thank you everyone for all your comments!😳😳
okay, my new fanfic will be on deepa & kailash as well. but i'll change their names. it'll be a love story cos i can't get enough of the meera & prajin romance. lols!😆😆😆
anyways, here's the latest chapter of my current fanfic.😉
CHAPTER 50
deepa was watching ajay's & kailash's arguments from the corner of her eye. they both looked annoyed & all of a sudden she saw ajay striding towards their table. he looked smug & confident. kailash on the other hand had a shocked expression on his face. deepa jumped back in surprise when ajay knelt in front of deepa. he took out a small brown box from his jeans pocket. he snapped it open it reveal a gorgeous solitaire diamond adorned with a graceful platinum band. "what are you doing ajay?" deepa asked him after getting over her momentary shock. "deepa, will you marry me?" ajay went in a very serious tone. deepa tried to look for hints of a trick but ajay was serious. dead serious. that whole hullabaloo had attracted the attention of the other patrons in the restaurant. they were all witnessing that spectacle with curiosity. one little boy started chanting "say yes! say yes!". soon the entire restaurant was urging deepa to say yes.
speechless with shock deepa just stared open mouthed at the ring. it was too much fro her to bear. kailash had come over & was openly staring at deepa, awaiting her reply with bated breath. "don't say yes deepa. please don't say yes." he prayed silently. deepa's face looked panic stricken. she was about to burst into tears. kailash saw her glance at him. he shook his head as to tell her to refuse the proposal. but deepa's eyes hardened & a determined look came into them, "yes I will marry you." deepa replied to the proposal, knocking the wind out of kailash. the entire restaurant burst into applause as ajay beamed proudly. "deepa was finally his. she is MINE!" he grinned at her. deepa smiled tightly & shot a look at kailash. she felt that he was finally getting a taste of his own medicine. kailash looked shattered. tears were streaming down his face as the realisation that he had lost deepa hit him like a ton of bricks. "why? why? WHY?" his heart screamed in agony. deepa was lost to him forever & it was mostlyhis fault. but what was kailash to do? he was compelled to hide the truth from deepa. he had never meant to hurt her. which man could hurt the woman he loved more than his life?
wiping his tears & hiding his sorrow, kailash got up & congratulated ajay & deepa. "congratulations ajay. you won." he told him sadly. "thanks man. now that deepa's & my marriage is almost fixed, let's all be friends. no hard feelings okay?" ajay joked, obviously on cloud nine after deepa's acceptance. "yes. let's all be friends. you're a lucky man ajay." kailash told him but looked at deepa. her soft eyes looked sad but she remained silent. kailash then moved on to her. "congratulations deepa." kailash's voice cracked with emotion. "thanks." deepa replied in an almost inaudible voice. her eyes sparkled with untold emotion & kailash felt like pulling him to her but alas she belonged to ajay now. after 15 torturous minutes, kailash took leave. he bid a sad farewell to the couple but not before ajay invited him to their pre-wedding party. kailash didn't know if ajay was purposely rubbing salt on his wounds or was he genuinely being nice. either way, kailash's pain didn't decrease. kailash agreed with a heavy heart & left the restaurant. deepa watched him leave & a tear crept out from the corner of her eyes. she quickly hid it before ajay could see it. deepa didn't want questions on why she was crying on looking at kailash leaving. "shall I call your parents?" ajay enquired later on in the evening. deepa nodded not even taking in a word he said. she thought about seeing kailash at the pre wedding party & her heart skipped a beat.
look out for the pre-wedding party.😃 there'll be some intense moments in it between deepa & kailash. comments & suggestions are welcome!
~ leena 😛