Surya 2 : Avval Than Anthu Penn(Closed) - Page 2

Episode 002

Deepa just stands there stunned in front of the woman who is going crazy. Before, the women fainted her last words were "Unakka anmai ellam......" not finishing her words she fainted. Puzzled Deepa looked confused and didn't know what to do. Coming from behind her mother; Sarani said to her "whatever has been told will happen". Mother takes daughter who looks really confused giving an unusual look at the same women all the time. Deepa while going home inside the car she told her mother about everything even the chase. Just then the phone rings and Deepa picks its up a surprising voice answered. "Hello my darling how are you doing, do you know who I am?" and thena tone of the voice changed "nanthean di POKKRI Unda Future husband". Deepa didn't know what to say just sat scared struggling what to say. "What did you do with Sanjay you want me keep me just leave him alone". Pokkri in reply said "Sanjay I killed him long time ago, no one shall take my girl if they do avangall sathan!". Pokkri cuts the phone leaving Deepa speechless. When they reached home mother and daughter spoke together and came up with a plan. After a while, the door opened and in came a girl in Neelambri style. "Deepa Deepa vadi" said Nethra with passion and anger.. Deepa came face to face with her and asked who she was. The reply "I am Di Nethra the one in only daughter of Ex Minister Pandi. Where is Sanjay leave him she is mine not yours and if you don't leave him you face the consequences!" and leaves with anger (Nethra background music). Two rowdies are watching outside and then phone someone.

Next day while going to work Deepa is stopped my Nethra. Who comes outside from car raging in a anger just giving her a ice cold glare………..Freeze

comments are welcome:

this is a serial not a story that why i am writing short in each episode😉

Great chapter! But it's too small and things are happening too quick. So slow things down and write a much longer chapter next time!😊

Originally posted by: ~*Thamizhan*~

Caryn, I'm few months younger than Pokiri! So still i'm the youngest!

Ok Thamizhan, got it. 😊

Right Pokkiri thambi, you are giving a good attempt. Story line is nice, but as Thamizhan Thambi says, don't move too fast. Build it up to certain level.

Good job done. Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Caryn

Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

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Originally posted by: Hosanna

Ennamma Caryn, One of my Form three girls is passionately in love with a Form 2 boy! Kaathalukku vaisu, kaalam ellam illai!