NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5* - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Awesome update

Loved it very much
Thanks 4 pm
Continue soon


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
supaaar...u r making NiBir alive through your stories..
and thanks for the pm.
cont the soonish.👏👏😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

supaaar...u r making NiBir alive through your stories..

and thanks for the pm.
cont the soonish.👏👏😊


Thank you ammu 😳😳
I'll try to update soon😊
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Chapter 4


Excuse me can I see your tickets?? " Asked a tall and fair guy approaching to kabir which bring him back to earth

Both Nisha and Kabir head turned toward that guy.

And why so ??" Nisha asked crossing her hand across her chest

Because I think you are sitting on my seat "

Really I don't think so " Nisha said

Check your tickets it's my seat " the guy eyeing at nisha

Okk... Where is tickets ??" Nisha asked to idle Kabir who was doing nothing hearing their conversation, hearing her he looked at her with shocked expression

What why are you looking me like that ? where is tickets ??" She asked again

Tickets ??" He questioned himself remembering about where he kept tickets, Nisha heard him and temper raised

Don't tell me you don't have tickets with you... I'll swear kab..."Nisha stopped seeing other people around and smiled at them.

Vo actually..." Kabir started

Ye bakwas chod or tickets dhund..." Nisha cut him off and Kabir too started looking for tickets in all his pocket and wallet then Nisha asked "kahin bag me toh nhi rakha hai ?"

May be "

May be ??" Nisha's slap her head with both hands

Excuse me..." That guy who was standing tried to interfere between but both nibir shouted at him unison "you just shut up" by showing hand to him, seeing them shouting at him and tensed he adjusted himself on the front seat of nibir.

While nibir search tickets in kabir's bag. Kabir search on his bag while Nisha opened his suitcase. As soon as she opened that she stopped her hand and looked at him with 'what is this ??' Eyes. Kabir feel her gaze and looked at her.

Vo actually aaj Subha hadbadi me pack Kiya na iss liye " Kabir replied looking at his suitcase which was completely meshed. As he throwed his all cloths in it as if it is laundry basket.

Toh sameta kyun nhi hai ??" She asked being shocked

Arey kal raat reception party ke baad hum sab after party chale gaye phir raat ko 4 baje aaye..."

Subha ke..."

Haan Wahi toh sab saman iss me daal ke so gaya tha..."

Arey toh properly kar ke nhi rakh sakta tha kya ??"

Vo bhout neend aa rahi thi iss liye "

Toh teri koi responsibility nhi hai ?? Aaya bhi aise hi tha ??"

Nhi tab toh mom ne ache iron karke diye the toh main rakh diya tha abhi toh sare kapde pehen liye the na maine..." He justify himself

Hey baghwan kya hoga mera ??" Nisha cried looking up then looked at kabir and continued "main iss me haath nhi daalungi "

Okay let me find alone or lagne do time phir jab TC aa jayega na toh hume next station me utar dega... " Kabir said so he could take help from Nisha in finding ticket

Agar waisa hua na toh main tujhe chalti train se dhakka maar dungi " Nisha warned him

Chill... Please " Kabir replied in horror as he was sure Nisha can do that

Dishearteningly Nisha put her hand in that dustbin in order to search ticket, Nisha put her hand to the end of the suitcase and shouted "aahhaa"

What happened ??" All other person present there asked her including Kabir

I feel something wet " Nisha said seeing something white sticky things on her palm

Ohh shit my pizza..."

What ???" All shouted at Kabir in unison as Kabir took out his last two piece of pizza

Yeah... You know my friends are real bas***ds... They ordered pizza and paid it with my card and they didn't give me a single bite so I stolen it from them... You want ??" Asked kabir munching it and one offered to Nisha

Never " Nisha made face

Agar tum dono ka hogaya ho toh mera seat mujhe doge ?" That guy spoke finally when it becomes hard for him to tolerate nibir's drama

Ab maine kuch kha liya hai na ab mujhe yaad aa jayega tickets Kahan rakhe hai maine " said Kabir munching another slice

Tera koi accident hua tha kya ya tu paida hi pagal hua tha ?" Asked Nisha

Main paida hi pagal hua tha "

Hey Bhagwan kaisa pagal hai..."

Haan yaad aa gaya... " Kabir said and immediately touched his right leg and yes there he could feel something, he put his hand under the socks and take out ticket of them, Nisha was happy just of a second then looked at him being annoyed

Who the hell keep tickets in his socks ??" Nisha asked gittring her teeth

Me!" A simple answer received by him which shocked Nisha, her mouth remained hung open

Look mera wallet chori ho sakta hai... Koi mera Jeb se bhi nikal sakta hai but koi soch bhi nhi sakta ki main tickets apne socks me rakha honga "

Wah !! " Nisha said sarcastically and clapped for him

Thanks thanks " he said feeling shy as if he had achieved something big

Shut up you jackass... Show me the tickets " Nisha said angrily

Here " he said feeling sad and forward tickets, Nisha looked at his, then tickets, then his face as she was feeling disgusting. His suitcase condition told her that he is not a clean person, like she love everything being cleaned and clear. And he took out this tickets from his socks who know it was clean or not or he was wearing it by upside down.

