Compromises ? - Shivi SS -(snippet of next chap) (page 9)

Hey guys I have been a silent spectator of this forum and after the constant horrible episodes I’ve decided to write something based on yesterdays epi , here it would be raavi who would walk out . i haven't written in a while so do forgive any mistakes and im not sure if i would turn this into an SS or TS or leave it just as an drabble , do let me know if you would want me to continue. Im sick of seeing the dejected and hopeless raavi so here it goes . dialogues are in bold

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It had almost been 2 weeks since Raavi was trying to mend her relationship with shiva , but after what happened today , things may take a major turn

Raavi ran out of the angan after shiva pushed her away infront of everybody, was she so unwanted in everyone’s lives that people could just use her and then throw her away? all the built-up insecurities made their way to her mind blocking away every possibility of thinking right , she thought back at the time her parents had left her

“jab mere khud ke maa papa mere apne nhi hue , kisi dusre se kya hi umeed rakhon mein” laughed raavi at her fate

Walking aimlessly on the road her mind travelled back to shiva’s words

“hum dono kabhi ek nhi ho sakte”

“yeh compromise mein nhi karne wala”

“chali ja yahan se”

“meherbani ka Rishta hai yeh“

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Shiva looked startled as she ran away , scrunching his eyes at his behavior he turns to leave but is held back by a strong arm pulling him inside the kitchen , by the time he processes what is happening around him he receives a tight slap across his face by gaumbi

“gaumbi” he managed to say but not before receiving one more slap right on the face .

“maine yeh kabhi socha nhi tha ke aise naubat aegi ki mein tujhpe haath utaunga shiva “ gaumbi said, his face clearly showing disappointment

“kaun hai woh huh ? kaun ?!! teri biwi hai woh shiva , koi saman nhi hai woh , uss bachi ki bhi feelings hai , mein bhi kitne dino se dekh raha hoon ,raavi kitne efforts dal rahi hai tujhse bath karne ke liye aur tu sada hua Padwal ke tara muh banake chala jata hai . aur aaj jo tune kiya usse hadd paar karne kehte hain , sabke samne apne biwi ki apman karna kis se sikha hai tunne ? “ screamed gaumbi in anger

“gaumbi mere woh matlab nahi tha , mujhe nhi pata ki woh sab kaise hogya , mein gusse mein tha issi liye “

“toh tu apne gusse mein pure mohele ke samne apne patni ki bezzati karega? Kabhi socha hai ki usse kaise lagega jab uska khud ka pati usse aise treat karega toh , aise sab ke samne dhaka dena yeh kaise tameez hai shiva ?sabke samne kya , akele mein bhi tujhse aisa karna nhi chahiye . “ gaumbi said sternly

“mein manta hoon maine ab jo kiya woh galat hai par main aur usse iss unchahi rishte mein nhi bandna chahta .. kab tak karegi woh compromise “

And again he gets slapped again but harder this time in order to show him the reality

“kya compromise ?!? tumne apne rishte ko ek samjhota ka naam diya hai !kabhi usse pucha ki woh kya chahthi hai ? agar uske liye yeh samjhota hota toh phir woh tujhse bath karne ki ya phir apna Rishta sudharne ki kyun try karegi”

“par gaumbi , main nhi hoon woh insaan jo raavi deserve karthi hai , wohek gentleman deserve karthi hai jo usse khush rakhe “ murmured shiva whilelooking disappointed

“shiva aaj ke pehle tu mere liye gentleman hi tha , koi sirf ache kapde pehne se gentleman nhi ban jata , woh mard jo apne partner ko respect kare , pyaar kare aur uski value kare woh hota hai gentleman , par aaj jo harkat tunne kihai woh ek gawar ki hai . “ after a few seconds

"aur agar tujhe aise lagtha hai ki tu uske liye teekh nhi hai aur tu usse deserve nhi kartha , toh ban woh insaan jo woh deserve karthi hai , Raavi ne kabhi tumse shartein nhi rakhi ki usse branded kapde dilao ya phir mehege mehege restaurants mein khana khilo , woh bachi sirf pyar chahti hai , respect chahti hai" he said a little calmer than before

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It was pretty late at night and the clouds looked like they would fall any minute . Raavi sat down near a lake letting all her bottled up emotions out.

