ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 23

Where are you dear? Where are you?🙈

Matlab pehle toh Ch-4 mein itna accha likha ki I almost cried 😭

Then the last 2 chapters you uploaded so fast that I lapped them up like a hungry devourer

And now you're torturing us poor readers with a cliffhanger for so long! Please, Pretty please (with bashful eyes)😳 do put the next part soon.

I'm going insane awaiting the next part. I want Shiva to break Adhiraj's face & marry Raavi right infront of him if the situation has to work in that way. I want Suman & Dhara to teach a lesson to Vaidehi Choudhrain along with Maami & Anitha 😎

Omg i really loved the update eagerly waiting for the next update ❤❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Fuuuhh, what a roller coaster ride this has been!

Damn girl the dramatics, the fight, Raavi's defeat, her getting back her fighting spirit once she saw Shiva, Shiva's possessiveness !! EVERYTHING WAS ON POINT !

I kinda hope the story would go this way since Vaidehi kept questioning their relationship ! And she had the AUDACITY to throw blame on Raavi's head and question Raavi's character, when it was her son who was a cheater and abuser ! I love how Shiva sarcastically give the answers to all her insinuations ! It proved that Raavi's character was being malign on purpose ! What's more, he didn't give a 2 f*cks about what people will say ! That gave confidence to Raavi, gave her the boost to her strength to hold on just a little longer and she got rewarded at the end ! She trusted him full heartedly and they are now safely married !

The thought Shiva put into his backup plan ! He knew this day would come, and he had already put everything in place ! He's just SO MAD that it HAD to happen when he decided to go out and leave her after a fight ! And him not picking up his phone at first also might be making him feel guilty ! But alas, everything went well !

And that cliffhanger !! I can relate ! Raavi has held on as long as she could and once she realised that her family is safe, that SHE and her BABY is SAFE !! Her systems gave out because she knows, these people around her are her people. They will protect her and her baby ! I love that ! Though I don't think Shiva would appreciate it seeing her fainting 😂😂

Such a great job ! Please don't tell me this fic is coming to an end !! I'll be missing it if is ! Keep up the good work ♥️🥰

Finally Shaadi ho gayi 🥳

What an update! Everything was so intense and beautiful. Things are finally settled 👏

Their love and care for each other is so heartwarming ❤️

Update soon

Ohh goshhh!!the whole chapter was filled with roller coaster rides. Kabhi possessiveness, kabhi fights, kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch.

Beautiful updates 😍😍

Off. Lovely part. It was perfect. Just the way I'd liked. I just wish Vaidehi and Adhiraj were humiliated more and felt what they put Raavi through.

But Shiva in action was lovely. Loved how he claimed his stake. Raavi and Shiv were his and only he had the right to make decisions on their behalf❤️. He doesn't need Raavi to tell him that. Curious to know what will be next. Will Raavi feel guilty about what she said earlier? And hope she doesn't think of repaying him because that means she thinks he did her a favor. When it's not true. And Shiva would be hurt. Shiva did it because it was his right to protect her. And will Shiva feel guilty that she had to face humiliation in his house front of people of Somnath because he was out for some time? Hope not. Looking forward to see what next chapter brings.

this was really good!

shiva in action and protecting both raavi and shiv was wonderful

finally shivi ki shaadi ho gayi

can't wait for their solo scene now!

Originally posted by: Jazzsingh20

Omg i really loved the update eagerly waiting for the next update ❤❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I will try to make it soon🙂

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Fuuuhh, what a roller coaster ride this has been!

Damn girl the dramatics, the fight, Raavi's defeat, her getting back her fighting spirit once she saw Shiva, Shiva's possessiveness !! EVERYTHING WAS ON POINT !

I kinda hope the story would go this way since Vaidehi kept questioning their relationship ! And she had the AUDACITY to throw blame on Raavi's head and question Raavi's character, when it was her son who was a cheater and abuser ! I love how Shiva sarcastically give the answers to all her insinuations ! It proved that Raavi's character was being malign on purpose ! What's more, he didn't give a 2 f*cks about what people will say ! That gave confidence to Raavi, gave her the boost to her strength to hold on just a little longer and she got rewarded at the end ! She trusted him full heartedly and they are now safely married !

The thought Shiva put into his backup plan ! He knew this day would come, and he had already put everything in place ! He's just SO MAD that it HAD to happen when he decided to go out and leave her after a fight ! And him not picking up his phone at first also might be making him feel guilty ! But alas, everything went well !

And that cliffhanger !! I can relate ! Raavi has held on as long as she could and once she realised that her family is safe, that SHE and her BABY is SAFE !! Her systems gave out because she knows, these people around her are her people. They will protect her and her baby ! I love that ! Though I don't think Shiva would appreciate it seeing her fainting 😂😂

Such a great job ! Please don't tell me this fic is coming to an end !! I'll be missing it if is ! Keep up the good work ♥️🥰

She was running on adrenaline till now and now that every thing is settled exhaustion and stress is catching up. Shiva is going to be worried.