Aawara Shaam Hai - A ShiVi OS - Page 2

So much pain and so much left unsaid! Please write part 2!

Very interesting os👏

This suits Shivi, the pain and the unsaid words👏

Waiting for next part

take it slow but pleas upload a part 2

this was so well written I'd love to read more

lovely os!

Well written. ❤️ The setting, dialogues and your way of portrayal are all amazing. It was so natural. I loved it.

I'm craving hard to read further.

Do update soon.

Uff... Loved the angst🥺💔

Please please write a second part. *(haath jodne waale emoji)*

Beautiful ❤🤗

Amazing with different plot , and their emotions n wishes👍

Very well written! I like this anticlimatic ending as well. You want their love story to unfold slowly, won’t be surprised if that’s what actually happens in the show.

This is not done ..you cannot leave us there ..it was beautifully portrayed. Please do continue

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Oooh, very interesting!!!

Yeh dil mange more!!

Aww thank you ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

that was interesting! though i have to say that like shiva i was a bit confused at the end too 😆

hoping there's a part 2!

Haha 😆 Thank you! Hopefully part 2 (if I can come up with something) can clear things up 😉