“jab choti thi tab ma- papa chod ke chale gaye aur phir jis insaan seshaadi hone wali thi ussne mujhe mandap pe chod diya aur ab jisse shaadi hui wohshaadi ke baad chodna chahta hai . urghhhhhhh kyun hai meri kismat itni buri ,kyun mein uss pagal bhootnath ko chahne lagi , kya hai mujhme kami ?itna asaankyu hai logon ko mujhe chod ke jane ke liye . itni baad kismat hu kya main ?pehle meri ek kangan se sauda kardiya aur ab sab ke saamne mera Mazak bana dia, Mazak ….haan wahi toh hoon main .. “ she smirked and then cried until her tears dried up

As time passed it started pouring heavily and as a fresh gush of wind hit her face , she decided

“lekin ab aur nahi, mujhe naahi maasima ki zarurat hai aur nahi shiva pandya ki , jab bath self respect ki ho toh no compromise. Shiva pandya tum jo chahte the wahi hoga. “ she said to herself before walking the other direction .

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so how was it ? i wrote it in a haste to get my mind out of the crappy episodes , and im sorry if ive given shiva too many slaps i felt he deserved it here, anyways do let me know how you liked it and whether or not u guys want me to continue this :)

lots of love

tani <3

Beautiful 💕 looking forward to it👍🏻

Loved it👏 Esp Gaumbi's dialogues👍🏼 plzzz continue Waitinggggg🤗

Amazing!! Please continue! ❤️

Amazing

How I wished in show to Gaumbi would have said something to Shiva.

Happy seeing that here Raavi isn't compromising with her self respect.

Would be waiting for the next part.

Loved it! Please continue... I so want to see a strong Raavi who can stand up for herself without anyone's support.

Looking forward for next update!!

Loved this❤️ looking forward to it.

I so want this to happen in the show..its high time now ravi should give it back to shiva.

Continue soon

Great.. loved Gaumbi Shiva Conversation

He was right... this behavior was like a gawar

Please continue and tell us what Raavi plans to do

CHAPTER 2 -moving out ?

It was pretty late at night and was pouring cats and dogs , Shiva was pacing around restlessly as Raavi was no where to be seen , Gaumbi , Dev, Krish and shiva had looked almost the whole of Somnath but couldn’t find Raavi .

Maasi was pacing around crying about how her bachchi was afraid of thunderstorms and here there was a whole landslide due to the bad weather .

Dhara seemed tensed though she was fighting with her own turmoil of emotions but couldn’t stop worrying about Raavi as she was equal to her just like her other 3 bandars ,she always thought of raavi as her younger sister and as much as she hates to admit it , today her shiva was the one who was wrong and to be blamed .

Rishita was also worried for raavi as these days they had grown closer , she saw her elder sister in raavi and was happy that their relationship was mending .

Suman was ashamed of her sons behavior but all wrong thoughts came to her mind knowingthe weather , situation and current mental stability of Raavi .

Krish had always seen Raavi as his bestfriend and elder sister , but what shiva did today shocked and disappointed him

“yeh sab teri wajah se hua hai shiva” said krish while crying

“bhabhi kitni koshish karthi hai ki tu aur woh ache se rahe par nhi , tujhe toh bewakoof ki tarah unhe hurt karna hai , haina ? jab main , iss ghar ka sabse chota sadasya yeh dekh paya ki Bhabhi kitni hurt thi toh tu kyu nhi dekh paya ?” he screamed

“agar meri Raavi Bhabhi ko kuch hua toh main tujhse kabhi bath nhi karoonga “

“ayy krish, ku..kuch nhi hua hai Raavi ko teekh hai , woh toh bas mujhe pareshaan karneke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai , maine usse bohot hurt kiya haina issilye badlale rahi hai ..” he said while trying to control his tears

“usse kuchnhi hua teekh hai krish “ he said trying to reassure himself

“ayy shiva agar meri bachi ko kuch hua na toh mein teri zindagi ujad dungi , woh bachi itni masoom aur achi hai ki usse puri duniye se chupakar rakhna chahiye aur tu hai ki usse sirf or sirf dard de raha hai , kya manga usne tujhse huh ? paise mange ? iss rishita ki tara shopping le jane ko kaha ? nhi na , sirf tujhse teekh se baath karna chahti thi , bas tu iss rishte ko apna le , bas yehi chahti thi meri Raavi” said mami while bursting into tears , the only person Prafulla loved with all her heart was raavi and after the kangan incident she felt ashamed of herself for trading her daughter with a mere bangle .

shiva stood in a corner with his head down as he knew he was the one who was wrong here and all the allegations that has been thrown to him are nothing but the truth , how did he not see how much she was trying , how could he hurt someone so much .

