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Kirdaar





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It is based on episode 29 , after Meerub heard a gunshot 🤯

I have shown a more dark murtasim here . Hope you like it ☺️he says something objectionable. So proceed with caution .


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Meerab was scared . Very scared of that gun sound . Her heart was in her mouth, literally in her mouth . What if something happened to him ? What if he shot himself ?


Did he ,, oh god did he ?


" Murtasim ...."


She gave a heartwrenching cry and ran ..


Ran for her life ..ran for her murtasim ...


"Murtasim ... Murtasim ..."


Her voice trembled , but her feet didn't . They were in sync with her heart . Racing like a mad horse on the loose .


She wanted to reach near him . To see , if he was alright ? And to give her credit,In record time , she reached the garden area , from where the sound came ..


The environment was eerily calm now , yet the ominous feeling it was laced with , was giving her chills , in the humid of late june .


Goosebumps covered her body , while her breathing were heavy , her face - looking so pale with dread .


" Murtasim ... "


She called again , moved her neck here and there , and atlast found him near the garden chair , with his gun pointing upwards and him looking straight . A shadow fell on him . Half of his body covered in the light , while the other half in darkness , which felt creepy .


And ,


The analogy was not lost on her .


With fear , meerab's eyes looked all over him . For any hint of mercy . But there was none ! Body taut with anger , His gaze was focuseed sharply far way , yet he was watching nothing .. particular . It felt like he was not here with them


" Murtasim bete ..."


Her father's voice jolted her out of her trance , before he went running towards her husband . She should too .But she was scared .


To be honest, Terrified of the uncontrolled raze on his face , and the visible tremble in his body caused due to it .


" Bete , tum thik ho..."


Her father asked Murtasim , which she wanted to ask too . But she was tongue-tied . What questions , she would ask - she knows the answer already for .


That , he was not alright ! He was definitely not alright


Physically yes , but mentally he was not . His heart was hurting . It was evident from his tear stricken eyes .oh god he was crying ! He was crying ... She urged him to look at her . But , he didn't .


He didn't ..


Desperation clouded her whole being . And she ran to him . But , before she could reach - he stormed from there without giving her a glance .


Why her heart was hurting , when he was the one feeling the pain ?


She asked herself , but was unanswered . Her mind was telling her to stop and not go after him , when he was so much angry . But , her heart said otherwise .


And regardless of being a strong advocator of keeping her self respect intact - Meerab ran after him to the room . Guess what attachment ,makes you do !


" Murtasim ... Please meri baat suno ...plz "


She spoke in a calm manner to her husband , who was now sitting on the couch . An almost burnt cigarette in one of his hand , while the other covered the backrest of the couch in full extent .


He was leaning back on it .. The smoke covered the area around him . the aura , so terrifying - meerab wanted to run the other way , but stll she stood her ground .


" Aur kitni baar safai dogi meerab ...."


His voice husky yet dark , bathed the whole room with sinister feel .


Meerab , sensed it in her being . She was almost still , but jerked a little when he started advancing towards her , after detangling himself from the sitting position - like a tiger on the prawl .


" Kitni baar ? "


When he said this , he was much more closer to her from before - on the verge of cornering her to the nearby wall . As , strong as she demanded she was - meerab was not feeling it while seeing his - this side


Eyes blood shot , was watching her terrified face . While , his -was a mask - not giving anything away .


" Murtasim tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ..."


Now , he was more close than ever , crowding her , leaning on her trembling form against the wall . His colonge , along with the smell of smoke teased her nose , but it was the hint of danger that overpowered her and kept the fiery meerab at bay


" Kyun meri nazdikiyon se dar lag raha hai ? "


He smirked , but there was nothing remotely funny about it . Instead , it felt like a jab . Meerab didn't react much . She only gulped , which attracted his attention . At that time , he was a predator who was feeding off her fear . And , god he did ,so mercilessly !


" Waise , have you reserved this for me only ? Coz , you seemed to be very comfortable around him ...."


" Murtasim , ..."


She gritted her teeth while speaking , her eyes now tearing up


" Kyun sharam aa rahi hai sach bola toh , hmm? Don't be shy meerab , did he touch you here ..."


His hand , now erratic inched upwards her wrist .


" ya phir yahan .... ? "


His hands were now on her arms .. caressing her softly . His touch intense enough to be called bold .


" Kya bakwas kar rahe ho ...? "


Having had enough , meerab shouted . And in response , Murtasim gripped her arms hard making her flinch


" Batao na meerab , chhua hai usne tumhe, karib aaya hai wo tumhare ? Shayad isiliye , tum mujhe apne paas nahi aane deti ...."


Murtasim was now seriously jerking her close to him , his neck tendons , tight like a bow string . His otherwise calm face , was a sea of emotion . Anger , passion , hatred at once .


The accusations were heart wrenching . Those were piercing her feeble heart , making her bleed . But , he remained unconcerned , Merciless .


" Batao mujhe ...."


