Compromises ? - Shivi SS -(snippet of next chap) (page 9) - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Amazing update🥰💕, can’t wait for the next update.

I so wanted a Rishita and Raavi bonding story💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Noodles!!! Just kidding, Tani😆! You're one of my multiple new behenas, right?! Never got around to welcoming you to our jungle, soooo

WELCOME TO THE JUNGLE🤗!!!!!

On a slightly more serious note, I loved the latest update..... Krish joining wasn't something I'd thought of, but I'm glad you did... Raavi-Rishita bonding has a lot of scope, so I love that too....

PS No one minds making Dhara Devi a vamp, I repeat, no one. I did it recently as well, so I definitely don't... 🤪

Lots of love, new behena.... NOODLES!! I love noodles, but sorry if I'm offending you... 😃


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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: SakshiD

YOU’RE BACK 🤗

i’ve loved all your stories ❤️

A strong Raavi is a treat to watch

And I’m loving what Rishita said as well ❤️

A lot of girls study and end up getting married and not utilizing their skill sets

Most of the stories I’ve read on this forum kind of make Raavi look like a dobi, I really wanted to see a strong and independent character

Please update next part super soon ❤️😛

Thank you so much sakshhh ❤️

I hope I did Justice in portraying her emotions 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Noodles!!! Just kidding, Tani😆! You're one of my multiple new behenas, right?! Never got around to welcoming you to our jungle, soooo

WELCOME TO THE JUNGLE🤗!!!!!

On a slightly more serious note, I loved the latest update..... Krish joining wasn't something I'd thought of, but I'm glad you did... Raavi-Rishita bonding has a lot of scope, so I love that too....

PS No one minds making Dhara Devi a vamp, I repeat, no one. I did it recently as well, so I definitely don't... 🤪

Lots of love, new behena.... NOODLES!! I love noodles, but sorry if I'm offending you... 😃


hii Sathya

HAHAHA thank you for the warm welcome 😂

I’m glad you liked Raavi-Rishita bond

They both have a lot of scope

Dhara Devi irks me to the core these days 🙄🙄

LMAO , you can always call me NOODLES 😂😂😂

Lots of love

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Lovely story! I read all the parts just now! Cannot wait for the dhara bashing. Love a mature and independent Raavi so looking forward to updates! Stay blessed!🌸🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Read all five chapters...

Awesome Tani..

Nice to see the girls Raavi and Tanisha starting up their own business..

A cute BIL Krish...helping his bhabhi..

And Rishita also wanting to do something.. Agreeing to help out Raavi..

Enjoyed reading it..

👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Hey beautiful people, i am back again with a small snippet of the next chapter, do let me know how you liked it

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Next morning


“Isha maine Rishita se baat ki aur woh humare saat kaam karne ke liye tayaar hai.” Said Raavi while making breakfast


“Perfect, toh shall we call both of them home for lunch or dinner and discuss everything?” isha suggested


“Dinner nahi kar sakte kyun ki ghar pe pata chal jayega, ill check on where we can meet”


“teekh hai , tu dekh le”

Raavi calls Krish

“Krish maine kal rishita se baat ki, aur woh maan gayi. Aaj college ke baad kya hum coffee shop pe mil sakte hein ?”


“Sure Bhabhi, aur mein bohot khush hoon ki apka business itne ache se start ho raha hai.”


“mera nahi , humara business krish. yeh jitna mera hai utna hi tumhara , rishita aur isha ka hai.


“Bhabhi aap ghar kab wapas aoge ?”


“Krish mujhe iss baare mein koi baat nahi karni, mein tujhe jagah ka address bhej thi hoon, bye”


“teekh hai Bhabhi”


“dhyan rakh apna”


“aap bhi”

Isha who overhears their conversation decides to make Shiva and Raavi meet.

“Haan aap saara saaman deliver kar dijiye” she spoke on the phone


“kya order kar rahi hai?”


“ration , iss mahine ka ration khatam ho raha hai toh maine order kar diya. mujhe abhi thoda kaam hai mein bahar jaake aathi hoon.”


“teekh hai , sambhal ke ja”

Isha calls krish and asks him to make shiva deliver the items home.

“yeh plan work karega na?” asked krish


“agar kuch nahi hua toh atleast in dono ko ek closure toh milega na” isha replied


“haan woh bhi teekh hai, lekin mein jaanta hoon ki dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai.”


“woh toh mein bhi jaanti hoon. Lekin yeh unn dona ka Rishta hai, isme sirf inke decisions matter karne chahiye. Jab se inki shaadi hui hai har koi inke beech aajata hai. Yeh shiva raavi ki shaadi kam pura pandya parivaar ki shaadi zyada lag raha hai. “


“hmm yeh bhi sahi hai. Chalo bas sab kuch teekh ho jaye”

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okay here it was , let me if you guys have any suggestions on how you want the story to progress i have 2 things in mind

a) raavi lets shiva know about her business

b) raavi is still angry and shiva and doesnt tell him anything

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Taani let Shiva know about Raavi’s business beacuse this Shiva will support her.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Loved it Taani❤️! And I think option B might be better... This Shiva is regretting his mistakes already....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Loved it❤❤❤

I think Shiva should know about the business. He will support her❤

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