NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue

What the hell maa...??" Screamed a girl of mid twenties

Nisha... Bapre tu pagal hai kya aise kyun chilla rahi ?" Said lakshmi closing her ears

Pagal main hun ki aap log... Pata hai isme kitna risk hai..." said nisha

Koi risk nhi hai kisi Ko pata thodi chal raha hai " said Ramesh

Papa yaar Kam se Kam aap toh logic use karo..." Said nisha being frustrated

Nisha kisi kuch pata nhi chalega na... Na hum kuch bolenge na tu kuch bolna " said lakshmi

Maa please... Mujhe darr lagta hai " said nisha

Kuch nhi hoga na..." Said lakshmi

Dekh beta agar cancel karwayenge toh paise bhi dub jayenge or tere liye tickets bhi nhi milenge " said Ramesh try to make nisha understand the situation

Haan nisha tu toh janti hai train me confirm tickets milna kitna mushkil hai " said lakshmi

Haan maa agar pakde gaye toh...??" Asked nisha

Kaise pakde jaoge ?" Asked Ramesh

Kuch nhi hoga nisha...Trust us or waha teri bhabhi ki teri zaroorat hai...tu humare liye nhi par apni bhabhi ke liye maan jaa " said lakshmi

Maa..." Nisha said in frustration then continued " fine sirf bhabhi ke liye I'm ready"

Ye hui na baat " said Ramesh and hugged his daughter

Nisha, lakshmi and Ramesh gangwal was at railway station in the night of the city Ahmedabad, where nisha had come to study. She was studying in IIM of Ahmedabad and she graduated from there too, her parents come Ahmedabad for her graduation ceremony now they were heading back to Jaipur. The plan was like Nisha's parents and her bahiya - bhabhi will come to Ahmedabad for her graduation ceremony and nisha will go back to Jaipur with Ramesh and lakshmi and Umesh and Aman will go back to Rameswaram where Umesh was working. But this plan was totally flopped as UmAn didn't come to Nisha's graduation ceremony because Aman is pregnant and she can't travel for this long distance. But this not end here, Aman wants nisha to be with her and lakshmi also want that someone should live with Aman as it was Aman's 7th month.
Nisha was ready on one leg to go to aman. But the way her family wants her to go to aman was not at liked by her but she couldn't do anything but accepting her family demand.

Ramesh and Lakshmi's train to Jaipur was at night and on next day at 10 o'clock Nisha's train was supposed to leave Ahmedabad platform.

Okay bye maa...Bye papa..." Said nisha cryingly as Ramesh and lakshmi sat on their seats in train

Arey beta hum kal milenge na teri train Jaipur hoke jayegi..." Said Ramesh

Kitne time Baad main ghar aati..." Said nisha looking down

Vo bhi toh tera hi ghar hai na beta...Dekhna jab hum tujhe wahan se leke aayenge na tabhi tu aise hi royegi..." said lakshmi caressing her daughter head

Maa aap log kal aana Jaipur station khane ke sath Haan " said nisha to lighten the mood

Or nhi toh kya dekhna na teri maa tum dono ke liye ek bag bhar kar khane ka saman le aayegi " said Ramesh

Toh kya... Inhe do din ka Safar karna hai toh bich me thodi kuch milega " said lakshmi

Okay bye maa...Bye papa... Time ho raha hai train ke chut ne ka " said nisha and kissed her parents cheeks and climb down the train

In few seconds train left nisha alone to Ahmedabad to spend her last night in this city. Nisha come back to her hostel room and looked the void around it as her parents had taken all belongings only two suitcases and on laptop was left in nisha's room. This things will go with nisha to Rameswaram.

After changing into night cloths she packed her bag last time and kept only one pairs kurti and leggings with one stoll so she could easily ready in morning. After praying for everyone she went to sleep but that was not possible for her as she was scared for next day, and she have to travel with someone who is stranger but not a stranger as the guy with whom she was going to share her journey is brother of Aman who is giving company to nisha in her whole journey. Nisha had never saw Aman's brother as he didn't come to UmAn marriage because he was in London and on that time his exams were going on. Nisha was going to see him for the first time. And she being scared to trust anyone due to an incident which just happened with her just few times ago.

To be continued...

Return gift... Mere birthday ka return gift jo exactly one month baad aa raha hai 😆😆
Poorni or Neeru ke specialy demand me hai toh batana kaisa hai 😉
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Ariya_2425 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome prologue
Loved it
Thnx for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome prologue anmol 👏
Loved it


Maine comment kar diya finally
Ab bas baaki 2 ko padh ke pura comment karta hu ok 😉
Posted: 8 years ago
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Did i read rameshwaram?? đŸ€Ș

Chennai express la? đŸ€Ł đŸ€Ł

Excited to read more...
Aman bhai Kabir hi hoga obvio 😆
NIBIR WILL MEET FIRST TIME
I m excited to know ye Kabir ko tu konsa look and nature dene wali h😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome prologue
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome prologue anmol 👏
Loved it


Maine comment kar diya finally
Ab bas baaki 2 ko padh ke pura comment karta hu ok 😉


Mere story me comment kab hoga? đŸ€”
Btw u r active on beyhadh forum kya? Ye dp me b arya laga liya 😆
Aneri AT me kyu ni ate😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res res res ... đŸ„ł
Will coment soon đŸ€Ș
Unresss
Ohh toh ye tha tumhara surprise 😃 and i was thinking it to be ihu3 😆 mai pata h thode din pehle is story k bare me soach hi rahi thi 😆and u know jab tumne bola tha about season to i thought it to be continuation of previous story ... But ye to double surprise mila mujhe😃
I loved this prologue aur train me kaun milega ye to pata hi h 😉 the amazing journey is going to start again😛 will be waiting for next part ... Update soon 😊
And thankyouđŸ€—
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow dear
very nice concept
Plz start soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swadarsh

Awesome prologue

Loved it
Thnx for PM


Thanks 😊

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