti hoon , mein abhi kisi se milna nahi chahti krish” said raavi


“okay Bhabhi , this is our little secret” giggled krish


“chal ja abhi , bohot late hogaya hai , bye”

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okay so here is a chota sa update on krish and raavi , this SS will have a lot of krish , rishita , shiva and tisha . Dhara may get bashed here and there a little bit (meri mann ki bhadaas nikalne ke liye) i hope you liked this chapter, the next update will mostly be shivi centric .

do let me know how you liked the update <3

Edited by hapakalanoodles - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Really nice update.

Love krish and raavi bonding.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Awh Krish and Raavi 💜

Lovely update 💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Waiting for next part ...

Kindly update... Asap...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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CHAPTER FIVE - falling into place?


Pandya niwas


“Kahan tha tu krish” exclaimed dhara


“aaj kal bohot ho raha hai ye tera , college ke baad sida ghar aa aaj ke baad, samjha” she said sternly

“waise bhi farak kya padtha hai inhe” krish mumbled


“kuch kaha tune?” she asked


“nahi Bhabhi , aajaunga ghar mein kal se” he said and left

Rishita who was noticing all of this from afar felt something is wrong but decided to check up on him later

Raavi’s flat


“oi heroine , itna kya muh sadake baithi hai tu? Kuch hua hai kya?” isha enquired


“nahi yaar , mein bass soch rahi hoon ki yeh online business ka idea work toh karega na?” she asked uncertainly


“tu khud pe doubt kabse karne lagi hai raavi , tu fashion designing mein kamal hai aur yeh baat tu bhi janthi hai .Toh achanak yeh sawal kyu?”

“I don’t know isha , im very uncertain about everything.”

“its okay for you to be nervous about starting your business but never be uncertain about it. Have faith in your skills jaaneman” she said being dramatic

Raavi hugs her and says

“tere bina mera kya hota re”

“haina , kabhi kabhi mein bhi yahi sochti hoon ki tu mere bina kya karthi. Mein hoon hi aise , amazing aur top notch” isha said in an attempt to lighten the air

“okay ab hum ek checklist banate hain, so that we know ki humein kis cheezon ki zaroorat padegi “ said raavi

“firstly I would need someone to talk to brands and help find sponsors

Next we would need help with delivery

And finally we would need a webpage “

“tera woh bhai krish , woh bhitoh computer hi kartha haina ?”


“haan lekin kyun?”


“toh let him design our webpage ,he anyways wants to start doing a job. Woh humare liye webpage design karke dega aur hum usse uski salary bhi de denge” isha suggested


“yeh maine pehle socha kyun nahi” raavi wondered


“main krish se baath karke tujhe bataungi”

Next evening


Raavi goes near krish’s college to meet him


“Bhabhi aap yahan ?”


“krishh , kaisa hai tu ? aur college kaisa gaya?”


“kuch khas nahi Bhabhi aap balo”


“acha sun , mere pass ek offer hai”


“kaisi offer ? aap mujhe apne saath rehne ko allow kar rahe ho?” he screamed excitedly


“arrey nahi re , par woh bhi jaldhi hojayega” she assured with a smile


“toh aur kya offer hai?”


“tu kaam karna chahta tha na? kya tu mere saath kaam karega ?”


“Bhabhi mein apke liye zaroor kaam karunga , lekin karna kya hai?”


“oi kesar chudail , tu mere liye nahi balki mere saath kaam karega , mein apna ek online business start karna chahti hoon aur uske liye mujhe ek web designer ki zaroorat hai , kya tu mere saath-?”


“waaah Bhabhi , yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai kya . Mein toh humesha apki help karne ke liye tayaar hoon.”


“aur tujhe uski salary bhi milegi”


“salary walary nahi chahiye mujhe“


“arrey kaise nahi chahiye , tu mere saath kaam kar raha hai toh uske paise toh milenge hi tujhe . ab mujhe bas ek aur insaan ki zaroorat hai aur phir hum yeh business start kar sakte hai”


“kiski zaroorat hai aapko ?”


“mujhe koi chahiye jo mere liye brands se baat kare , sponsors laye etc “

Krish thinks for a while and then says

“agar aap bura na mano toh mein kisi insaan ko suggest karun ?”


“puch kyu raha hai , bol na ? koi hai kya tere dimag mein ?”


“haan , rishita Bhabhi.”

Raavi thinks for a while and realizes that rishita is the perfect person for this job

“yeh acha idea hai , main usse baat karke dekhti hoon” said raavi


“teekh hai tu ja abhi nahi toh der hojayegi “


“teekh hai Bhabhi , byee”


“bye , dhyan se jana”

Raavi’s flat

“tu sure hai ki rishita yeh kaam kar payegi?” asked isha


“haan yaar , rishita is really good at her work and she has the skill of getting things done her way”


“acha toh teekh hai tu usse baat karke dekh”

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Raavi calls rishita at night


“hello”


“hi rishita , kaise ho ?”


“mein teekh hoon raavi tu bata “


“sab teekh , ghar pe sab kaise hein?”


“puch maat yaar , mere wajah se ghar pe itne jaghde hote hai mein kya hi kahoon.”


“waise mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha”


“haan bolo , kya baat hai?”


“umm woh mein ek business start kar rahi hoon aur maine socha ki agar tum bhi meri help-“


“raavi im so proud of you. Aur mein definitely join karna chahti hoon . mujhe humesha kaam karna tha , lekin tumhare jaane ke baad sab badal gaya hai”


“rishita tumhe zyada kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai , mein bas yeh chahti hoon ki tum brands se baat karo ,collabs aur sponsors ke liye , woh tum phone pe bhi kar sakti ho. aur baki sab ke details mein tumhe kal milke bataungi”


“thank you so much raavi , tumhe andaza nahi hai ki mein kitna worthless feel kar rahi thi . itni padhai ki ,kyun ? ghar baitne ke liye ? I always wanted to do something on my own , mujhe apne pairon pe khade hona hai”


“sab teekh hojayega rishita , aur mein hoon tumhare saath”


“acha mein tujhe baad mein call karthi hoon , khana garam karna hai mujhe jaake”


“teekhe bye , dhyaan rakhna apna”

Raavi felt elated , finally things were progressing . Slowly but surely things are falling into place.

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Okay so i wanted to show the whole process of Raavi starting her business . i hope i did justice to the emotions one feels while starting something new .

And as for Shiva to come into role it will take some time.

I would want Raavi to be fully independent and then make Shiva realize his mistake .

ALSO ALSO , DORA IS THE VAMP IN MY STORY , I AM NOT FOND OF HER SO USKO YAHAN BOHOT GAALI PADEGI😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

you know I never thought about it but this second generation do have skills…in show also Raavi and Rishita could start something of their own and help pandya boys and that way this whole job and financial matters can be taken care of…

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

YOU’RE BACK 🤗

i’ve loved all your stories ❤️

A strong Raavi is a treat to watch

And I’m loving what Rishita said as well ❤️

A lot of girls study and end up getting married and not utilizing their skill sets

Most of the stories I’ve read on this forum kind of make Raavi look like a dobi, I really wanted to see a strong and independent character

Please update next part super soon ❤️😛

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