VeeBhav SS : Lethal Captivation...(Ch 5 & 6 -17) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Frankly speaking my mishtidoi cause I think there must be no secret between friends I watch this serial but to read a story it's not possible for me I am really sorry dear a hearty sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
hey shree...am having no words for the prologue...
vaibhavi thoughts about veer was so nice ...
waiting the story to progress in ur style...
waiting waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

have no clue who these characters r but just read coz u wrote it not sure will follow the updates or not but will try to read them 😊
thanks for pm


Glad u read just cuz I wrote it :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Prologue
Loved it
Amazing...
Interesting precap
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM


I am so happy tht u luvd it soo much!

Originally posted by: Darlingladdu

Waw i love your banner and prolouge to
Shaleen always look hot mmuaahh
Please PM me ur stories.


Thanks for loving this so much!

Originally posted by: savali

Nice update
though i didnt get chance to watch gujariya.
Actually arjun ke bad jyadatar tv serial dekhti nahi hu,bcoz i hate sas bahu dramas n all aur ye show family ke sath nahi dekh sakti,bhaiya ke sath to bilkul nahi.
But i read it bcoz i love reading.
Emotions of veer beautifully potrayed.


True after Arjun neither did I watch anything!

I am so happy that you loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Vauryalover...

So nicely written//šŸ‘ you are truly an awesome writer..keep goingšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
waiting for the next one 😃😃😃


Am so glad u luvd this 😳
Well I hope you really will love what's coming up :)

Originally posted by: Black_Angel

Well writtend


Body Lang of

Story was so

Well maintained šŸ‘

Can't wait for the Start

Ps : Pm box full ...

No pm's will read when

Updated will ask for pm after

Clearing it


Am so happy you loved this part so much! :D :D :D :D

Originally posted by: anu91

hi shree...

how r u??
thanks for the new story...
as of now i will res...
will comment after reading the story...sry...
still i need to read ur previous story...😭
soon i will read all...


Hi Anu dear!
I just got some viral stuff!
Pls yaar don't say sorry! :O


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bgargate

Hey... that was interesting 😊

waiting for more 😊
Added u to my buddy list. Please send me a PM whenever u post an update 😊


Hey... glad u liked it! :D

Sure!

Originally posted by: Areesha566

kal raat joh comment likha wo delet ho gaya so abhi choto wala comment, sorry 4 that

awesome start

shocking precap


No problem re!

Tujhe achcha laga yehi bohot hai :)

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Frankly speaking my mishtidoi cause I think there must be no secret between friends I watch this serial but to read a story it's not possible for me I am really sorry dear a hearty sorry


Ok dear... šŸ˜”

But pls sorry mat bol :)

Originally posted by: anu91

hey shree...am having no words for the prologue...

vaibhavi thoughts about veer was so nice ...
waiting the story to progress in ur style...
waiting waiting...


Oh... *dancing*

I am so happy that you loved it sooo much dear!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome banner..loved it..
Nice prologue..will wait for the story to unfold..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey
woww veebhav story ...I just can't wait to read this story!!
Amazing prologue
Banner is beautiful...!!!!
Waiting for the update...!!!!
plzz continue sooon n if possible plzzz PM 😃


Edited by tani.m - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ketakee

Very nice šŸ‘šŸ¼


I am so glad you loved this :)

Originally posted by: Swara85

Awesome banner..loved it..
Nice prologue..will wait for the story to unfold..


Glad 😃 Stay tuned dear!

Originally posted by: tani.m

hey
woww veebhav story ...I just can't wait to read this story!!
Amazing prologue
Banner is beautiful...!!!!
Waiting for the update...!!!!
plzz continue sooon n if possible plzzz PM 😃



Hey dear... thank you so much :)

Sure! Hope you will like the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by NATURESHIVANI


Frankly speaking my mishtidoi cause I think there must be no secret between friends I watch this serial but to read a story it's not possible for me I am really sorry dear a hearty sorry

Ok dear... šŸ˜”

But pls sorry mat bol :)

Phirse bol rahi hoon.. sorry mat bol!

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