NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5* - Page 36

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Anmol ye kya padha maine 😕😭

Last chap ????? 😭😭 kyu ????
We want more 😛😃😆

It was so nive how kabir told nisha what she was doing wrong to the people who love her ...

And sunset scene was beautiful ... 😳


Arey poorni ab story life long thodi chalta rahega 😆
SS tha end aayega hi 😆😛
Kabir is smart guy 😎
Thanks 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved it
awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon



Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update

Loved it
Thanks for the PM dear.


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Nice update dear...continue soon.



Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
I love the way kabir made nisha understand everything😛
But why are u ending it so soon😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rishita91

Awesome update

I love the way kabir made nisha understand everything😛
But why are u ending it so soon😭


Thanks rishita 😃
It's a ss it have to end soon na 😉
Will update epilogue soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago



Epilogue


Nisha...??" Kabir called her as Nisha was running here and there.

What Kabir??? let me work " Nisha again engrossed in her work

Nisha ye brooch laga dena..." Kabir said walk behind her

Kabir Abhi time nhi mere pass... " Nisha replied as she went to give a check on food arrangements.



It's being 2 weeks from nibir's train journey. Both landed safely to Rameshwaram. Nisha didn't answer to Kabir questions, but she herself didn't want to live without him. In this 2 week they had shared lots of moment with each other without coming in notice of anyone. One moment also come which declare them as one.

When nibir told everyone about the incidents happened with them, Aman went really angry with Kabir for not taking care of Nisha, although Nisha was her sister in law but she loves her more than her real siblings, although other understand Kabir and tried to defend him even Nisha had requested to aman to not be mad on kabir but what is done is done. Kabir was really getting hard time to convince aman. But fine day which was disaster as well corrected everything in his life.


After reaching UmAn house Nisha take over the kitchen, never let Vasu or Aman to work in kitchen but after hearing lots of scolding from vasu, nisha let vasu to help her but only sometimes. Nisha share great bonding with Vasu and she really likes her alot. Living under one roof nibir also started open up with each other. As Nisha take care of kitchen one day Aman demanded for Gujarati dishes Khandvi and Handvo. As Nisha lived in Gujarat she knows very well about this dishes. So for preparation of dishes she went to market which was walking distance from the home, so she didn't carry her phone. Many things she grabbed from the market but some things were not available. To get them she went to other market which was far away from their home.

Nisha was out for more than one hours when the climate started changing. Living near ocean was not an easy task. As climate change in rapidly. In no time there was heavy rain fall, which drown city in water and sea level is also rised.

It's being more than two hours, sun was also setting down. The three members of the house was hell worried for both the brother sister. As Umesh has went to office and Nisha was doing shopping.

Umesh was back but Nisha was not as she didn't find a taxi which can drop her home.

Umesh mujhe bhout tension ho raha hai tum kuch Karo na... " Aman being hell worried for Nisha

Di aman di please shant ho jao... Jiju waise hi bhout bhig Gaye hai... Main jata Hun or use le ke aata hun..." Kabir said calming his sister instead of calming down Aman become more furious

Tujhe ek Baar saupa tha ki Nisha Ko hifazt se le aana par tab toh kuch kar nhi paya ab kya karega... Tu rehne de... Umesh tum jao..." Aman said to Umesh

Nhi jiju aap di ke pass raho... Main hi jaunga use lene " Kabir replied taking bike keys went out not before saying "di iss baar hifazt se hi launga"

Kabir went to the nearest market where Nisha have gone first. Not finding her there he decide to check on other market too. But due to heavy rain many areas were blocked. It was getting more difficult for him to find her, but he never leaves hope and continued finding her, almost roaming available area for 2 hours he spotted Nisha who was trying to walking in that heavy rain fall.

Nisha... " Kabir shouted angrily as he was so much worried for her and that turned out to be his anger. He reached to her. As soon as nisha saw him, she jumped on him and started crying. His anger flies away seeing her crying in his arm.

Kya hua Nisha tu theek toh hai na? " He asked her

Kabir main bhout darr gayi thi... Mujhe laga main ghar nhi pahuch paungi..." Nisha sobbed hard

Shh main aa gaya na tujhe lene... Ab chal..." Kabir said and drive back to home.

Aman was so happy that Kabir brought Nisha back home safely and she forgive him. Vasu and UmAn was mood to scold Nisha but Kabir save her from them. Later in night, both nibir was drenched badly, Nisha was resting in her room but due to cold she was not feeling good, the warm woolen comforter was not warming her. Kabir was also restless, although Vasu had made sure that her son would get some rest but still Kabir was feeling cold. UmAn was in their own room, while Nisha got her own separate room and Kabir shared room with vasu.

