Aawara Shaam Hai - A ShiVi OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: mpks1

 Very well written! I like this anticlimatic ending as well. You want their love story to unfold slowly, won’t be surprised if that’s what actually happens in the show. 

Thank you so much!! I’m really happy with the response! Me too! I love a good slow burn and character progression! Usually I’m ready to move on a few episodes after a confession (unless there is a solid plot twist ready)! I tried to envision what would take place on the show. Glad it came across like that!! 

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This is not done ..you cannot leave us there ..it was beautifully portrayed. Please do continue

Aww thank you so much!! I’ll def try and write another part soon!! 

Thank you everyone for the amazing response 🤗 I’ll def try and write another part soon!! I’m really happy with the response and all the lovely comments ❤️❤️

Esha

Ahh they were soo close 

Both crave for the same love :)

Do write more :)