Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 32

Leena.

Got to read chapter 50 and 51 today. Frankly i was sitting with tears trickling down my eyes. The passion you brought out in the despair of Kailash was simply superb. Good job!

Madhu

Oh no Jiggly - Boring? your story? absolutely NOT. Frankly, I cannot wait for the story to end.......Hey hey hey wait-- What I mean is, I cannot wait to read what this Stupid Ajay is upto and if Kailsah finally managed to swoop up Deeps 😊
At my end - I was busy with lot of stuff. But ddi not miss to read your story. Selfish me 😳 ha!!!!.

Keep it going.....

wow leena i only got to read ur thread yesterday nd man u actually made me to read all ur chapters in 3 hrs. it was well written and it was so romantic can't wait till for ur next chapter nd hopefully there will be more romantic clashes between kailash nd deepa. and also cant wait for ur other story wich u r yet to start. And i also a fan of prajin nd i also think cj did a mistake by seperatign them in penn. I was really heart broken nd i tht she shld ahve done the role of anjali in da new serial it woud have been great. so wen s ur next chapter is coming.

Originally posted by: Shalinikanthan

wow leena i only got to read ur thread yesterday nd man u actually made me to read all ur chapters in 3 hrs. it was well written and it was so romantic can't wait till for ur next chapter nd hopefully there will be more romantic clashes between kailash nd deepa. and also cant wait for ur other story wich u r yet to start. And i also a fan of prajin nd i also think cj did a mistake by seperatign them in penn. I was really heart broken nd i tht she shld ahve done the role of anjali in da new serial it woud have been great. so wen s ur next chapter is coming.

wow! a new member? that's great!😃 welcome to our family! i'm glad you liked my story & thanks a bunch for the compliments shalini.😳😳😳

well, well, well, CJ Baskar is like no.1 on my hate list cos he seperated my fav serial couple.😡😡 i'm a big prajin fan & i'm always happy to meet another one of my sisters!😉 lols!

thanks to the rest of you who commented too! Wingy, ur not selfish, i understand if you guys don't have time to comment.😊

here's my latest chapter.😊

CHAPTER 52

the night stretched on & the party got wilder. ajay had got crates of fine quality wine brought into the event & everyone was getting rather tipsy. ajay, kailash & deepa stood together in one corner while the rest of the partygoers gyrated to some fast beat song. "deepa, have a drink! let's celebrate!" ajay offered deepa a glass full of wine. deepa wrinkled her nose at the sharp acrylic smell of alcohol. "no thanks ajay. I don't drink." she refused the offer politely. "come on deepa! just have a little sip!" ajay forced some wine into her mouth. deepa spat it out & hissed at him angrily, "I told you NO! no mean NO!". ajay shrugged & continued drinking. kailash stood by & watched all these silently. he knew that deepa was not going to be happy with the marriage. ajay was not her type. and the fact that deepa still loved him but was going to marry ajay was the biggest hurdle. kailash was about to reach for deepa when a few people arrived at the party fashionably late.

those guests turned out to be deepa's parents & relatives. they were high society elites who looked down on normal people. kailash realised that once ajay introduced him to them. they gave kailash a once over & ignored him totally. both of deepa's parents were dressed in the finest designer wear. they discussed business with ajay since the moment they met him. deepa just stood by them, looking bored & sad. "no wonder deepa was lonely. her parents hardly have time to care for her. poor dear." kailash's heart went out to deepa. another guest had arrived with deepa's parents. she was deepa's distant cousin. dressed in a fashionable wispy yellow saree, the woman cut a good figure. she was haughty yet beautiful. the distant way she hugged deepa made kailash feel she didn't really like deepa much. however when ajay introduced her to kailash, her eyes sparked with interest. "kailash, this is karishma. karishma this is kailash." ajay cheerfully intoned. karishma didn't want to come to the party but looking at kailash it looked like it wasn't at all a entire waste of effort.