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Raavi loved rain but thunders always scared the being out of her but right now she is emotionless.no fear, no emotions were in her vicinity , irrespective of these feelings she wasn’t dejected , she was done being hopeless and taking everyone’s bullshit . she had stopped at a mandir and sat there looking at her screwed up life

“my life is screwed up cause I gave others the control over it , I let people run over me . I may be naïve but not stupid . ab yeh Raavi kisi ke liye bhi nhi royegi” she said while wiping her tears

Due to the landslide she wasn’t able to go back home but wanted to inform the family about her safety , she borrowed a priests phone and called her maasima , but the call didn’t get through due to the weak network , finally after 10 mins of walking around with the phone she reached an area with barely any network connectivity but it was enough to make a call

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Ring ring ring

All eyes went to the phone kept on the floor and Prafulla picked up in a jolt

“maasi”

“haye merebogi lal , Somnath ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki tu teekh hai” said Prafulla while finally taking a relived breath

“maasi mein teekh hoon aap chinta mat kijiye , land slide ki wajah se mere phone nhi lag raha tha , jab sab teekh hojay ga main-“ she was cut in between

“kahan haitu abhi ?? main abhi araha hoon , Raavi jaldi bol hai kahan tu ?” said shiva anxiously

“maasi mein ghar aake baath karoongi apse” said raavi before hanging up

“ acha hua ki Raavi sahi salamt hai” said suman while thanking god

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The sun marked its presence but none of them had even an ounce of sleep, krish was constantly staring at the door waiting for her arrival , Shiva was anxious and frustrated

By around 10am she entered the house , in her old clothes

“Bhabhi” screamed krish in joy before running and hugging her

Everyone’s attention was at the figure standing by the door

Raavi happily hugged krish back and kissed his forehead

“bhabhi apkopata hai main kitna dar gaya tha “ said krish while sobbing

“arrey aise rote nhi , mein hoon na yahan” smiled raavi , assuring krish

Next maasima came running and said “ acha hua tu ghar wapas agayi , ab chal yahan se , iss ghar mein aur ek min nhi rukhenge hum , chal tu apne ghar” while pulling her

Before any of the pandyas could say anything raavi spoke

“sahi kaha apne maasi , main iss ghar mein ab aur nhi rahoongi par mein apke sath bhi nhi rahoongi”

“ayy yeh kyabol rahi hai tu raavi ? mere saath nhi rahegi toh kahan rahegi tu haan ?”said a shocked mami

“tu kahin nhi ja rahi hai raavi” said shiva sternly

“main aur mere dost ne ek ghar dekha hai , pehle sirf who wahan shift hone wali thi lekin ab main bhi uske sath rahoongi” said raavi calmy

“yeh kya bath hai raavi ? ab tumhari shaadi hogayi hai , tu kahin aur kyu jake rahegi ?nahi maami ke ghar aur na hi kisi aur ke .. tu apne ghar mein rahegi , pandya niwas mein “ explained gaumbi

“nahi gaumbi , yeh mera ghar nahi hai , shiva ko divorce chahiye tha aur mein usse divorce dene ke liye thayar hoon” said raavi shocking everyone

“shiva tunne divorce-?” asked dhara looking at shiva

“Bhabhi woh sab maine gusse mein kahata , chipkali tu kahin nhi jayegi , samjhi tu .. main mantha hoon ki meri galati hai aur tu jo bhi saza degi mujhe who Manzoor hai ,please aise mat kar” cried shiva

“aise hi gid gida rahi thi mein shiva kuch din pehle , lekin ab aur nahi “ said raavi while looking at him

“nahi , maine woh sab gusse mein kaha and jo bhi kiya uske liye bohot sharminda hoon mein ,tu jo bhi bolegi mein who karunga . tu bas mujhe maaf karde” he cried

“toh teek hai , mein bol rahi hoon ki mujhe jane de , agar tune meri yeh baat man li toh main dubara isske baare mein kabhi kuch nahi bolungi” said raavi

“raavi-“ said shiva shocked

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okay so here it is , part 2 .. since most of you wanted me to continue im thinking of making this a SS , just a disclaimer , this SS will be more of Raavi becoming independent and shiva realising her worth , Shiva may be made to suffer a little bit .. but anyways do let me know how u liked the update and what would you like to see next

-tani <3