Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 34

Thank you Leena. It was a treat to read 3 chapters at once. wonderful chapters, I must say. Can't wait for the next.

Pat

Going interesting Leena.. you are really talented my dear... 👏 👏 👏

What hapend to leens still waitin for the next chapter. she s araising my blood pressure 😃. I never waited ths excited for anytin so far. I have checked this forum for 20 times in 3 hrs. I am so addicted to her story. keep it up gal.

Originally posted by: Shalinikanthan

What hapend to leens still waitin for the next chapter. she s araising my blood pressure 😃. I never waited ths excited for anytin so far. I have checked this forum for 20 times in 3 hrs. I am so addicted to her story. keep it up gal.

lols! i didn't know you were this addicted to my story shalini!😳😳 it's such a big compliment! i was just writing out my latest chapter.😃

thanks to the rest of you for your wonderful comments!👏👏

CHAPTER 55

deepa's & ajay's wedding was fixed for three days later. ajay had totally changed his mindset about kailash & deepa. he loved deepa dearly & had done some really silly things to get her. but deepa's heart only belonged to kailash. she was suffering silently & ajay watched it helplessly. deepa was very strong headed & didn't admit that she was missing kailash. even in the saree shop, deepa looked lifeless. her mother gave her doezens of sarees to try on & deepa didn't even blink at them. she was lost in her own world. ajay tried to cheer her up but she just smiled at him sadly & drifted back into her gulm stupor. her mother grew tired of her blank expressions & scolded her harshly. deepa walked away from her & went into the restroom.

there she shed tears silently at her sorry plight. a knock on the door revived her & she opened it. she found ajay standing there looking concerned. "are you okay deepa? wait.. have you been crying?" he asked her, noticing her puffy red eyes. deepa shrugged & joined her mother for the saree selection. ajay felt that something had to be done so he got his cell out & dialled kailash's number.

picking out sarees had to be the most boring task ever & deepa wondered how some women could go to 20 different saree shops just to buy one saree. her throat felt dry so she decided to go out for some fresh air & a cool drink. "ajay? would you like to get a drink with me?" deepa asked him before she left. ajay refused but smiled mysteriously. shooting him a curious look, deepa went down to the cafeteria to get a drink for herself. the wonderful aroma of piping hot dosas drifted to her nostrils & her stomach rumbled. so deepa ordered a dosa & a cup of orange juice. her order arrived shortly after & deepa tucked in hungrily, unaware of a pair of adoring eyes observing her every move.

deepa finished her meal & was about to leave when the waiter plopped another dosa on the table. "what's this? I didn't order this." deepa told the waiter kindly. "no ma'am. one man ordered this dosa & told me to take it to you." he replied back & returned to work. "a man? who can that be?" deepa wondered aloud. "it's me." a very familiar voice said & kailash took a seat in front of her. "kailash you? what are you doing here? and why did you order this dosa for me?" she questioned him angrily. "well, I was just passing by. you looked hungry & the way you ate that dosa seemed to me that you were really hungry. os I took the liberty of ordering you another dosa." kailash replied smiling at her. "I don't need your charity." deepa snapped & got up to leave.

"why don't you just listen to me??" kailash grabbed deepa roughly. "ouch, let me go! you're hurting me." deepa yelped in pain. kailash released his iron grip on her & apologised profusely. by then a crowd had gathered to witness that little skirmish. "deepa.. please listen to me! I love you!" kailash pleaded with deepa. deepa softened & was about to reply when swetha showed up. "kailash, is everything alright?" she asked him softly. deepa's eyes became hard once again "what is SHE doing here?" she pointedly glared at swetha. "I was going to bring swetha for her weekly checkup." he answered sheepishly realising his folly. "then you bring her for that checkup." deepa told him sharply & left.

as deepa was storming up the stairs, she found ajay standing there with a shocked expression. deepa then realised how kailash had ended up in the saree shop. ajay had called him there. "did you call kailash here?" deepa demanded. ajay nodded & a fuming deepa brushed past him angrily. "I'm sorry man. I tried." ajay told kailash. "I know ajay. I know." kailash replied sadly. "but why is deepa so angry & unreasonable?" swetha chimed in. "it's because she loves kailash too much. when someone loves a person too much & the person hurts them, they'll find it much more difficult to forgive them. deepa's love for kailash is what makes her so unreasonable." ajay explained to swetha. kailash stared at him open mouthed, was this the same man who tried every way to separate deepa from him? "I agree with you ajay. deepa's just too hurt now. I hope her heart heals soon so that I can explain how much I love her." kailash's eyes started tearing. "don't worry man. she soon will understand." ajay comforted a depressed kailash.

hope this chapter was good! comments & suggestions are welcome!😳😳😳

~ leena

thx buddy for the lovely chapter. My nails are bitting so much!!!!

wow yeaaaaai. t last got the latest chapter nd wow as usha said nail biting hopefully deepa nd kailsh shld patch up soon. I also kind a lik ajay nw as he s tryin hard to make kailash nd deepa together.

