ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 27

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This is so beautiful. You are really talented🤩🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago

i love shiva and shiv part can u add that

and what did shiva say to shiv when he handed him to dhara and he went to her.

plz update today i know u did yesterday but i really love reading ur story and just want to continue reading. if i could choose i would say update every hour but i know u cannot so can u plz at least update eveyday plz plz

i read all ur stories they are all very nice

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just wow.. the plot is so beautifully written.. it's so amazing.. loved it..😊😊❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

I feel so much relieved after reading this chapter.😊 Finally Shivi are together. The way, whole Pandya parivaar stood for chota Shiv was so heartwarming.

Your version of Rishita is so refreshing. She understands people and knows how to handle situations. This is the Rishita we all want in the show, in future.

The way you portrayed each couple's scene was superb.

Shivi scene- you nailed it.

You penned down this chapter amazingly as always.


Do update soon.

Looking forward to see Shivi's evolution as man n wife.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

I feel so much relieved after reading this chapter.😊 Finally Shivi are together. The way, whole Pandya parivaar stood for chota Shiv was so heartwarming.

Your version of Rishita is so refreshing. She understands people and knows how to handle situations. This is the Rishita we all want in the show, in future.

The way you portrayed each couple's scene was superb.

Shivi scene- you nailed it.

You penned down this chapter amazingly as always.


Do update soon.

Looking forward to see Shivi's evolution as man n wife.


Thank you so much.


Soon...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loved it! Loved couples having their own conversation. I almost thought that Dev would blame himself for what happened to Raavi. Sure, he had right to love Rishita, but wished he showed some remorse over not telling her early enough which led to her leading this kind of life. It's one thing to hear and another to see it with your own eyes.but loved how Rishita came around.


Shiv and Veda are going to be close siblings. Look forward to their bonding as well.


And finally, ShiVi, are together without any kind of misunderstanding or regret. I loved their scene and how both reflected to "hisse mein aata hai" scene. Can't wait for the next part!


Thank you soo much🌹


Soonn...

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Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

i love shiva and shiv part can u add that

and what did shiva say to shiv when he handed him to dhara and he went to her.

plz update today i know u did yesterday but i really love reading ur story and just want to continue reading. if i could choose i would say update every hour but i know u cannot so can u plz at least update eveyday plz plz

i read all ur stories they are all very nice


Thank you so much🌹🌹🌹👍🌷🌷🌷


Soooonn

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Posted: 4 years ago

Pliz update soon ❤❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aaaah finally happiness.


The couple conversations were so insightful.


Humara Shiv so cuuute🥰


Update Sooon!

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