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pokkiri26

@pokkiri26

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Title of my serial have change for good since i got some message to change it. Which encourged me more.

In a couple of hours i have going t write down the first episdoe. 😊

Edited by pokkri26 - 17 years ago

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pokkiri26

@pokkiri26

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Episode 001

Rameshwaram

Far in site a girl was being chased by a herd of rowdies. Deepa inside to her self said "Deepa keep running its not you did it was them". Just to see how far she was from the rowdies stopped and turned around. She saw them right behind her, the chase began again. Nearby, where she was a bridge "this leaves to know choice" Deepa was going to jump into the water. Running as fast she could the rowdies from behind shouted "Neeladi Deepa". Edging the bridge Deepa jumped into the water leaving the rowdies dumbfounded. Looking left to right the rowdies couldn't find her no sign of her. One of them said "Thali vettavum adtha mourai avval sethal" and left. Deepa got from the water and saw them leave and started crying. "Where will I go and will I do" so many thoughts made her shiver in fear. Slowly walking she saw a kali temple and went inside there. Praying to god really hard asking "What did I do to deserve all this madness just because I loved him I need all this". To her amazement a women went to trance and turned in a Bathrakali and said "Ippane Unaku ell am areibakagam" (bells and drugs ring)……. Freeze

Comments are welcome:

Edited by pokkri26 - 18 years ago

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rojapoooo

@rojapoooo

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

mmm apram enna aachu??? Deepa voda lover yaaru??

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271043

Hibernated

Posted: 18 years ago

Great part, Pokiri!👏 Post the next part soon!

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kabee

@kabee

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

well done pokkri 👏 👏
deepa voda kathalanum rowdyya?

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Shanthy Rajan

@usha_pooja

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

super super pokkiri nice chapter. Liking the thrilling suspense.

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Hosanna

@Hosanna

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

Well Pokkiri, what happened next?

Since it is an actual story, are u the lover?

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Prema

@Caryn

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Posted: 18 years ago

😃 😃 Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

Good for you Pokiri. Nice start. Who is Deepa? AS in Deepa Venkat.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Caryn
😃 😃 Ho you are mad!

Pokiri is the youngest in IF. I thought he and Sri are of the same age.

Good for you Pokiri. Nice start. Who is Deepa? AS in Deepa Venkat.

Caryn, I'm few months younger than Pokiri! So still i'm the youngest!