Same here. Nail biting episode. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Pat

thank you all for your wonderful comments! here's my latest chapter.😃

CHAPTER 56

kailash tried his very best to clear the misgivings that deepa had about him but it was to no avail. to make matters worse, deepa's parents had come to know of the entire matter & were banning deepa from leaving the house. deepa gladly obliged as she didn't want to face anyone at all. but kailash was heartbroken. it seemed that deepa really wasn't meant to be his. the last time he saw deepa before the wedding was when she came out to check on the progress of the wedding decorations. kailash waved at her but she looked away. kailash saw the sadness in her eyes, the same sadness he saw in them when he found her crying at the back of the wedding hall. "haiz.. why must we both be made to go through all these?" kailash sighed sadly coming back to the present moment.

during the time he had been reminiscing about the past, dusk had set & everything had turned dark. "just like my life!" kailash thought bitterly. on one hand, he was happy that the wedding had been called off, on the other he felt more pain as he realised how horrid deepa must have been feeling that very moment. the guy whom she loved hurt her & the guy she was about to marry had also hurt her. kailash's cell phone rang & he answered it. "hey kailash. it's me ajay. my friend has opened up a new photo studio in Australia. he asked me to recommend a good photographer to him & I recommended you. believe me, it'll be a great boost for your career!" ajay told him. since he didn't mention anything about the wedding, kailash presumed that ajay didn't know kailash knew the truth. "I'll go ajay. there's really nothing left for me here." kailash replied sadly. ajay was happy that kailash was taking up the offer but he thought of deepa. what would she do without kailash? being apart from each other for an entire year would kill them both. ajay tried to contact deepa but her cell was off.

ajay received information that kailash was required at Australia at the earliest possible time. ajay's friend wanted kailash to be in Australia the very next day. ajay confirmed it with kailash & he agreed to the condition. ajay was shocked that kailash was agreeing to leave deepa behind so easily. feeling horrid, ajay called up swetha & related all events to her. he wanted her to explain everything to deepa as soon as possible. but swetha was having a check up done yet again because her baby was very weak.

swetha promised that she'd talk to deepa the next morning itself. meanwhile, kailash packed his bags silently. he had given up hope on winning deepa back. she hated him. period. which is why he was running away from India. at least some time somewhere else would take his mind off her. he didn't sleep the entire night & caught a cab early morning to the airport.

deepa didn't sleep the entire nigh too. she was lost in her thoughts. for one moment, deepa though of escaping overseas. the memories of kailash were too much to bear already. she was watching a early morning show on tv when a knock sounded on her door. deepa opened it to reveal a tired looking swetha. deepa almost shut the door in her face but felt sorry for her. she let her in with a sigh & made her sit on the sofa. "now what do you want?" deepa asked her. she was sick of all these confrontations.

"I want to explain deepa. I want to clear kailash's name. the baby I'm carrying is not kailash's. kailash was my boyfriend. but I found a new love interest in the US. a great guy named Jerry. our relationship took on a new turn when I got pregnant but Jerry left me suddenly. he told me he'll be back after making some money. I was frustrated & almost took my life when kailash stopped me. he volunteered to give the baby his surname. just to stop me from taking my life." she spoke everything out in one breath. deepa looked amazed but unimpressed. "I know you don't believe me deepa. that's why I brought you a picture of me & jerry." swetha held out a pic of her & a white guy hugging. "he is the father of my baby. kailash is a great guy but you never gave him a chance to explain." swetha told her.

deepa was terribly ashamed & wanted to meet kailash immediately. she hadn't even given him a chance to explain. "I'm afraid it's too late. he's going to Australia for a year. his flight will leave shortly." swetha said. deepa didn't bother listening to her & rushed to the airport in a cab. she had to find kailash before he left. she had to ask for his forgivness for being so stubborn & harsh.

alas, deepa was too late. as she reached the airport, the only flight for Australia had already departed. deepa broke down totally & cursed destiny for separating her love from her. she felt a soothing hand on her back. ajay stood by her & smiled down at her. "you finallu understand?" he asked her. deepa burst into tears again. ajay took her hand & said "let's go home". deepa took one last look at the airport & left with ajay.

meanwhile kailash sat in the crowded plane silently. he didn't bother to make friends with the many chattering Indians around him. instead he sat facing the window, watching the landscape fall away as the plane departed for Australia. they soon left India behind. the land where kailash's best memories had taken the form of deepa. his sweet deepa whom he could never forget. kailash hugged a picture of deepa to his heart & shed his last tears for her as the plane flew towards Australia. deepa wasn't meant to be his & kailash finally accepted the fact.

this is my 2nd last chapter. i hope it was good & it's tying up good. comments & suggestions are welcome!

~leena😃

wow great. so next one will be the climax of the chapter. Its sad dat kailash left. feel sorry for both of dem. i cant wait 4 da next chapter. nd wen r u starting ur next fanfic. 😃

well nd leens wo s dat divyanka nd sachin in ur signature😉

Leena

romba super. Kailashs emotions really nice!

Madhu