Don't worry today I am wearing new pair of socks... See this in hurry I forget to cut this label " Kabir said noticing her expression and guessed it right by showing labels on socks. Nisha took sigh of relief and grab ticket from his hand

Clear this " Nisha said taking tickets from his hand

What ??"

I said clear this mess "

But you... Okay..." Kabir tried to say but receiving death glare from her he agreed and immediately started packing his luggage

So what's your number...??" Asked Nisha

Mine 7835..." The guy started

She means your seat number " Kabir said furiously eyeing at guy

Ohh sorry! My seat number is 1 "

No 1 and 2 is ours" Nisha said looking at her ticket

No it's mine "

She's saying na it's our it means it our " Kabir said putting back his luggage back it place

But I too have ticket you know "

Show me ?? " Kabir asked

Why would I will show you ?? "

Arey hum dekhenge bhi toh kaise pata karenge ?? Dikhao mujhe ticket " Nisha said

Haan ye lo " that guy immediately give her at which kabir frowned at him, Kabir was easily able to understand that guy intention

Ye lo... Ohh mister ye kal ki ticket hai... Kal agar aap aate toh ye seat aapki hoti par ye aaj humari hai..." Nisha said showing him date in ticket

Kya bakwas ye... Aise kaise ho gaya mujhe apni maa ke pass Jana hai or urgent bhi hai ye" That guy take ticket from nisha's hand in disbelief

Ab toh pata chal gaya na ye humari seat hai toh please..." Kabir showed him hand by indicating to leave

Arey bechare se galti ho gai hai or tu aise baat kar raha hai "

Toh maine use galti karwai kya ? Ise pata chal gaya na ye humari seat toh jaate yahan se bidh badhane ki koi zaroorat nhi hai " Kabir said rudely

How rude... Let him seat here "

Why so ?? I'm not going share my seat nor do I let you share "

Arey baba I'm not sharing I'm just saying till TC come he can seat here "

Na I should leave " that guy said making bechara wala face

Better " Kabir replied but Nisha feel sad for him

That guy about to get up when TC come there for checking tickets. First other girl who was sitting infront of Nisha showed her ticket

Naina sikhawat" TC said looking at name sheet then at girl

Yes..." The girl Naina replied

Then he asked nibir. Nisha was scared little as she was fearing of getting catch. If TC get little bit hint of nibir lie then they will be in great trouble a real trouble.

Mr. Umesh Gangwal ??" TC asked

Ji main " Kabir replied

Mrs. Amanpreet Gangwal ?" TC asked again

Ji...ji " Nisha replied

You guys are married ??" Both guy and Naina asked in shock

Yes any doubt ?" Kabir said circling his arm around Nisha

Then why you both don't come together ?"

She told before she had sent him to bring something " TC replied as he was still little bit scared of Nisha

Really then a good wife should pack her husband bag " that guy said

Hey what do you mean ? She's my wife not a slave and btw we had fight due to which she went to her mother house "

Hihihi not mother house... First I went there then I went on trip with my friends and you come with your friends to take me home "

Why are you saying like this kya farak padta hai" Kabir almost said slower than whisper

Maa aayegi Jaipur station me " Nisha replied in same way

Ohhkk" Kabir whispered back

Cause I love you baby " Kabir said loudly and kissed her cheeks making Nisha frozen at her place

Do you guys need any other proof ??" Kabir asked looking at everyone but Nisha was still in same position while other nodded in no

Good... Tickets ?" Kabir asked to TC, he returned him back and Kabir give it to Nisha that when his eyes fell on shocked to hell nisha.

Nisha " he whispered slowly then continued "Nisha over acting mat kar nhi toh pakade jayenge... Ye le ticket"

Nisha took tickets from his hand and kept it on her purse still being shocked while that guy talked about his matter.


To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
Tumpa12 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

superb
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm


Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Eeh I've been waiting for this one too! Loved this part haha, Nisha ka chehra dekhne layak tha 😆 but yeah please update soon cause I don't want to forget what the story is about and have to read over and over again 😛 keep writing 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superrr!!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
God 😆😆😆
Hehe
Laughed like mad after months
Awesomeeesttt update yaar👏👏👏
JOL HAS ALWAYS BEEN MY FAVOURITEST😃😃
And You have made the fun multiplied⭐️

So, yeah first about that tickets🤣
Poora saaman khol diya and very funny and imagery description of how the scenes unfold yaar👏
Kabir is so unorganized and vo pizza ew 😛😆
I would react the same as Nisha finding such a guy😉😆
And vo khaane ke baad yaad aa jayega wala😆😆
Also the unison scene! My eyes could get a picture painted all through the narration!!

And that Umesh Aman twist😳
Awww how Nisha is shocked and frozen😆🤣
This is certainly the best update I've read in JOL2👏👏
It has all NiBir Things as in the show and lot better 😆
Fun! Twist! Whispers!
And the writing style
You have made me sooo much happy today❤️ love you lotsss🤗

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