" Tumhare sawal itne ghatiya hai ki , main uska jawab dena bhi jaruri nahi samajhti . Mera dil janta hai , ki sacchai kya hai "


With her dignity intact , meerab spatted it on his face ....before jerking herself free and walking away . But , to her luck - she was stopped , only to be turned back .


" Thik hai toh phir kya problem hai . Abhi apne aapko mujhe sounp do ...."


His tone was cutting , yet urgent . But , the darkness still invaded his entire being , not letting the good ness in her Murtasim shine . It was eclipsed , like the moon .


Meerab 's rage was increasing , and it snapped when he said the next words , laced with obsession and a tinge of madness


" Isi bistar main apne aapko mere hawale kardo , taki koi aur tumhe dekhna toh kya , tumhare bare main tasavvur bhi na kar sake "


Her hand rose .. it was instinctive , reflexive and met his cheeks in a hard slap . The power so strong,His head was thrown to one side .


Meerab gasped , she could not believe she did it, her hand trembled . She was silent because , she knew, he was hurting . But he dared to disrepect her


Thats it . It was the limit


" Tumhari himmat kaise hui , mere saath aise baat karne ki ..."


Her emotions were overflowing , tears filled her doe eyes . As she said this , he turned his face towards her . But there was still no remorse in his eyes . Who was this man , she did n't recognise him ...


" Jante ho , maine kyun kuch Nahi kaha us waqt .. kyun ki mujhe tumse dar lag raha tha. Mere haath kamp rahe the , mera gala sukh raha tha .. "


She hiccuped , a pause came - then again she continued


" Tumhare aane se pehle maine use kaha bhi ki tum mere souhar ho aur main tumhare nikah main hoon . Aur mai tumse shayad ... Judne bhi lagi hoon . Tumhe apnane lagi hoon ..tumhe shayad chahne bhi lagi hoon ...."


Murtasim's otherwise dark eyes , became big in surprise - due to her confession . But it came at the wrong time - when both were hurting each other .


" Par , aaj jo tumne kaha hai , murtasim main yeh kabhi nahi bhulungi .. kyunki aakhir kar tumne bata hi diya - main tumhare liye ek cheez hoon . Jise tum pana chahte ho , hassil karna chahte ho ....par main cheez nahi hoon Murtasim Khan ..


Meerab poked her hand on his chest . His eyes intense , kept watching her .


" Aur jab tum mujhe koi cheez samajhna band karo na tab mere pass aana ... Shayad tab tumhe mai apna pyar dungi , aur apna zism bhi ...."


With head held high , she rushed from there , as his eyes trailed her every move untill she dissappeared from there .


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Thank you for reading .....


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Posted: 2 years ago
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Love it!!!

I love angsty Murtasim but he crossed the line. He really did. And meerab should also throw the Haya fiasco on his face.

continue soon


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Posted: 2 years ago
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OMG😱😱😱

Yar ye toh bahut strong likh diya tumne... absolutely amazing...agar show mei aisa aa jaye na toh maine pagal ho jana hai...itni intensity 😍

Murtasim in his anger said wrong things ..but most people do that...and Meerab's response was absolutely correct...Sahi kiya bilkul...

Waiting for the next part and it is not an OS..okay...please write the next part too...

Absolutely loved it 😍😍😍

Lots of love and keep writing❤️😍❤️🙌

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neha_S

Love it!!!

I love angsty Murtasim but he crossed the line. He really did. And meerab should also throw the Haya fiasco on his face.

continue soon


dhanyawad 🌹🌹🌹.
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Originally posted by: preciousn905k

OMG😱😱😱

Yar ye toh bahut strong likh diya tumne... absolutely amazing...agar show mei aisa aa jaye na toh maine pagal ho jana hai...itni intensity 😍

Murtasim in his anger said wrong things ..but most people do that...and Meerab's response was absolutely correct...Sahi kiya bilkul...

Waiting for the next part and it is not an OS..okay...please write the next part too...

Absolutely loved it 😍😍😍

Lots of love and keep writing❤️😍❤️🙌

it's an os 😭
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Madhu loved it 🤩🤩

The description of light and darkness covering him, so he is fully not dark...there's a scope for redemption...❤❤

Murtu was harsh but can understand where it is coming from... and Meerub finally gave it back...

Pls continue this, need to know what meerub is feeling after leaving the room.. then alos need to know how murtu will redeem himself after saying those hurtful stuff 🤧🤧

Love reading your stories 🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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OhMyDz

That was soòooo good😍

Soooo intense👏👏👏👏👏

I felt like I was the furniture in the room being blasted by all the emotions that were erupting in there...🤔😁..(my poor heart and body)

You captured the essence of what both were feeling and wanting to say too...

Loved how you always give Meerab the last word!🤗


(PS don't write till May - I have assignments and I'm fasting😁)

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It can be till I return.

I've got some ideas in my head

You'll have to turn them into something coherent...🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Isiliye tum mujhe chhune nahi deti, full Jalal vibe


Murtu baby not done😡



Meeru👏



And Madhu🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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LOVED IT ❤️❤️❤️

We need more confronting scenes like this!!!

Thank you for writing this ❤️

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