Aawara Shaam Hai - A ShiVi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This looks really interesting.

Cant wait to read more

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

So much pain and so much left unsaid! Please write part 2!

Aww thank you ❤️❤️ I’ll def try to write another part!

Originally posted by: katheriene

Very interesting os👏

This suits Shivi, the pain and the unsaid words👏

Waiting for next part

Thank you so much ❤️ I wrote this one quickly but I’m glad that I was able to put forth ShiVi’s emotions correctly! Will def try and write another part!

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

take it slow but pleas upload a part 2

this was so well written I'd love to read more

lovely os!

Aww thank you so so much!! I’ll def try and write another part!

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Well written. ❤️ The setting, dialogues and your way of portrayal are all amazing. It was so natural. I loved it.

I'm craving hard to read further.

Do update soon.

Thank you ❤️ I’m honestly blown away by all the love and the fact that everyone enjoyed reading this one so much!! Means a lot!! I’ll def try and write another part soon!

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Uff... Loved the angst🥺💔

Please please write a second part. *(haath jodne waale emoji)*

Aww 🤗 I love angst myself haha Thank you so much!! Please aap haath matt jodiye (channeling my inner Dhara) 😆😆 I’ll def try and write another part soon!

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Beautiful.. ❤️

Thank you ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful ❤🤗

Amazing with different plot , and their emotions n wishes👍

Thank you so much ❤️❤️ Glad you enjoyed reading it!

Originally posted by: mpks1

Very well written! I like this anticlimatic ending as well. You want their love story to unfold slowly, won’t be surprised if that’s what actually happens in the show.

Thank you so much!! I’m really happy with the response! Me too! I love a good slow burn and character progression! Usually I’m ready to move on a few episodes after a confession (unless there is a solid plot twist ready)! I tried to envision what would take place on the show. Glad it came across like that!!

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This is not done ..you cannot leave us there ..it was beautifully portrayed. Please do continue

Aww thank you so much!! I’ll def try and write another part soon!!