NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5* - Page 21

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res res maine padh lia😳 will try to unress by evening😊


Okk 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res res maine padh lia😳 will try to unress by evening😊

Unresss😃
A cute update anmol ... 😊

Who is that tall fair man .. jo aya ?? Jaldi intro do 😆
Phir ending was too cute 😳 biwi h 😃😳 but kapde itne gande pack kiye h 😆 aur mummy k ghar gayi thi ... But Mummy to few stations baad khud hi aane wali h 😆 waiting for the mess they created 😛

And mujhe jaldi se yr bhi janna h ki what is the past jo tumne pehle updates me bataaya ...
Update spon😃



Thank you poorni 😳😳
Tall man ka intro next update me.
Biwi Abhi hubby ki khabar legi 😆😆
Kabir toh kuch thus liya hai par Nisha Abhi bhi hungry hai toh kuch khayegi na vo bhi iss liye maa aa Rahi hai 😆
Story ka Abhi 4th chapter hi aaya hai sab bata dungi toh bachega kya... Wait sare Raaz khulega time se 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hilarious update Anmol.
Loved it.
Could not stop laughing.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Hilarious update Anmol.

Loved it.
Could not stop laughing.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM.


Thanks alot dear 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved it to the core.pls update the soonest.👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

loved it to the core.pls update the soonest.👏


I'll try to update it soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Loved it


Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: Ariya_2425

Nice update

Thanks for PM


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago




Before starting this chapter I'm really really really really sorry for late update. I was busy in completing my assignment due to which I was not able to write any updates. Soon my exams going to start but before that I will update my stories.
Now coming to this story, I'm speeding up cause this is short story. This story is not like previous one. Some real life incident that many times we had read in newspapers and some is related to my known people with whom some unfortunate incident take place in their life. So this story would be serious one but I try to bring some humour in between. Now enjoy and please like it.


Chapter 5




Cause I love you baby " Kabir said loudly and kissed her cheeks making Nisha frozen at her place

Do you guys need any other proof ??" Kabir asked looking at everyone but Nisha was still in same position while other nodded in no

Good... Tickets ?" Kabir asked to TC, he returned him back and Kabir give it to Nisha that when his eyes fell on shocked to hell nisha.

Nisha " he whispered slowly then continued "Nisha over acting mat kar nhi toh pakade jayenge... Ye le ticket"

Nisha took tickets from his hand and kept it on her purse still being shocked while that guy talked about his matter.

When the guy talked to TC in all while Nisha recover from the shock.

As soon as that guy come back to seat and announced " jab tak koi iss seat ka passenger nhi aata tab tak main yahi rahunga" he said happily eyeing at Nisha which irked Kabir.

Suniye ji " Nisha called kabir smilingly on which kabir make shocked face with wide mouth opened while other two were shocked too

Suniye na..." Nisha again called him politely after getting no response from him

Haan ??" Kabir replied still being shocked

Thoda aaiye na..." Nisha said getting up with her purse asked him to follow her and he did not knowing her intentions

Nisha bring him near gate area of train, after looking here and there, making sure no one was there. She turned to kabir still smilingly then an unexpected thing happened for kabir as Nisha punched him hard on his stomach making him scream in pain but couldn't as Nisha immediately press his mouth to prevent from any noise.

Shut up just shut up... If I hear your voice then you can't imagine what will happen with you " Nisha gritted her teeth angrily

Kabir tried to push her as her grip on his mouth is turning hard by passing every second. Nisha notice then make her grip more tighter than before " main na karate champion hun or self defence bhi aata hai mujhe so don't " Nisha said finally leaving his mouth, Kabir immediately holded his cheeks due to pain. As his strength was more than her so he was successfully freed himself from her.

Nisha are you mad ??" Kabir said holding his cheeks by one hand and other was caressing his stomach

How dare you to kiss me ??" Nisha whisper yet screamed at him

I...ittt...waaa...sss..." He fumble realising his mistake

Kya hua ?? Words nhi mil rahe??" Nisha asked crossing her arm around her chest "Kabir mark my word hum husband wife ka natak kar rahe hai asli ke nhi toh thoda distance bana ke rakh mujhse "

Look Nisha vo flow flow me ho Gaya tha " Kabir defended himself

Acha ?? " Nisha asked sarcastically the punched him right over his nose "ye bhi flow flow me ho gaya " he winced in pain but didn't scream due to fear of Nisha as she had already warned him.

