ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 25

Originally posted by: frnd_ship

Which song is it

Its not a song. Its just something I tried.

Originally posted by: Scarysea

I love your story. It is one of my favourites till date. I feel like seventh heaven on seeing you have updated and after reading it again feel greedy for more.

I loved the way the story progressed and all the nuances you added to it. Just wow

Thank you so much. Its always heart warming to read comments such as these🙂

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful update ❤

Raavi is so confident that nothing can happen to her or shiv , when shiva is standing there as a shield.

All family members including janardhan family's role was nice 👏👏👏👏

Finally chaudhary are in jail .

Shivi are now married 🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍

Waiting for next update

Cont soon😊

Thank you so much🌹🌷 I will try to update soon.

Omg ,finally shaadi toh hogaya. The whole update was an outburst of emotions from shock , fear and finally peace of mind. Loved how Shiva stood as a piece of rock to protect Raavi and Shiv, saccha insaan hai Shiva and he did not give a damn what others thought. Loved the whole marriage sequence where he held onto Raavi and Shiv like he really owned them. Just felt emotional while reading how he tied the mangalsutra and she felt deep emotions surging through her mind and the feeling of completeness when he filed her partition with sindhoor. Overall this story anf this update gave me a cinematic feel.

Originally posted by: Janeavneil

Omg ,finally shaadi toh hogaya. The whole update was an outburst of emotions from shock , fear and finally peace of mind. Loved how Shiva stood as a piece of rock to protect Raavi and Shiv, saccha insaan hai Shiva and he did not give a damn what others thought. Loved the whole marriage sequence where he held onto Raavi and Shiv like he really owned them. Just felt emotional while reading how he tied the mangalsutra and she felt deep emotions surging through her mind and the feeling of completeness when he filed her partition with sindhoor. Overall this story anf this update gave me a cinematic feel.

Thank you so much...🍫🍫👍👍

Finally!! Gosh. I had been waiting for this update for so so long

I love the fact that All the hardwork that Shiva had already put in preparation for this day was made of use. This Vaidehi Chowdhraein ki band baja di. Reet Reet karke dimag aur kaan dono kharab kar rakhe the budhiya ne 🤬 .

I loved that even in this tense situation Shiva didn't drop his character & go ballistic but used his words to lure the truth out of her ex-inlaws so that society doesn't malign his Raavi. Bolne wale bolte rahenge, woh jaaye bhaad mein

I loved your writing for all the chapters & 'Najwa' for GHKKPM is also an FF that I absolutely adore for the way you have characterised it ❤️. Would seriously love to read more of your work of any genre now.

You're a GEM!!💎

Oh my God! It's the best chapter so far. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions, portrayal of emotions, dialogues were at the top notch. I could imagine all those things happening. It was an experience, really.

Glad that Shivi got married and elated that Thakurain n her son got to taste their own medicine. The way you incorporate all other characters into the scene was 👏. It was perfectly crafted.

The way Shiva stood up for Raavi and Shiv was commendable. 👏

I'm excited for the next chapter; to witness their marital life.

Shiva, his Raavi and their Laddoo.

Do update soon.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Finally!! Gosh. I had been waiting for this update for so so long

I love the fact that All the hardwork that Shiva had already put in preparation for this day was made of use. This Vaidehi Chowdhraein ki band baja di. Reet Reet karke dimag aur kaan dono kharab kar rakhe the budhiya ne 🤬 .

I loved that even in this tense situation Shiva didn't drop his character & go ballistic but used his words to lure the truth out of her ex-inlaws so that society doesn't malign his Raavi. Bolne wale bolte rahenge, woh jaaye bhaad mein

I loved your writing for all the chapters & 'Najwa' for GHKKPM is also an FF that I absolutely adore for the way you have characterised it ❤️. Would seriously love to read more of your work of any genre now.

You're a GEM!!💎

Awww. That seriously so sweet of u. Thank u so much. Its really heartwarming to see people liking something I wrote and put my effort in🌹🌹🌹🌹🌷

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Oh my God! It's the best chapter so far. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions, portrayal of emotions, dialogues were at the top notch. I could imagine all those things happening. It was an experience, really.

Glad that Shivi got married and elated that Thakurain n her son got to taste their own medicine. The way you incorporate all other characters into the scene was 👏. It was perfectly crafted.

The way Shiva stood up for Raavi and Shiv was commendable. 👏

I'm excited for the next chapter; to witness their marital life.

Shiva, his Raavi and their Laddoo.

Do update soon.

Thank you so much.

I will try my best to update soon.🌹🌹🌹

love it do update soon

love shiva and raavi parts

and i live shiv and shiva part the most they r so adorable