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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

have no clue who these characters r but just read coz u wrote it not sure will follow the updates or not but will try to read them 😊
thanks for pm

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awwwsssmmm Prologue
Loved it
Amazing...
Interesting precap
Cont Sooon
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Aliya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Waw i love your banner and prolouge to
Shaleen always look hot mmuaahh
Please PM me ur stories.

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

Unres on page 3

Edited by Black_Angel - 10 years ago

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savali

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update
though i didnt get chance to watch gujariya.
Actually arjun ke bad jyadatar tv serial dekhti nahi hu,bcoz i hate sas bahu dramas n all aur ye show family ke sath nahi dekh sakti,bhaiya ke sath to bilkul nahi.
But i read it bcoz i love reading.
Emotions of veer beautifully potrayed.

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Bugheadlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

So nicely written//👏👏👏👏 you are truly an awesome writer..keep going😉😉
waiting for the next one 😃😃😃

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

Well writtend

Body Lang of

Story was so

Well maintained 👏

Can't wait for the Start

Ps : Pm box full ...

No pm's will read when

Updated will ask for pm after

Clearing it

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi shree...

how r u??

thanks for the new story...

as of now i will res...

will comment after reading the story...sry...

still i need to read ur previous story...😭

soon i will read all...

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey... that was interesting 😊

waiting for more 😊

Added u to my buddy list. Please send me a PM whenever u post an update 😊

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Areesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

kal raat joh comment likha wo delet ho gaya so abhi choto wala comment, sorry 4 that

awesome start

shocking precap

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