Mera toh kismat hi poota hua hai... Maa bhi na... Main boli thi ye risky hoga but nhi unhe toh bas paise hi bachane the... Umesh bhaiya or Aman bhabhi ki wapas Rameswaram jane wale tickets me fake couple banke jana pad raha hai " Nisha curse her bad luck slowly

Arey yaar toh main kya karun or tujhe pata hai AC ke train ke tickets kitne mehnge hai ? Or agar Umesh jij tickets cancel karwate toh pure paise dub jaate "

Toh ?? Natak toh hume karna padega raha hai na fake couple ka or most important thing mujhe tujhe jhel na pad raha hai mujhse Nhi hoga ye... Tu aisi harkat karega toh main nhi baith sakti hun tere sath "

Nisha I'm sorry I'll remember my limit from now "

You have to otherwise I will throw you out of this train "

Why you always want to throw me out ???"

Because I hate you "

Fine... I'm sorry okay... I will not come near to you... One hand distance okay?" He asked her making one hand distance Nisha frowned and went back to her seat. After calming himself down Kabir too come back to their seat.

When he come back notice that there is no space for him as some relatives of Naina had occupied their seat. Kabir looked at them confusingly then looked at Nisha who was back to her seat near window.

Ohh Umesh... Vo actually... Aap humari seat me baith jaaiye thodi der ke liye please " naina said looking confused Kabir

Kabir never realised that Naina addressed him as he was in his thoughts where to sit. Seeing that Kabir was not responding Nisha said "tujhe bol rahi hai " she pointed at him that when realisation hit him and he said "Umesh yani main... Main jaata hun yani Umesh Jaa raha hai " Kabir said and left to sit.

Arey pagal " Nisha shouted but kabir already left, seeing this nisha's face palmed

Kya takleef hai tumhe jab Umesh Ko koi problem nahi hai ??" Naina asked angrily

Arey idiot vo gadha pucha hi nhi kahan baithna hai I'm tumhare relatives ke seat no." Nisha said frowning

Ohh shit... Main toh batana hi bhul gayi " Naina said and about to got up to go behind him but he was back with speeshily smilingly.

Vo seat number ?" Kabir asked still smiling like fool making Nisha chuckled at his expression

Vo seat number 23 ya aap 28 me bhi jaa sakte hai "

Okay... Tum chalogi ??" He first replied to Naina then asked to Nisha

Vo saman humara " Nisha said

Okay main yahi hun " he said and went to that seat number which Naina had told him

After one or half hour Nisha started feeling dizzy as last night she didn't got proper sleep and she was hungry too. But naina's relative, all ladies were busy in gossping. Finally waiting for few minutes more Nisha got up to call kabir.

Main aai... Aap thoda saman dekhiyega na " Nisha said to one of relative of Naina, then straight went to search kabir. Nisha reached to seat number which Naina told and was shocked to see scene infront. There some boys and that guy who come to claim their seat as his along with Kabir were playing cards.

Suno..." Nisha couldn't take his name so he called him by this, but they were making so noise that they didn't hear her

She this time shouted "sunooo" all turned to her except Kabir as he was looking intendly at his card until he hear Shubham (that guy who try to take nibir seat)

Arey Aman ji aap yaha ??" Shubham said hearing him Kabir mumbled confusingly "Aman?" Then turned to Nisha by looking her face she guessed something wrong with her. He run to her throwing cards and hold her.

Kya hua Nisha ?" He whispered

Acha nhi lag raha kabir... Bhout chakkar aa raha hai or bhook bhi lagi hai "

Arey toh kuch khaya kyun nhi ?? Hindustani nari ki tarah mera intezar kar rahi thi kya... Jab pati khayega tabhi kuch khaungi hmm??" Kabir teased instantly earning glare from her

Kya hua bhai " said someone from behind

Arey kuch nhi... My wifey is just missing me... I guess I should leave with her." Kabir said and holded nisha's hand and guided her to their seat. Kabir then asked naina's relative to give his seat back as they want to rest and want to have their lunch. It was lunch time already so they agreed easily and left from there to their own seat along with Naina to have lunch leaving nibir alone.

Chalo khana nikalo... Sach me bhout bhook lagi hai " Kabir said adjusting himself on seat properly

Khana ? Main ? Arey khana toh tu lane wala tha na...??" Nisha questioned him

Main kyun lane wala tha ?"

Kyunki yahi decide hua tha... Umesh bhaiya ne bola tha " nisha's reply make him realise that it was his duty to bring their lunch.

Vo Nisha actually... Main late tha... Toh..."

Toh you know what... You're in big trouble!" Nisha stated that angrily eyeing at Kabir

To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago

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