Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 12

Good work Leena. I really thought Ajay was involved in an accident. I liked the chapter end very well, I am very glad for Kailash now 😳

Good job Leenaaa
I like it 😉

great going...... so sweet and romantic 😳

CHAPTER 21

"what?" both ajay & kailash chorused together. they just stared at deepa, mouth hanging open in shock. "I said I liked kailash's surprise better. I am sorry ajay but this grandness doesn't appeal to me. and what's more I don't like the way you called me to this place. I really do appreciate the way you have made this place up but there are more important things than grandeur." she implied simply. ajay was hurt & shocked, he had gone through so much of trouble to arrange this birthday party for deepa. and she? she seemed not happy at all. "at least she could have pretended to like it." ajay wondered bitterly. kailash on the other hand looked smug & happy. deepa had liked his surprise better.

deepa apologised to ajay again but didn't stay for the party. she felt bad that she was rejecting ajay but his style of surprising her irked her a lot. she had been almost fainting from worry. luckily kailash had been there to ease her worries. kailash on the other hand had followed her immediately without complaining & his way of surprising deepa had been much more milder. "shall we go back to the penthouse? I am hungry." deepa asked kailash sweetly. kailash nodded hi agreement & drove back to the penthouse. the food had turned cold but still they both enjoyed it very much. kailash felt immediately warm once he saw deepa's megawatt smile. "I have deepa with me. I don't care if my pasta is stone cold." he thought happily. after dinner, they both sat by the balcony watching the sparkling stars in the clear sky.

it got a little chilly outside so deepa & kailash decided to go in & watch some tv. they switched the tv on sun music was on. the romantic song from 'Thiruvillaiyadal Aarambam' was on. dhanush was lip synching to harish ragvendra's melodious rendition of 'Vizhigallil Vizhigallil Villunthu Vittai'. deepa seemed to be enjoying the song as she was nodding in rhythm to the tune. kailash just looked at her, imagining him & her in dhanush's & shreya's places. he let out a sigh unknowingly. "what's wrong kailash?" deepa asked him curiously. kailash realised that deepa had heard him sigh. before he could reply, the whole flat was plunged into darkness.

i do hope this chapter was good. thanks a lot for all ur previous comments guys.😃 new comments & suggestions are welcome! love you all!

~ leena 😃

oh my god, supero super.Cant wait for the next chapter.
Awersome job leena
Madhu

Agree with you Madhu, yenna uro superana episode. I too cannot wait for the next chapter, wonder what's going to happen next....................
Pat

ohhh! very nice chapter! excellent! can't wait for the next chapter.

wicket wicket wicket chapter leena.

I cant wait until the next chapter.

Greatz leena ....simply greatz.....Can't wait for the next chapterz..... 😊

Originally posted by: brainykid

Leena ungada chapter missing... I only read the first paragraph 😭 😭 😭

ya BK i know yaar. that upgrade really spoilt everything. it slowed down the forum & made me lose my fanfic chapter.😡😡 arrghh.. so annoying!!!!!🤬

luckily, i saved a copy of it in my microsoft word. hopefully, now my chapter won't disappear.🤔

CHAPTER 22

"what happened kailash? how come everything has become so dark?" deepa asked him, panic filling her voice. her grip no him became so tight that kailash couldn't even feel his arm anymore. "don't worry deepa. I think it's just a blackout. I'll go check." he got up, leaving deepa all alone in the dark. deepa had let go of kailash's hand reluctantly, she had always been afraid of the dark & this time wasn't any different. it had been ten minutes since kailash left & he still hadn't returned. "kailash? kailash? are you still there? where are you??" she wobbled unsteadily as she tried to grope her way to the kitchen. "ouch!" she yelped in pain as she banged into the cupboard. she could hear a muffled voice from the kitchen. she went to the kitchen where she found kailash with a torchlight in his mouth. he was pulling at some wires irritably.

"be careful kailash. don't get a shock!" deepa shouted at him worriedly. he just winked at her & continued with his task. after 15 more minutes of struggling, kailash gave up. he handed the torch to deepa & wiped the sweat off his face. the grease from his fingers smeared all over his cheeks. deepa saw it & burst into peals of laughter. "what?" kailash questioned curiously. deepa took out her silk handkerchief & wiped the grease off kailash's cheeks. kailash just smiled at her & her gentle manner of cleaning him up. "here, keep this for now." deepa gave the handkerchief to kailash. he took it, folded it & placed it gently in his pocket. "let's get a drink." kailash told deepa & turned on the tap. to their surprise, the tap top came off & water started spurting out. "oh my god! kailash do something!!!" deepa yelled at him, sputtering & utterly soaked to the skin.

kailash tried to stop the water by covering it with a rag but it was no use. the water pressure was too strong. the water soaked both deepa & kailash to the skin, they both tried their best to stop the water using various things. a cup, a dish, a bowl & even kailash's shirt. deepa suddenly slipped on the water & fell down. kailash despite himself burst out laughing. deepa stared at him in mock-anger & also started laughing as hard as kailash. "help me up you fool!" she shouted at kailash through her laughter. kailash reached down & helped deepa up. as he was about to help her up, kailash himself slipped on the water & fell down with a thump beside deepa. they both burst out laughing & played with the water for a while. they fell over each other & kailash found himself on top of deepa. deepa suddenly realised how close kailash was to her & she could feel his warm breath on hers. her eyes met kailash's & she looked away blushing sweetly.

comments & suggestions are welcome. i'll update the next chapter tmr if this chapter doesn't disappear again.😊