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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Thnku for the pm


Thanks dear 😊
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Chapter 7

Maa papa..." Nisha screamed happily after seeing her parents at platform, while standing at train's gate.

Kood mat jana nisha... " Ramesh joked looking at her excitement

Okay dady..." Nisha's reply make them chuckled inwardly

Soon train halted Nisha jumped out of train toward their parents, and hugged her mother tightly although she had met them just one day ago, but still. And she again have to live without them for more few months.

Arey arey... Bhart milap hogaya ho toh train me chad jayen " Ramesh said seeing both the ladies getting emotional in middle of the station. He strode toward train.

Kabir was waiting for nisha's parents to come inside. He never has been meet them, this was his first time when he would meet them. Though Kabir know them and Ramesh and Lakshmi was also aware of Kabir existence. But never come face to face. As he was waiting, when one porter come and put 2 bags and suitcase there. And that when Kabir saw Ramesh who instructed him to put luggage there. As soon as Kabir saw him he stood up and bow down to take blessings from him. Ramesh smiled at his gesture.

Arey arey... Beta gale lago tum toh..." Ramesh said holding his arms and embraced him

Aayie na... Baithiye... " Kabir said giving him place to sit after he paid to porter, in mean while Nisha and Lakshmi too come there.

Kabir smiled at Lakshmi, then bow down to touch her feet.

Kush raho beta... " Lakshmi lovingly ruffled his hair in order to bless him

Baitho na maa..." Nisha asked while making Lakshmi to sit beside her father.

Acha tu baith yahan or dhyan se sun meri baat..." Lakshmi said holding Nisha hand while pull her down beside her

Okay chalu ho jao..." Nisha replied sitting beside her while facing her and Kabir sit infront of them

Dekh... In dono bag me teri bhabhi ke liye khane ke saman hai.. toh tu or Umesh mat kha jana pura... Kuch achar hai or sabse important baat... Tu jake Sara kaam karna, vasu ji Ko kuch mat karne mat dena... Sara kaam tujhe hi karna hai... Main ye bilkul nhi sun na chahungi ki tere Jane ke Baad Vasu ji ne koi kaam kiya... "

Ji maa theek hai mere jaane ke Baad aunty koi kaam nhi karengi "

Haan maine kuch sweater banaye hai... Dhyan se apni bhabhi Ko Dena or usne kuch saman mangawaye the vo bhi hai iss suitcase me toh dhyan rahe..."

Haan maa don't worry..."

Agar tum dono ka hogaya ho toh train chutne se pehle Apne damad se mil lo " Ramesh told to Lakshmi

Damad ???" Nisha and Lakshmi shouted together

Or nhi toh kya ?" Ramesh pointed at Kabir, kabir's eyes widened seeing this so as nisha's she don't know how to react, hearing damad word for someone made her feel different

Tum bhi na Ramesh..." Lakshmi said

Kaise ho beta or tumhare mummy Papa kaise hai ?" Lakshmi said before kabir could say anything Ramesh started

Mujse toh kabhi mere haal ke baare me nhi pucha par samndhi ji ki badi padi hai " Ramesh hump making Nisha laughed softly
Shut up... Tum bolo na beta..."

Sab theek hai aunty... Aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?"

Theek hi hai beta..." She replied

Guys I think train chutne ka time ho Raha hai aap dono neeche jaao " Nisha alerted them

Arey jaldi kya hai..." Ramesh said

Nhi uncle aapko neeche abhi chale jaana chahiye... Chalti train me chadna or utarna dono dangerous hai " Kabir said making Nisha chuckled and her expression was 'look who's talking'

Haan sahi keh Raha hai... Chalo neeche " Lakshmi said pulling Ramesh down

Nisha too went with them, while Kabir adjust 3 new luggage. After a while train left nisha's parents at Jaipur station. Nisha had tear in her eyes as train left to station or her parents.

Before she could go back to her sit she wash her face, while washing her face her eyes landed on something which she immediately noted down. Then went back to her seat, only to meet eager Kabir who was waiting for her.

