Tere bin OS - KIRDAAR - Page 2

Originally posted by: preciousn905k

OMG😱😱😱 ye toh bahut strong likh diya tumne... absolutely amazing...agar show mei aisa aa jaye na toh maine pagal ho jana hai...itni intensity 😍

Murtasim in his anger said wrong things ..but most people do that...and Meerab's response was absolutely correct...Sahi kiya bilkul...

Waiting for the next part and it is not an OS..okay...please write the next part too...

Absolutely loved it 😍😍😍

Lots of love and keep writing❤️😍❤️🙌

bold :- murtasim ko jutte khilana hein kya???

" kirdar banao" par 14 pushto ko dho rahey sab aur agar yeh sab bol diya tab murtasim ke saath saath murtasim stans ko bhi jute parenge 🥲 (including me too)

Tho i agree the intensity and dark aura here is like LITERALLY HELL FIRE 🔥 and I'm a sucker for these kinda dark obsessed hero 🥲🌚 upar se meerub bhi khuch kam ki takkar nahi di! 🔥

but tv par yeh kiya to juta chappal parega 🥲

Originally posted by: Sofna

OhMyDz

That was soòooo good😍

Soooo intense👏👏👏👏👏

I felt like I was the furniture in the room being blasted by all the emotions that were erupting in there...🤔😁..(my poor heart and body)

You captured the essence of what both were feeling and wanting to say too...

Loved how you always give Meerab the last word!🤗

(PS don't write till May - I have assignments and I'm fasting😁)

Astagfirullah yeh kya demand hein? 🥹🤧😫

There murtu is not getting anything......

And here you want us all to suffer and stay rukha sukha (dry) till may???

Nooooo madhu iski na sunna...humari steamy village and jealous murtu jaldi de dena 😫

I'm gonna leave my feedback on wattpad babe 💗😉

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Astagfirullah yeh kya demand hein? 🥹🤧😫

There murtu is not getting anything......

And here you want us all to suffer and stay rukha sukha (dry) till may???

Nooooo madhu iski na sunna...humari steamy village and jealous murtu jaldi de dena 😫

Well MB as you're learning from your new experiences.😛...only Meerab's way is the new way now.... haveli or Karachi 😎😆

(PS...I thought you've been 'dry' for decades...😲..did i assume wrong?)😲😁😁😁

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Astagfirullah yeh kya demand hein? 🥹🤧😫

There murtu is not getting anything......

And here you want us all to suffer and stay rukha sukha (dry) till may???

Nooooo madhu iski na sunna...humari steamy village and jealous murtu jaldi de dena 😫

Yes madhu, hume dedo 🥺🥺😭😭

I need a part 2 of this OS also ❤

Originally posted by: midniteangel

Madhu loved it 🤩🤩

The description of light and darkness covering him, so he is fully not dark...there's a scope for redemption...❤❤

Murtu was harsh but can understand where it is coming from... and Meerub finally gave it back...

Pls continue this, need to know what meerub is feeling after leaving the room.. then alos need to know how murtu will redeem himself after saying those hurtful stuff 🤧🤧

Love reading your stories 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Sofna

OhMyDz

That was soòooo good😍

Soooo intense👏👏👏👏👏

I felt like I was the furniture in the room being blasted by all the emotions that were erupting in there...🤔😁..(my poor heart and body)

You captured the essence of what both were feeling and wanting to say too...

Loved how you always give Meerab the last word!🤗

(PS don't write till May - I have assignments and I'm fasting😁)

Amazing 👏👏.....loved it madhu ❤....beautifully written......yes Murtasim is darker here...but i like it❤.....huge shout out for putting meerabs perspective 👏👍.....do update the next part soon....waiting eagerly...

wow amazing, emotionally intense! well. written!

Originally posted by: Tvluvrk

Amazing 👏👏.....loved it madhu ❤....beautifully written......yes Murtasim is darker here...but i like it❤.....huge shout out for putting meerabs perspective 👏👍.....do update the next part soon....waiting eagerly...