"hi! I'm karishma." she shook kailash's hand firmly & he introduced himself politely. "would you like a drink?" she held out a wine glass. mesmerised by her beautiful face, kailash took it & downed the contents of it quickly. the one glass became ten & kailash himself had become quite tipsy. karishma on the other hand held her liquor very well. she put kailash's arm around her waist & took a sip of the wine. she happened to look over at deepa & caught the look on her face before she could hid it. deepa was in pain. it was hurting her to see kailash act that way with karishma. "something interesting is happening here. I've to find out what." karishma told herself determinedly. "where… where are we going?" kailash asked her as she led him towards the private terrace. "so what's the deal with you & deepa?" she questioned kailash. "oh deepa. I love her. she loves me too. but I hurt her too much that now she hates me." kailash childishly exclaimed. "sshhhh.. don't get so excited. she refused you? how stupid of her. since young, deepa had always gotten the best things but never knew how to treasure them. she's not as beautiful as me but still she is lucky to have you love her." karishma softly calmed kailash down. "what.. what do you mean?" kailash slurred dizzily. "nothing. I just think you deserve much better than deepa. someone more sexier, more beautiful. like me." karishma neared kailash & planted her full lips on his. kailash was shocked but the effect of alcohol was taking it's toll on his sanity. he actually kissed karishma back.

after a while, he came to senses & pushed karishma away. "karishma, this is all wrong… I.. oh my god.." his words died in the air as he saw deepa standing there with ajay. "oh ho! looks like there's some romance happening here! kailash, you & karishma are a perfect match. you should go out with her sometimes. right deepa?" he asked deepa. kailash couldn't forget deepa's expression. she looked terribly sad but there were no tears in her eyes. the sparkle that always twinkled in her soft eyes had gone out. "yes. you guys make a perfect couple." she told them in a surprisingly steady voice. she took ajay's hand & led him out of the terrace. "ooohhh.. looks like someone is in trouble." karishma cooed slyly. kailash then realised that karishma was jealous of deepa & her main intention was to hurt her. and kailash had unknowingly helped her do that. shooting him another sly smile, karishma walked away into the house leaving behind a sore kailash. "maybe we're not meant to be." he thought sadly as he recalled all the incidents in which deepa had misunderstood him. tonight at the party he had gotten sidetracked & hurt deepa yet again. "I wouldn't be surprised if she never talks to me again." kailash hung his head & joined the party.

erghhh.. i realised how much i hate this chapter but i already wrote it out.🤢🤢🤢 so i'm posting it as it is. comments, suggestions & hate mail are welcome!😆😆😆

~ leena 😛

Nice chapter Leena. But i cannot believe this Karishma can be this evil minded nutter. 😡 I hope Deepa marries Kaliash as they are a pair made in heaven.

Me 1st again!

Oh my god i hate this type of gals wo does these cheap things. Well so great to read da eopisode so wen s ur next one can't wait. It makes so much hyped abt the next episode eagerly waiting. u r a amazing writer leena r u a professional in it or is it a hobby. if u write a book professionally i will defently will buy it nd will be a fan of it.

Hi Jiggly, I made some time -- just for you 😊
Wow, Oh paavam Deepa. I don't want her to be hurt. ANd Kailash, why is he doing wrong stuff at wrong times. Even the time is against. Comeon Kailash it is now or never, you have to win Deepa back. Else, I will be heart broken 😭 😭

The last three chapters were so sad. My heart feels sad for Khailash, he always gets into trouble. Deepa shouldn't have accept Ajays proposal in the first place and funny to see her cousin going after Khailash…ha ha 😆

Originally posted by: Shalinikanthan

Oh my god i hate this type of gals wo does these cheap things. Well so great to read da eopisode so wen s ur next one can't wait. It makes so much hyped abt the next episode eagerly waiting. u r a amazing writer leena r u a professional in it or is it a hobby. if u write a book professionally i will defently will buy it nd will be a fan of it.