Kabir got up without disturbing vasu, he went to kitchen for water. When he was returning, he hear groan in pain near nisha's room. He stopped there and went closer to her room to hear carefully, he was right she was groaning in pain. He knocked her room's door.

Kon ??" Nisha asked in pain

Nisha main kabir..." Kabir replied

Ohh khula hai darwaza " Nisha replied

Kabir opened door found her sitting on bed and pressing her legs as it was paining.

Are you alright ? Dawai li ??" He asked moving towards her and sat on bed

Haan phir bhi pain ho Raha hai..." That time Kabir realise Nisha was too shivering like him.

Tum bhi kaap rahi ? "

Haan bilkul tumhari tarah " Nisha chuckled lightly they both remains silent for a while Nisha broke the silence by saying thank you to him

Why thanks Nisha?"

For Saving me from everyone's scolding "

It's alright but don't repeat it again "

Okay... Kabirrr if I say something will you judge me ?"

What's that Nisha say without hesitation..."

Kabir I'm feeling so cold..." Nisha said slowly lying back on bed, pulled comforter but open it from one side like inviting him to come inside.
Kabir looked at her shocked, then said nothing went towards door. Nisha thought he rejected her. But the main purpose for he went to door is to lock it. Then he immediately jumped on bed and move closer to her.

They just hug each other, rubbing eachother hands and feet, to keep eachother warm.

I love you kabir... I don't know if it is too fast or not but I really love your company... Feel safe around you."

I love you too Nisha... And I'm sorry main pehle nhi bola..." Kabir replied and kissed her forehead.

That was the night which bring them, they secretly become bf gf. Nisha had trust Kabir alot, even confessing their feelings and being that much closer to Nisha he didn't did anything to her instead he slept holding her tight.



As it being 7th month of Aman pregnancy, it was time for her godhbharai function. Nisha took care of everything with the help of Umesh and kabir, they arranged everything. And today was the function day and Nisha was checking on the things while Kabir behind her to stole some moments with her.

Meri girlfriend hai tu...itna kaam toh kar Dena Nisha " Kabir said

Yaar... Jaa marr.. dikha Kahan hai tera brooch ?" Nisha was hell irritated with his behaviour and pinned up brooch on his kurta. Then something strike in her mind

Wait a minute tu Kyun itna ready ho Raha hai??" Nisha asked

Arey pagal bhul gayi kya aaj function hai ?"

Arey ghade bhul gaya kya ye ladies function hai ??" Nisha asked in same as his tone

Arey toh kya hua... Meri hot si sexy si girlfriend aaj mast song pe dance karne wali hai or use main miss karunga kya ?"

Kabir pagal ho Gaya hai kya... Ye ladies function tu isme nhi aayega na chori chuphe dekhe ga "

Nhi yaar Nisha "

Haan yaar Kabir... Please na Kabir please "

Nhi... Acha ek shart me manunga..."

Manzoor hai... I promise no matter what I'll fulfill..."

Pakka promise ?" Kabir asked her

Haan pakka promise now go guest aate hi honge " Nisha said being worried




Kabir yaar mujhe bhout Darr lag raha hai... Koi uth Gaya toh ??" Nisha said slowly almost mumbling

Arey tune hi toh promise Kiya tha mujhse ab chal.." Kabir mumbled back as they made their way out of the house.

After the function, everyone decided to sleep but the house has only 3 room. So with Aman both Lakshmi and Vasu slept in other room both daddy slept and left one room where Aman's best friend slept with her husband. Nisha along with Kabir and Umesh didn't get the room so they decided to sleep on terrace. Nisha was arranging bed for them when Kabir put his demand infront of her of going to a long drive on bike with him now. Nisha was shocked but she had promised him so will fulfill anyhow.

They slept on terrace Nisha was in left side, then beside her was Umesh and beside him slept Kabir or pretend to. After making sure Umesh was in deep sleep. Nibir sneak out taking Umesh's bike kye.

Kabir chal bridge ka ek round maar ke aate hai..." Nisha said as they had started their journey.

Good idea nishu..." Kabir said and zoomed out to bridge.

Kabir our journey will start now..." Nisha said as they were edge of one side of bridge.

Yes nisha and in every journey we will travel together " Kabir replied


The End
Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res ... Maine padhlia aur sabse pehle ... 😳
Will unress soon😆😃

Maine subha hi padlia tha but time ab mila unress ka ... Sorry 😊

Are wah nisha nad kabir are finally in love ...
And kitna sweet confession tha 😳
Kabir care for her so much ki bechara aman se bhi dant khaya 😆
And actually me to ye journey ab shuru hua h😊
Sweet ending😃
Edited by poornima_15 - 7 years ago

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