ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 11

That was a gut-wrenching update .

The way you have described how Raavi pulled through the tortures meted out to her. The way she felt 💔

This was PHENOMENAL !! I rarely find pieces where I get emotional but this was one of them & I salute you for that 👏 .

Okay, so I read it again with the song Humdard playing it on loop. And I cried, I still am. This is way too painful. You're an amazing Writer!!

Wow..so beautifully written!! 👏

This is damn beautiful 💜

Shiva- Shiv are pyaar 💕

Please don't stop writng and continue soonest.. you have an awesome way with words👌😍

This is so good. I cried hearing her flashback, but those became happy tears towards the end! 👌👍🥰

Very beautiful chapter! Raavi's feelings were amazingly described ❤️

The bond between shiva and shiv is precious 🤗

It was beautiful to read how shiva saved her whenever she was in trouble and how he became the light in her darkness and gave her a new reason and hope to live

Gaumbi was very sensible here! Loved how he gave shiva space to take care of Raavi.. can't wait to see how Raavi will heal with the help of shiva, shiv and the rest

No words. This was a tear jerking update. My heart breaks just imagining what Raavi went through. Can never ever see that. 💔💔 But ai am so glad that Raavi and Shiva had that moment after Dev broke the wedding. It gave her strength to face any troubles. He has always been her savior, her guide, and is about to be her anchor as well. And the best part is she trusts him unconditionally and has acknowledge what she feels for him. Just scared to name it. And Shiva recognizes and feels the same as well. My question is, did he also develop feelings for her over the two years or was it after she came back and learned of her pain and bravery? Was he just guilty before or did that guilt/anger at his family made him realize his feelings for her as well. And I love how Shiva's vowed to protect them both and his bond with Shiv is just ❤️. But with both knowing it what they feel about theoother, I'd love for them to get married soon. Shiva can officially adopt Shiv and Raavi won't have to be stuck in her house. She can slowly learn to fly again.

I love love love how this story's going btw. Please update the next part super soon! 🙂

I don't know why I've never come across this ff until now, but caught up. I am speechless! By far one of the best ffs I've read so far! I was hooked from the very beginning.

I loved how you changed it up but kept the ShiVi essence in the storyline. Their dialogues, their comfort levels when they talk, Shiva's protective instincts, the pandya family's warmth, mami's love...you captured it all so beautifully. I even imagined all the scenes happening, even some of the flashbacks Raavi had (the ones from the actual show).

The way I cried reading Raavi's story 🥺. I don't think I felt this bad for her in the actual show! When she started to open up, I just wanted to give her huge hug...thankfully Shiva was there for her! I loved how she found strength in Shiva, and how protected she feels around him. But I can't tell you how much I smiled when it was revealed that her son's name was Shiv! My heart exploded! 😭 You painted their relationship perfectly. You gave them another dimension ❤.

I think I made it obvious that I loved the story. But I have to leave the last praise for you...You are an awesome writer! Please give us some more! ❤

It’s such a beautiful story and so well written. You have really gone into the dept of every emotion.

just loved it

Can’t wait for more

Awesome story dear! Your writing 👏. This brought me to tears!

update soon love ur story