Bapre aaj toh kuch log itna gyan de rahe the..." Nisha said sarcastically

Arey main sach bol raha tha or tune hi toh mujhe samjhya " Kabir replied

Ohh meri baaton Ko itna seriously leta hai tu?" Her sarcasm didn't stop

Tu jo bol rahi hai main sunta toh hun..."

Bada aaya..." Nisha rolled her eyes at him.

In mean while Naina come back to her seat, as she went to her family for dinner and shubam had adjusted in other seat, all the 5 seat near nibir was empty.

Nisha too took out dinner for them, Nisha was eating home food after long time she was savoring every bite of it and moaning too after each bite which make Kabir mesmerized by her and Naina chuckled.
At that time same guy shiva come to them and stare at Nisha, he was all assumed by her beauty. Naina looked at his direction, while Nisha also opened her eyes and got glimpses of shiva standing there with something in his hand. Seeing Nisha looking at him he said to kabir

Umesh ye mata ka parsad hai..." While approaching to Kabir, Kabir didn't turned first but after Nisha gesture him then he turned

Ohh great..." Kabir said forward his hand to take it

Aap bhi lijiye bhabhiji " he said and give it to Nisha also

Stoppp..." Nisha shouted holding kabir's hand but it's too late Kabir had eaten half of it, while shiva too take back some steps

Kya hua ?" Kabir asked her

Arey tum Abhi khana kha rahe the na... Jhoota hai hath... Use Prasad aise nhi karte abhi rakh do yaha plate me khane ke Baad pani pina phir Lena Prasad..." Nisha said cautiously, she was scared but she don't want to come in light also so she given this excuse. Which convinced both the guys.
Kabir nodded in yes and put it on his plate while Nisha also did the same on her paper plate. Shiva also give Prasad to Naina also.



Kabir I know you'll think I'm over reacting but please keep this with you... In case of emergency use this " Nisha told to Kabir as light was turned off, Kabir had lied down on his middle berth, Nisha was standing beside him and giving him pepper spray.

Nisha... Why are feeling like this..??" Kabir as pulled out his hand out of quilt

Please Kabir don't argue "

Fine... When you had decided everything then who am I to refuse you..." Kabir said putting pepper spray on his pocket

Okay good night " Nisha smiled little

Okay... Good night and dream about me..."

Do thappad khich ke marungi na "

Haan ab hui na baat " Kabir said laughing hard

Nisha lied down to her berth but uneasiness still hadn't left her. She intelligently thrown that Prasad with paper plate giving excuse to Kabir that she forget about it. As she knows the motive behind shiva by giving everyone parsad. She can't point at them on the basis of her doubt only, may be he was genuine. May be but not sure. So she need to be cautious about everything, she had even thought about a plan to protect herself from him. For which she had kept her phone with her secretly, first thing he'll going to attack on her phone so she could not to contact anyone. She had to keep her phone secretly.
She was thinking place where she can hide it, in suit which she was wearing don't have any pocket also. Then she remembered about kabir which bring small smile on her face and keep her mobile in her socks remembering how Kabir had hide his wallet in socks.


To be continued...


Okay here the update. I know it is not at all interesting. But this story is serious type.
Another thing I want to share that, this story plot was different but after writing some parts of EMAET I realised that this both story plot will be same so I'm changing this story. Hope you all bear it.

Now, I'll try my best to give update every week, one update each week but no promises, if I got busy then it difficult to write updates but I will try to give updates every week.



Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

loved it
update soon
thnx for pm


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Anmol thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it Anmol
Awesome update
I love Nisha parents ... They were too cute
They really teased Narbir well 😆
Hmmm so Shiva had some plans
Let's see how every thing settles
Nisha too was uneasy
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update.

Loved it.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Anmol thanks for the PM dear.


Thanks Ananya 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Anmol

Awesome update
I love Nisha parents ... They were too cute
They really teased Narbir well 😆
Hmmm so Shiva had some plans
Let's see how every thing settles
Nisha too was uneasy
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thanks Goldie 😃
Nisha's parents were always chilled out..

Nisha is scared of shiva and his intention so that's why she was feeling uneasiness
I'll try to update soon

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