no yaar. writing is just my hobby!😛 i seriously don't think i'm good enough to become a professional writer. but thanks for your flattering compliments shalini! ur very nice!😳😳😳

thanks to the rest of you guys too for all your support! esp Wingy who took time off to read my story. hope i don't disappoint you.😊

i might not come online tmr so here's another chapter for you all.😊

CHAPTER 53

kailash & deepa both stood at the different corners of the room. ajay was busy chatting with deepa's parents & karishma was flirting with one of the DJ's. deepa stood by the drink stand, quietly sipping a cup of punch. she yawned tiredly & stole a look at the clock. the hands were nearing midnight but the party looked like it go on into the wee hours of the morning. ""mum, dad, can we leave now?" deepa asked her parents sleepily. "no dear. we are in the middle of an important discussion. can we talk about this later?" they brushed her off nonchalantly. deepa sighed & decided to leave the party by herself. kailash watching her every move strode out of the party quickly. he planned to offer deepa a lift.

deepa left the party & her parents didn't even look at her when she bid them goodbye. ajay was also absorbed in the discussion that deepa wondered if they three had even heard her. "this is not a marriage. it's a business deal." deepa held back her tears as she searched for a cab. but there wasn't a single vehicle in sight on the deserted road. deepa decided to walk home but was shocked when a car pulled up beside her. kailash was in the driver's seat. he rolled down the window & poked his head out. "would you like a lift?" he asked her sweetly. "no thanks. I can get home myself." deepa insisted & continued walking away from his car. kailash tried to convince her to hitch a ride with him but deepa stubbornly refused. a frustrated kailash drove off & left deepa all alone on the lonely road.

after 15 minutes however, deepa grew tired. her high heels were hardly built for walking & her feet were killing her. she was dragging herself along the never ending road when one of her heel gave way. "ouch!" she screamed in pain as her ankle twisted. she landed on the hard road with a thump. deepa massaged her ankle, wincing in the pain that was shooting through her leg.

a car drove past deepa. it stopped a few metres away from her & kailash got out looking very concerned. "what happened??" he gently touched her shoulder. "my heel gave way & I think I sprained my ankle." deepa replied through gritted teeth. the pain was getting unbearable.

"okay, let me take you to a 24 hour out patient clinic I know of." kailash volunteered. deepa nodded her agreement & tried to get up but failed miserably. understanding her difficulty, kailash lifted her up into his arms gently & carried her to the car. for a moment deepa forgot all her anger & enjoyed the sensation of being in kailash's arms. the ride to the clinic was silent & painful. both deepa & kailash had a million thoughts racing through their heads but none of the two of them could bring it out onto their lips. finally deepa broke the silence, "why did you come back?" her voice was soft & emotional. "because I couldn't bear to leave you alone in the dark road. isn't it good i came back?" he asked her gently. deepa caught his eyes, looked away & nodded.

the clinic was hardly crowded as it was already past midnight. the doctor examined deepa's injured ankle & deemed it as a case of a bad sprain. he massaged it for her & gave her some ointment to rub on the affected area. "miss, you've got a really loving husband. he brought you over for treatment even in the dead of the night." the doctor smiled at deepa & kailash nicely. deepa was shocked & she quickly clarified that kailash was just a 'friend'. the doctor looked confused but didn't pursue the matter any further. kailash tried to hide his disappointed face at deepa's outburst. he drove her home sadly & she seemed just as depressed as he was. "are you sure you can go up by yourself?" kailash wanted to walk deepa right up to her door. "no thanks kailash. I am quite okay now. I'm pretty sure I can walk up by myself." she smiled at him softly. "okay.. if you insist." kailash looked doubtful. "anyway thanks for everything. I really appreaciate it. you've been very kind to me." deepa told him with a tinge of sadness in her voice.

she turned around & hobbled into the lift while kailash prepared to drive off. deepa reached her falt & took a long hot shower. her leg was much better & she rubbed some soothing ointment on it to ease the pain even more. her curtain flapped in the windy night indicating an open window. deepa limped over to close it & noticed kailash standing beside his car looking up at her window. he caught her looking at him & looked away, obviously embarrassed. deepa's heart fluttered at the thought of kailash's care & concern for her. then those lies came back to her in a painful memory & shattered her budding hopes. deepa sighed & shut the window while kailash continued to gaze at her shut window longingly.

comments & suggestions are welcome! love you all!😃

~ leena😉

nice chapter Leena. What the doctor said was just so sweet i cant wait for the next chapter now. I am just at the edge of my sit. 😃